My Girlfriend Is in Xianxia

If there hadn't been a big twist, a certain plot, or a certain incident that made Shu Xiu wake up, the author would have had no choice but to write her off or downplay it because the readers were disgusted, or the plot would have collapsed and the author could only write her as a villain. I hope they don't end up like Tianshan Tonglao and Li Qiushui. Author, please! 🙏🙏🙏

Ahem, Shennong is here to wish everyone a happy new year. After reading seventy chapters, I feel that the subject matter is still very good. For example, there is Han Tingting in real life. You don't need to guess the following content to know that it is very interesting. Generally speaking, I feel that there is no big poisonous pit. However, the plot does not seem to be ordinary exciting. There will be an unexpected and exciting content every ten chapters, but some of the details of the characters feel that they are well described. Small penetration does not count as penetration, small poison does not count as poison, show them to me, and the antibodies will increase!

This is written with a cowardly male protagonist and an awkward female protagonist. I felt uncomfortable reading it, but recently I continued reading it even though I ran out of books. When I saw the second female protagonist kissing the male protagonist, my heart broke

I'm speechless. Is this male protagonist a stick? My blood pressure was so high when I watched it. The more I watched it, the more frustrated I became. I am most annoyed by this kind of indecisive sadomasochistic male protagonist! If you want to write about sadomasochism, go to a female channel! Alas~ I'm going to take antihypertensive medicine!

Actually, I think it's okay to have two female protagonists

Why didn't you think about making money? I got angry when I saw the hero looking like he had no money. I also wanted to share some with my parents. I was speechless when I saw this.

If you see typos, you can mark them in the paragraph. I will correct them as soon as I see them.

If you don't add the single heroine of Shu embroidery, it's fine. But when you write this Shu embroidery, the single heroine is already the biggest poisonous point.

Looking at it from another perspective, Shu embroidery has distinct characters and is more impressive than the male and female protagonists.

It's okay to start, now. This plot is a bit inexplicable, the twist is too harsh, and he becomes what others call his fiancé. The author is probably a girl.

I think it's better to have more female protagonists 😌

I have something to do this afternoon, so I may not be able to update until tonight. Sorry.

Let's go to the factory 🙂

The communication between your heroine and that Shu Xiu is really a good female channel.

Hurry up and have a single heroine. If there are two heroines, how will these two girls get along? It looks so awkward

I hope the author will finish Shu Embroidery as soon as possible. I don't know why. Ever since I was a child, I have always jumped as much as possible when seeing plots like this. It's really uncomfortable and I really want to give up the book. It's better to write less about such plots.

Let's just say that these chapters 3 to 40 are somewhat poisonous.

Seriously, this world line is too poisonous. Isn't this a cross between two worlds? As for spending so many chapters writing about martial arts? Are you afraid that you have forgotten it in this world?

Never have two heroines, it would be too bloody. It's so cliché, I'd rather you kill either of them. I also don't want to watch a bloody double heroine.

Don't be a minotaur. This thing will not only affect the popularity of this book, but also affect the popularity of future books.

Keep it first, watch the pair, and discard the single one

Chapter 79 has made some detailed changes, because this is an important turning point in the heroine's state of mind. I saw that many people said it was a bit sudden, so I wrote it more clearly.

The front is still pretty good. It was pretty good, why did it end so badly?

I just saw a heroine belonging to Gu Qinghan, and here comes Ning Hongye. . I'm looking forward to Cui Sanniang and Canaan

I've opened a new book, everyone... This one may be going to the palace, it's too poisonous.

If you write it like this, no one will read the middle chapters. Others will jump directly to saving the heroine. You can't understand the first suppression and then the expansion. If you keep being suppressed, how can others read the book well?

Will it be suppressed first and then promoted? It made me stay up all night reading this book and I had no intention of sleeping. I originally wanted to read a relaxing love novel, so why did you do it for me? You didn't give it to others to suppress it two or three times, right? Wouldn't you like to raise your voice and then suppress it?

Now that I haven't rescued the heroine, I have no intention of sleeping. How about you quickly write the protagonist to restore his previous life's cultivation and kill everything in an instant and then be sweet? It's unlucky. In such a plot, the portrayal is very good in the front, but later on, you have to follow the same old path to trick others.

The latter part is indeed quite vicious, and I can't stand it anymore. For the first time, I feel that the author has cut it well.

Although I haven't read it, it can be seen from the comment area that the author's writing skills are still good, but there is something wrong with the plot arrangement, otherwise the brother downstairs named Mo Ruodi would not have a mental breakdown.