Cultivation of Immortality Begins with the Lu Family

What does the protagonist do with the puppet? It's of no use to me. It's better to exchange for alchemy inheritance or experience than this thing. Moreover, it looks like I know a little bit about anything when doing miscellaneous things. I'm not good at anything. I don't have any outstanding advantages and it looks mediocre. If I have a system and it looks mediocre in the eyes of readers, I'm not good at it.

I hope you don't keep books. It's really difficult to write without interactive authors. I also hope that everyone can turn to the last chapter to catch up with the latest and visible data on investment, which can best motivate the author.

The Battle of Three Families

I haven't watched it, but I have a question. Since the protagonist has a system, why did the author write a family story? Are you using plug-ins to support your family? What's the purpose? To what extent can a family's prosperity be comparable to the benefits brought by cheats? How did the author deal with this problem?

No wonder the results of this book are not good. When you see a loser practicing Qi level alchemy master, you kneel down on the pole and worship him. Then you might as well join the sect. , The family that Mao didn't even follow still wants to learn everything, they haven't understood this yet, they have to learn that, in addition to kung fu, they also major in spells and swordsmanship, and then there are formations to learn, and now they have to find a loser to kneel down and learn alchemy. The writing style is not fluent and often contradicts and misses the point. It has no purpose and is written purely to make up the number of words. It is a typical use-ism, and it is a piece of stuff. How can this book get good results?

The inner demons set in the early stage are a bit deliberate. When I am in a good mood, even if a thousand people accuse me, no matter how many murders and arson I do, my heart is at peace. Where can the inner demons come from?

Nowadays, writing about puppets and clones is just bad writing. Write more simple and unpretentious efforts to add proficiency, instead of trying to write random things.

After reading the reviews, it seems that this book is a bit bad, but now I read Chapter 53, which is even worse. There is no seniority in the name of this family. That is to say, everyone has a two-character name before the foundation is established, one is Lu, followed by any name. Once the foundation is established, a Xuan will be added, which is Lu Xuan or something. This makes me a little confused. Is this the case in reality? For example, my great-grandfather is called Lu Xuanyuan, my uncle is called Lu Xuanwu, and my grandson is called Lu Xuanping. If I didn't pay attention, I would have thought that we were of the same generation, which confused me.

The author has deleted all the comments, which will affect his grades.

Everything you do belongs to Zhuge Wuhou and Luban. It looks too embarrassing. You don't need to explain it. Just use it. It's really too embarrassing.

Qidian basically relies on fans pushing each book one by one. I suggest you have more words in each book. Also, if you want to work, I suggest you work part-time. It only takes a few minutes to update one chapter a day, or two chapters, or you can use it to practice writing. The more people you write, the more people you write. This is how you accumulate popularity book by book.

Author: Are you taught this math by a physical education teacher? You have used up 5,700 of your 10,000 and are left with 5,300. Use a computer to calculate how much it is.

This book is too tiring to read. .

Follow the heretical path, become a mortal, and be the protagonist of Sun Tzu. Ordinary

Dragon set, skills, moves, and item collection building.

Author: I feel like your book lacks some vitality

Nowadays, writing about puppets in cultivating immortality is basically out of date. There is no market. There are not many people who like to read about puppets in cultivating immortality. The first impression given to people is that the protagonist is just a deviant and uses some unsavory methods.

It's well written. Check out "Yun Ling Xian Road", it's pretty good too.

You can obviously make a spell turret but don't take it. It's a waste to double the mana recovery and don't take the spell turret route.

The setting of building foundation and adding profoundness is a bit bad. The relationship between the characters seems too confusing

It's all decided, don't give up, your results will be good

In fact, this data should be cut after the three-month subsistence allowance is finished, and I should write this book instead.

I would like to ask at what age did Pigfoot start traveling through time?

Is this book a fanfic of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality?

Borrowing treasures to promote books: gathering people to become immortals

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

Why is it a system again? Why write a system? Don't you feel that a person who relies on the system to get things done feels like the protagonist is being controlled?

Now that I have read Chapter 23, can the author explain what levels the first-, second-, and third-level monsters correspond to? It looks like a mess and nothing corresponds to it. Two second-grade spiritual veins are not enough for two foundation-building monks to practice. It's annoying.

I would like to advise the author not to use a system if he writes about family in his next book.