Tinder in Strange Land: Survival Story of Good Luck Community

How should I put it? This is not the protagonist of an ordinary cool novel, but he is a pretty normal person. It's difficult.

After reading Chapter 15, I understood that the author wanted to write about the mentality of an ordinary person, but the writing was a bit too detailed. I can't say that your word count is bad, but it's too detailed. I've reached chapter 15 and there's not even a climax. It's not good for it to be too ordinary. Retired...

These 68 chapters are all the first day, and the first day is not over yet. Cow, cow. Other books have 1,000 chapters, but you only have enough for the protagonist to survive for 10 days?

To put it simply, it's not enough fun. I first chose the stars and got the Luban technique. Then, I didn't feel any enhancement, especially the part where I encountered the bear. It was very frustrating. I felt like I was just trying to save my life by being clever. But there are too many such ordinary people in their lives. They have no characteristics or strengths, and they feel too bland. The plot is also too... Emm, mediocre? At present, the overall feeling is that it is tasteless, tasteless to eat, and a pity to discard.

The hamster player expressed his doubts about whether he could pick up the exploded items.

It's 180 fucking chapters. Not even a fucking month has passed in the world of the novel. Are you planning to write a novel like Conan for 15 years, but only one year has passed in the world of the novel? 🤭🤭🤭🤭

The description of the battle is too overwhelming, it feels like grinding a 60 million boss with 200 damage.

The summary of this book is that dogs fight against human power👣

Write! His grandma! Why not write! Don't write it, right? ! If you don't write it, I won't be able to read it if you don't write it! Your tickets and coins are gone! Ah ha ha ha ha, my mission is completed!

It's quite beautiful, but there are too few, author gkd

This book is very well written. It is considered a good book that combines weirdness with monster fighting and upgrading. However, I personally feel that some of the recent chapters are a bit loopy. I feel that the pig's feet are completely removed from the novice area with the help of the bear. Then I encounter an apple with a high probability of death. I don't know what the "?" The bear goes on an adventure. After all, the protagonist's own strength is too weak now. If something goes wrong with the bear, he will give up his martial arts. Later, he eats an apple and upgrades to fight monsters to prove that this decision is useful. In the plot after the bear upgrades, normally the pig's feet sees that the bear's attributes have overwhelmed the opponent, but takes the bear to get temporary buffs. Normally, this is not considered under normal logic, and then the monsters suddenly explode to prove that it is right to get the buffs. From these two things, it can be seen that the story is indeed less coherent. Many events that occur have little to do with the previous ones. It feels like the protagonist is arranged to make a decision first, and then some plot is imposed to show that the decision is right.

Developing weapons in the face of war, it's a miracle that you don't die

How many people are reading this book? It's obviously quite good, but why do I always get to the latest chapters by the first few?

It's a very good book. Although it feels like a watery global game article at the beginning, it actually has its own logical system. And the writing is also very good

I feel that the content is a bit confusing, and the description of combat power is unclear.

The author really made the point. As a reader, let me express my own opinions. When I first saw the recommended new book on the home page, I thought it was boring, but after reading dozens of chapters, I felt that the background was very huge. Although the author's writing style is not outstanding, the article is very bland, and the fighting part feels average, the author's imagination is really big, such as the dungeon, the world outside the window, the world outside the door, and the world above the lamp. These settings are really wonderful. It is better than other other world copy system flow novels. However, I found a big problem later on. The supporting characters were poorly portrayed. The female characters were not as well portrayed as Xiong. They had no distinctive characteristics at all. The protagonist's interactions with them felt like they were just filling in the number of words. Later, I will open the world of Sword Girl and the World of Three Kingdoms. The main line advancement is almost non-existent. You must understand that this is a systematic game-like world. The world view is already huge enough. There are a lot of pitfalls left unfilled. I am playing in the games in this game world. Moreover, the protagonist has a golden finger. In addition to some of the golden fingers brought at the beginning, It basically didn't appear later. It's better to spend more time to improve the main world view and make the characteristics of the main supporting characters more distinct. In addition, many stories can happen between the community owners, and there are also conflicts between the Eden City nobles and the community owners. I can only say that the author's outline is not quite right. The main plot is not advanced and a bunch of branch plots are developed inexplicably. I really feel sorry for this book.

This book is okay. I don't think it has any harmful qualities. The author writes well and has potential.

It's mainly a matter of description. I felt like it was a narration several times, and it didn't feel like a story. It was just a bit awkward anyway

I'm always thinking about what your barmaid is doing, and I'm speechless.

Dungeon themes are still very interesting as long as they are not produced by studios

The first part is good, but the second part of the plot is too shabby. A lot of inexplicable settings are written all at once. The dungeons are not explored anymore. I just write whatever comes to my mind. The second part of the plot is also too bland. It doesn't require the male protagonist to show off or anything. It's just too bland. It doesn't matter if it's more detailed. If you just write a lot at once, you have no desire to continue reading.

Alas, it's a pity. I think the best character in this book is the bear. I was very impressed. It's a pity that the author cut it.

This book is also called Bear and His Little Brother

The writing is quite good, keep it up, I will keep reading Come on! !

? ? ? ? ? Why is it a eunuch?

It was originally a very good adventure article, good guy, it became a battle for hegemony after writing it (#ﾟДﾟ)

The slow pace is really interesting, but it's really not suitable for catching up on updates every day... It's better to save it for a while and read it.

The protagonist disagrees with what he does. The protagonist himself only relies on external forces (bears) to survive, so why should he make the first move🐑? It's okay to share information, but is it necessary to start a war of words? Believe it or not, it's all about competition. It's enough to share information to reduce mortality. Why do we need to share martial arts secrets? Waiting for others to beat themselves to death? Or hope that someone else can teach you? Funny, this is lower than the odds of winning the lottery. Saving the world and being a saint at the same time, how great!

To be honest, few people write in such detail. I quite like it.

If I turn on the automatic subscription and keep reading, I will finish the book? It's only 58 chapters and the book is finished?