
Becoming the Tsuchikage in the Naruto World
到火影世界当土影
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.4M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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635Chapters
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Doesn't the protagonist have any signature ninjutsu? There is no systematic way of fighting. What's more, one of the five great ninja villages in the ninja world can't satisfy a ninja's training? The protagonist's mental talent is completely useless, and he is still lacking in physical talent. How to rise? It can be said that the protagonist at the beginning has three chakra attributes: water, earth, and yin. The yin attribute is the best, but the result is directly scrapped. I didn't say which one is better, water or earth. But in the Iwa Ninja Village, I mainly develop the water attribute, and the earth attribute is used as a auxiliary. I don't understand it at all. Also, the protagonist has always emphasized that his physical fitness is not good, and it is not that he has not improved in practice. He has indeed spent several years practicing sword skills. Isn't it delicious to learn a few earth escape ninjutsu in the past few years? In the entire ninja world, which ninja village can match the Iwa ninja village in the development of earth attributes. To sum up, I don't know what the protagonist practices. He is completely like a passerby, unable to find the highlights of his practice.
Isn't the so-called Water Line Jutsu, Water Pressure Line, the super bankrupt version of the Second Hokage's Water Breaking Wave Jutsu?
After reading Chapter 10, I started talking about how strong the protagonist's mental strength is, how gifted and gifted he is, and then the chakra is several times worse than his peers. Are you a genius or a loser? I couldn't finish writing about physical constitution. I was so weak at the beginning. The utilization rate of the three golden chapters was 0.
A rare high-quality fanfic, but it seems that the weasel is too highly praised. The weasel's ninja quality is very advanced, but it is not worthy of being called a god. It is like a lowly animal Now many people can see the nature of the weasel clearly, which is also the contradiction set before and after Naruto. Kishimoto wants to give the weasel everything good, but the result is completely different A good meal is mixed with a grain of rat feces, which is uncomfortable It is recommended to remove the word "god"
Is it really necessary to keep the name? This will only restrict development and allow the daimyo to abdicate. The aristocratic class can be eliminated for better development. As for whether you are willing or not, this is the ninja world, where strength comes first.
If you ask a three-year-old child to lose running endurance compared to a kid from the ninja clan who is older than him, then his physical fitness will be poor. What kind of logic is this?
The rest of it feels okay, but the group of people in front said that the physical fitness of a three-year-old is not a big or small problem. Generally speaking, it is okay to ignore this point.
It's pretty good-looking, the protagonist has ideas for developing his abilities, and the protagonist's positioning in the Iwa Ninja is also good. It is recommended that the Iwa Ninja not take the initiative to attack the Kingdom of Whirlpool, but gather some peripheral tribesmen + pick up leaks, and make friends with the Akatsuki organization that has not been blackened. The overall strategy is also good; The shortcomings are that the writing is a bit flat, and the second set of "I realize that xx has broken through to the Jonin realm" is a bit inconsistent.
Disclaimer: The author has probably never watched Naruto. The content inside can only be said to be quite strange. It is almost like a fantasy novel covered with a layer of Naruto skin. No, it is as illogical as the novel, but it is not as exciting as the novel.
There is a saying, the chakra required to perform ninjutsu is 100 times from B to C level, and 100 times from A to B level. The gap is too outrageous, and where did your reference standard come from? In the original book, the grading of ninjutsu is set according to the difficulty of learning, right? With the improvement of pig's trotter's will and belief, can the chakra increase from 2.4B to 160B in six months? Can you please be reasonable? It's not like you have a system that has failed to increase dozens of times in a few months. The quality of chakra added to the will boost is understandable, but too much is outrageous. Moreover, upgrading to genin, chunin, and jounin requires a breakthrough of will every time. What about cultivating immortals?