Naruto: I Will Become the Raikage

What a bullshit introduction you have, I have no desire to read it.

No, buddy, your profile is getting more and more difficult the more I read it, you should change it.

What does this introduction mean? I don't understand. What does discipleship mean? Who is a disciple, and whose disciple is a disciple? Why are there so many disciples? Is the protagonist called a disciple?

Naruto: I want to be the Raikage Traveling through Naruto, but being born into the most unattractive ordinary ninja family? There is no bloodline limit, no wealthy background, and even the amount of chakra is only at the mid-to-lower level - but who stipulates that only geniuses can reach the top of the ninja world? Others roll up the leaves and fight for the Hokage, but I want to take root in Kumogakure and start from the lowest level of ninja school students: • Learn the basics of Thunder Release and polish the accuracy of "Thunder Release: Pseudo Darkness" in actual combat; • Use the Body Knocking Technique to train the "Thunder Release Chakra Mode" to cover every inch of the muscles in the body; • Win over future strong men and seize their own right to speak in the power vacuum after the death of the Third Raikage. While Konoha is still fighting for the "Hokage Successor", and when Sunagakure is trapped in a lack of resources, I have led Kumogakure's Thunder Division to suppress the rebellion and shock the nations! "What is the limit of blood inheritance, what is fatalism?" "In my hands, Thunder Release is the strongest shield and the sharpest spear!" "From today on, I will set the rules of Kumogakure; I will change the order of the ninja world - because what I want to be is the unprecedented [Fourth Raikage]!" I feel that whatever I create is better than what the author wrote, and AI is still very easy to use these days.

The author wants to write something in-depth but his writing style can't keep up. He wants to establish a ninja school system. The descriptions of "The Will of Thunder" are completely in vernacular. If the writing is not good, it can be modified with AI.

Please rate it and delete it if you don't like it. First of all, the writing is readable, at least above the passing mark, and there are no problems with the plot design. It will steadily improve its status. The next step is the shortcomings First, randomly changing the level of Ninjutsu. Ninjutsu is not judged by power alone. If you have a D-level Earth Release with a beheading in your heart and you change it to B, the reason is just because you think this jutsu is powerful. Secondly, the main character's shape is too problematic. The shock of seeing a wooden figure is much more shocking than seeing Ye Yueyai later. Third, the protagonist showed no emotion when he saw those children sacrificing themselves for themselves. Then I can think that the protagonist is an extremely self-centered person who is intangible with emotions and anger, but how could he be so cowardly when facing the village's advisor Kumogakure and Konoha Danzo? At least the mentality should be stable, right? Fourth, what is your purpose of setting so many children to die for you? Show the cruelty of the ninja world? You didn't write it out to show the ruthlessness of the protagonist? If you didn't write it down, why did you write it down?

Brainwashing the ninja school, stealing ninjutsu, Byakugan's blood leakage, White Fang's suicide, taking in the Uzumaki clan, the destruction of Taketori, the annihilation of the Uchiha clan, the murderer who planned the collapse of Konoha

An ordinary person is destined to fail. Such a protagonist cannot survive more than three episodes. And since when did Yunyin Village only have Lei Dun?

There are several time bugs in Naruto. Some can be explained, but some can't be solved. Please help me think about how to explain this bug: Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara fought in the End Valley. Both of them are in the strongest form, and Uchiha Madara is equipped with nine tails. Hashirama died after the battle in the Valley of the End. Hashirama captured nine tailed beasts, and then at the five-kage meeting to allocate the tailed beasts, Senju Hashirama was so strong that he kowtowed and banged his head, not looking like he was about to die at all. Also, Uchiha Madara met with the second-generation Tsuchikage Mu and the third-generation Tsuchikage Onoki. At that time, Mu seemed to be the talker of the Iwa Ninja Village. The question is: Which of these things comes first and which comes last? And when did Uzumaki Mito become the Nine-Tails Jinchūriki? Is it possible that after Hashirama caught Kyuubi, he first thought of his good gay friend instead of his wife? So it was always kept in a jar, just waiting for Uchiha Madara to use it? Give it to Uzumaki Mito after you use it up?

Naruto is about bloodline theory. Many anime and novels are actually about bloodline theory. The real world is all about bloodline theory. Ordinary people who are not from aristocratic families or whose bloodline is not noble cannot reach the top level in the extraordinary world. Just like Namikaze Minato and Sandai in Naruto, they can reach the Kage level at most. This is already the highest state of ordinary people (ninja world).