Wait for Me to Regain My Old Mountains and Rivers

I still like to read counselor novels. The writing of this book is good, but the main plot is a bit broken. I took a detour and wrote about Master Ye. I guess the following is about the protagonist discovering the truth about the land gods and saving the world.

After reading Chapter 46, I can't stand it anymore: 1. Tanhualang, third place in the imperial examination! Both the court and the rebels regarded him as trash. Because there was an assassin in the guest room where Tan Hwa Lang lived, and he was not even given a chance to appeal. He immediately ordered Tan Hwa Lang to be executed three days later. The emperor has never thought about what the teacher who can teach Tanhua Lang would think about this matter, what Tanhua's fellow students would think about it, what Tanhua's previous classmates would think about it, what his teacher's relatives and friends would think about it, and what the entire imperial bureaucracy would think about it. Do you really think that the emperor can do whatever he wants? As for the rebels, they treated the third place in the imperial examination almost like a mentally retarded child, and the leader turned out to be a real princess. 2. When Tan Mansion is a guest, men and women wander around in the yard. Let's not talk about the basic vigilance of the servants. It can always be done by sending someone to guide them. 3. Qingyun Sect, I really don't understand why the protagonist wants to go to Qingyun Sect and become an elder inexplicably. The so-called reason is so far-fetched. Not only does the supporting character lose his wits, but the protagonist also becomes stupid and sweet.

Deliberately creating several rather unpleasant characters, and using such disgusting characters to disgust the protagonist to advance the plot will sooner or later fail.

One moment, the protagonist is written as a counselor, one moment the combat power index is super high, one moment it is a Qi practitioner, one moment it is a Confucianism cultivator, one moment it is a swordsmanship cultivator, and then suddenly a fellow sect brother appears as a rival, one moment a dynasty fights for hegemony, one moment a sect fights, and one moment it becomes a world, what on earth is the protagonist going to do, just look for him as a counselor. Let's conquer the world with a country. If you are a god or have the upper limit of combat power, just level up and fight monsters honestly. The princess and the senior brothers will kill you. At worst, they will flip the table. That princess is still from the previous dynasty. What are you afraid of? What about this dynasty? It is the Princess Fu Guo who always looks for the scene. All the officials in this dynasty are dead? How did you catch it in the first place?

What do you want to write about in this book? At first I thought I was going to fight for hegemony and that I would be a talented person, but in the end I joined the sect in a daze. It's not just a break, but it's really joining, and there's also a plot of infighting within the sect. The main plot of your plot is Zhulu Tianxia. Is this preparing to develop the Qingyun Sect into a court? Or will you lead the sect and find someone to help you after a few hundred chapters? Also, if your writing skills are not good enough, don't write about strategizing. It's very dramatic.

There are too many brother systems. I see that now you have sword cultivation, talisman cultivation and Confucian supernatural powers. To be honest, brother, what you wrote is a bit greedy. There are too many and it is too complicated.

Hey~ Sister Yue'er is on the shelves. The boss has arranged it. See you at the hotel tonight~ 😏😏😏

If the author's writing skills are not the best, don't forcefully write about strategies and the like. There should be a little bit of logic. They are all bosses who look like novices at first glance. It's embarrassing.

Since I read the daily introduction novels, I haven't found one that can survive. I guess that most of you can't survive it. Why do you recommend the daily introduction? Because these novels all have unique characteristics and attractive beginnings. Why are you abandoned by everyone? Because the biggest difference between these novels and those popular novels is that logical contradictions will always make you fall out of the atmosphere of the novel, which is fatal. Although the novels of great masters also have these problems, there are fewer of them! When writing a novel, you must write smoother and smoother as you write. You cannot leave too many bumps and bruises, making it unbearable.

The layout is too small, and I want to portray the protagonist but I can't write the feeling. I can't see the unparalleled son in the world, strategizing, and the decisive victory thousands of miles away. Let's talk about a mountain with a hundred thousand mountains, and you only stay in one sect.

This is a bit embarrassing to write. Since you want to write about the strategist and the talented Wang Zuo, why did you join the Qingyun Sect, which is considered a weak hidden sect? They don't even have the capital to change the pattern of Shiwandashan. Just like the Guigu faction in the bright moon of the Qin Dynasty defeated the powerful Qin State and defeated the weak country that was famous for its swordsmanship instead of its strategy. Didn't the Qingyun Sect see that there was a place that could swallow a hundred thousand mountains? Do you want the protagonist to develop slowly? Also, your own golden finger is to trigger things in order to get rewards. However, you yourself are like a salted fish floating in the wind. You don't feel indifferent, but stupid. . I don't have the capital to settle down, so I don't want to become stronger or hide it. Mr. Qi serves that woman and threatens one or two. In the mountains of 100,000 people, you will be surrounded and suppressed. Can you escape?

Is the author a woman? Isn't it possible for a woman to write such a Qiong Yao-style plot? 🙂

I feel like, when the pig's feet are used, someone will catch them, and when others use the moves, they will kill them all. I feel that the pig's feet are so frustrating.

Because it is a major change, there will be problems with the system layout. If you see chapters that are not connected, please refresh or delete the book and add it to the bookshelf!

He deliberately highlighted his skills as a counselor, but it was too obvious. His senior brother answered the whole question, and he didn't notice that the pig's feet were hairy. He actually had a system. At present, it doesn't feel awkward to do anything about the pig's feet!

How can I put it this way? I don't think pig trotters are the kind of people with high IQs.

Qin Qingluo in the first few chapters is so disgusting. He hasn't even become an emperor yet, and he's like this? Do you really look down on the male protagonist, an ordinary mortal? The male protagonist was imprisoned by you, shouldn't he be rescued easily? Or should we say that those who cultivate immortality should despise mortal life? What's the difference between this and those demons who just rely on their cultivation to kill people and search for their souls?

The author of this book is enjoying himself, so many readers feel very embarrassed. I just don't know if the author will be embarrassed if he reads what he wrote before every few days. Anyway, I often do this when writing. I feel very good when I write it, and it's hard to finish reading it after a few days 😢

The content is seriously inconsistent with the title and introduction of the book, which is a typical case of trying to sell sheep over dogs.

This plot should be called The Biography of the Master of the Night

Every character in the book is trying hard to pretend to be sexy, @Unfortunately, everyone pretends to be stupid

It's really a daily guide, why do Qidian recommend this kind of novel?

Why are the introductions to books all taken for granted? ? ? ! ! !

The background layout is quite grand, but the details make it look like the main character, and is very stingy. This stinginess is not about the people, but the layout.

You are not suitable for writing a book, and you have no feeling after reading it.

After many days, I came to see the author again. There was no update. He really left the world.

Has the author entered the palace?

There are too many disgusting plots. The protagonist has been led by the nose, suppressed, and plotted against others. Some of the plots are too forceful and bloody. There are some routines that you will basically understand after writing them. Once you write the first chapter, you will know what the routine will be in the next 78 chapters. It just makes readers look like fools. There are many things that the protagonist clearly doesn't want to do, but the author forced it to be strong. To be honest, it's even more rubbish than some white-collar articles. A coincidence for the sake of coincidence.

There are typos in the introduction, don't tell the author.

It was pretty good at first, but it fell apart after about forty chapters.