That Person in the Arena

The preface does not match the postscript. This book seems to be written by two people, especially the emotional line. It's like the three good students in the last semester fell in love in the next semester, and it's still sadomasochism. . . 😤

Chapter 50 was unbearable, the profile descriptions were artificial, and the positive characters couldn't stand up. On the one hand, I want to write about chivalry, ancient feelings, bravery and strategy, but on the other hand, I also laugh and curse, pretending to be humorous, and lacking logic. So be it.

A group with poor writing skills and messed up characters.

I saw a fast-charging place and I really couldn't bear to eat it. When I was in that county, I wrote it very well, but then it was a mess, very pretentious, very pretentious, and always used all kinds of fallacies to establish myself as a gentleman. It was very disgusting. Not only that, the focus of the plot changes from here to there, but there are too many poems used in this book. It might be better to reduce them appropriately.

In fact, the writing is okay, the characters are very distinct, but it is getting more and more hurt. Old people can't stand this kind of beauty and father, and they can't stand it anymore.

，，，，，， But it's a pity, my condolences The author's soul of angry youth suddenly burned, and suddenly a brainless character appeared, and there was more than one embarrassing character, so one or two periods of tolerance can be enough. Just think that the old bookworm who is sincere for the plot is invulnerable and his flaws cannot be concealed. However, the main character setting is a bit awkward. The key is that the author has already destroyed the setting and does not have various hard descriptions that can make or break the protagonist's creation. Where does a gentleman like jade come from, and where does a young master come from without a pair. Moreover, the surrounding supporting characters also recognized it, and some of the love seemed inexplicable. The behavior is not in line with the unparalleled master's behavior, and the hard description makes it uncomfortable. The key is that the description is repeated and emphasized to make you continue to feel uncomfortable. The character design depends on the words and deeds of the protagonist rather than the narration. The protagonist can give people the impression that he can be a scholar, a proud man, and a great man who serves the country and the people, but cannot be a gentleman and an unparalleled man. He is an angry youth, not a prince, and has no bookish atmosphere. Is there any difference? Try using Zhang Liang from Qin Shi Mingyue as the narration and then the protagonist. As a time-traveler, I have no problem relying on the author to impose my own B-Qi.          I suggest you just read it as a cool article, don't read the narration and repeat the description. This article passed the writing, but I felt awkward, so I gave up the book I just felt it was a pity to write this and let the author take a look.

I voted for recommendations and wrote book reviews after reading the whole book. Unknowingly, I have been reading novels for more than ten years. From Tomb of the Gods, Douluo Dalu, Zhetian, etc. To now, I can't even remember how many novels I have read. How can I put it, this book by the author has made me feel refreshed. The rivers and lakes are still the same rivers and lakes, with the ebb and flow of the protagonists changing. The rivers and lakes are far away and peach trees are hard to find. Gu Qingci or Gu Qingshi, even though they are extremely talented, failed to protect the people they love. Although it is sad, if everything goes well, what about the rivers and lakes?

The writing is very good, but there is still room for improvement. I suggest the author read Feng Qiyue's book, which will definitely give you some inspiration. I wish the author better and better as he writes.

This is the best book I have read in three years, but I believe the author can continue writing, and whether the author can make more updates 😁

I like Gu Qingci's gentleness (the sultry personality is revealed!) I like Qin Keqing's domineering husband-guarding I like Liu Yiqing's casualness I like it.... I can't stop reading it.... Anyway, I love watching it! I just love watching it! 😌😌😌😌 We are going to force the author to wear women's clothing!

I just want to say one thing: I can understand the system documentation and task dispatching. But they are erased, obliterated, and punished at every turn. I just want to ask if it is necessary? Would you let the protagonist you cultivated be punished as a waste, or even killed by pig's feet? Some people know it's impossible, so why bother. The system is just an auxiliary, and there is a way to make the protagonist super strong. It's just a plug-in. Not to mention the plug-in function, it should weaken his sense of existence and focus on the plot of the novel. As a result, this plug-in is always trying to mess with you, trying to mess with you, reminding readers again and again that this plug-in is very bad. Is it okay to kill a pig's trotter? Are you afraid? Bland...

As I was reading, I suddenly remembered that the article said that the northern tribes invaded in winter because they had no food. It seems that the author has not read many history books. If you look at the history books, you should know that the northern tribes basically will not invade in winter. On the contrary, winter is a good time for the southern people to make the Northern Expedition. It was in winter that Li Jing defeated the enemy.

I gave up today. Reading a few thousand words in one day is not enough to worry about! Come back and see when it will be finished.

I have a suggestion. Every time the characters in the book say that Gu Qingci said something, what did Gu Qingci say? In fact, as a reader, I didn't see what Gu Qingci said, and Gu Qingci felt bitter. In fact, Baobao never said it! It just feels very abrupt. When did you say it? Why didn't I read it? It just feels like it was forcibly pulled in. I hope it can be optimized, but the plot is not mentioned. Although I have seen many shadows and names of other novels, this is indeed original. The author has the intention. It is not easy for the first time. I am also willing to accompany the author to make progress slowly, support 😁!

I hate this Qing Yi, I don't even know how to write this, so I'm leaving.

The first time I pursued a book, I had a headache!

See Chapter 14: Recruiting Two Thousand Yamen. Is this the rhythm of preparing for rebellion?

Let's put aside whether this book is good or not. The problem is that the author writes about gold martial arts. Yang Guo's realm of sword use is wrong. The realm of Dugu Nine Swords is just a slap in the face. I think this kind of attitude in writing a book is very irresponsible. If you want to borrow something from others, do your homework well, otherwise don't borrow it. A classic novel must withstand scrutiny and be written with a correct attitude. Without this kind of attitude, and without writing a novel with the idea of ​​writing a classic, it will definitely not be much better.

Great book! ! ! ! I never subscribe to read books, so I insist on subscribing to read this book! ! ! Trouble ➕ You're a genius! Thank you for being cummed! If you have more monthly tickets, we will give them to you.

This is the first book I won in the Qidian Awards

Does the author know what the status of a county magistrate with a Jinshi background was in ancient times? A few small forces dare to kill at will?

Am I the only one who finds it toxic? Why do so many people read such a poisonous book? ?

Poison, two thousand government officials, how can you give them salary? Do you really think there are many county soldiers? Do you really have no idea about two thousand people in ancient times?

Someone actually liked this book? ? ? ? A fight can last ten chapters, but the key is talking about it for nine and a half chapters, and then the fight can't be fully completed in the first half of the chapter. Someone actually said yes? ? ? ?

After reading more than ten chapters, I couldn't bear it anymore and died from the poison.

I just read Chapter 30 and found a problem. When the government encounters the gang forces, they have to bow their heads. So the question is, why don't the gang forces directly become the emperor?

Let's just talk about the first one. A county magistrate was assassinated while he was in office. Author, do you know the consequences of this?

Let's send more. There are so few posts in book circles that are really discouraging. I almost missed this book at first. I was talking, and then I looked at them, and then I felt that they were to my liking.

In the early stages of this book, it was written that the protagonist was like an immortal, who would not shun life or death for morality, regardless of fame and fortune. To put it bluntly, he was almost molded to the sky. Why did he suddenly be pushed into the mud now (Su Beisheng is a good friend, and exposing him may bring trouble to himself, his friends and family, and remaining silent can also cost him favors and some benefits). In this sentence, a person can't help himself in the world, haha...

Let me tell you my feelings: After reading Chapter 126, I really couldn't stand it anymore. There are not many poisonous points. The first routine is that you don't kill those who should be killed, and you have to kill those who shouldn't because of enmity. The second one is really long-winded, and I skipped reading it. The third one is decisive on the one hand, indecisive on the other, cold-blooded, and sometimes sentimental. The characterization of this character is very confusing, and it feels like seeing a psychopath.