Become a Tsuchikage in the World of Naruto

I read it all night, and I feel good. Come on, author, but why can't I vote?

Doesn't the protagonist have any signature ninjutsu? There is no systematic way of fighting. What's more, one of the five great ninja villages in the ninja world can't satisfy a ninja's training? The protagonist's mental talent is completely useless, and he is still lacking in physical talent. How to rise? It can be said that the protagonist at the beginning has three chakra attributes: water, earth, and yin. The yin attribute is the best, but the result is directly scrapped. I didn't say which one is better, water or earth. But in the Iwa Ninja Village, I mainly develop the water attribute, and the earth attribute is used as a auxiliary. I don't understand it at all. Also, the protagonist has always emphasized that his physical fitness is not good, and it is not that he has not improved in practice. He has indeed spent several years practicing sword skills. Isn't it delicious to learn a few earth escape ninjutsu in the past few years? In the entire ninja world, which ninja village can match the Iwa ninja village in the development of earth attributes. To sum up, I don't know what the protagonist practices. He is completely like a passerby, unable to find the highlights of his practice.

Isn't the so-called Water Line Jutsu, Water Pressure Line, the super bankrupt version of the Second Hokage's Water Breaking Wave Jutsu?

After reading Chapter 10, I started talking about how strong the protagonist's mental strength is, how gifted and gifted he is, and then the chakra is several times worse than his peers. Are you a genius or a loser? I couldn't finish writing about physical constitution. I was so weak at the beginning. The utilization rate of the three golden chapters was 0.

A rare high-quality fanfic, but it seems that the weasel is too highly praised. The weasel's ninja quality is very advanced, but it is not worthy of being called a god. It is like a lowly animal Now many people can see the nature of the weasel clearly, which is also the contradiction set before and after Naruto. Kishimoto wants to give the weasel everything good, but the result is completely different A good meal is mixed with a grain of rat feces, which is uncomfortable It is recommended to remove the word "god"

Is it really necessary to keep the name? This will only restrict development and allow the daimyo to abdicate. The aristocratic class can be eliminated for better development. As for whether you are willing or not, this is the ninja world, where strength comes first.

If you ask a three-year-old child to lose running endurance compared to a kid from the ninja clan who is older than him, then his physical fitness will be poor. What kind of logic is this?

The rest of it feels okay, but the group of people in front said that the physical fitness of a three-year-old is not a big or small problem. Generally speaking, it is okay to ignore this point.

It's pretty good-looking, the protagonist has ideas for developing his abilities, and the protagonist's positioning in the Iwa Ninja is also good. It is recommended that the Iwa Ninja not take the initiative to attack the Kingdom of Whirlpool, but gather some peripheral tribesmen + pick up leaks, and make friends with the Akatsuki organization that has not been blackened. The overall strategy is also good; The shortcomings are that the writing is a bit flat, and the second set of "I realize that xx has broken through to the Jonin realm" is a bit inconsistent.

Disclaimer: The author has probably never watched Naruto. The content inside can only be said to be quite strange. It is almost like a fantasy novel covered with a layer of Naruto skin. No, it is as illogical as the novel, but it is not as exciting as the novel.

There is a saying, the chakra required to perform ninjutsu is 100 times from B to C level, and 100 times from A to B level. The gap is too outrageous, and where did your reference standard come from? In the original book, the grading of ninjutsu is set according to the difficulty of learning, right? With the improvement of pig's trotter's will and belief, can the chakra increase from 2.4B to 160B in six months? Can you please be reasonable? It's not like you have a system that has failed to increase dozens of times in a few months. The quality of chakra added to the will boost is understandable, but too much is outrageous. Moreover, upgrading to genin, chunin, and jounin requires a breakthrough of will every time. What about cultivating immortals?

It is a rare Naruto novel that has its own ideas and content, and is very innovative in the definition of Tsuchikage Village. In this novel world full of cheating systems, it is rare to have a novel that relies solely on one's own efforts and an understanding of the plot to strengthen itself and improve the ninja system. This makes the book feel more real. Novels can only truly move people if they are true.

Author, you use too much force in your daily life, especially when it comes to recruiting disciples. Fanfiction apprentices are of no use. You have accepted three waves. This is not reality. Moreover, you use too much force in creating original characters. Although there are no plot missions in the Kingdom of Earth, all you have fabricated are high-end combat capabilities. Moreover, after the plot is drastically changed, you still have to rely on the original work to advance, which is very awkward. First of all, Madara's reaction after you come into contact with the Rinnegan is too slow, which is unrealistic. If your strength and thoughts do not match, the final result is to be killed. The most typical example in the original work is Yahiko, because Yahiko is Nagato's best sacrifice. Moreover, the final combat power of the original work was too great and the combat power collapsed. The most typical one is Metkai. The logic of the eight gates cannot be explained in the first place. The six-path blemish is a much higher level than the samsara eye patch. As a result, he was beaten by a Kai and was unable to fight back. And your strength is not even as good as Jiraiya's. Your next idea is to improve the essence of life by developing blood stain elimination or blood stain network. The problem is that if you develop 5 attribute fusion at this speed, you still can't beat Six Paths Madara. But once you are judged to be a threat and difficult to deal with, Madara will be resurrected in advance, and when you have this strength, you will be the contemporary Hashirama, which will complete the imbalance. In addition, you have been talking about the ability to comprehend ninjutsu, but ninjas have limits. What you wrote is not so buggy, so there are theoretical limits. Once you describe no limits, it will contradict your own rubbish in the early stage. Although I know that you want to write longer and closer to the ninja world, this is not suitable for Naruto. It may be suitable for One Piece. Your theory is an advancement of idealism, that is, after the state of mind breaks through, the body automatically follows up. This is contradictory to your body or the original work. The author should consider it and try Pirates in the next book. Overall, this is a very good Naruto novel.

I was convinced. I read this book for the first time today. I read the comments to see the update date, and then looked at the release date. I turned around the grid with my backhand. This author is so outrageous. There is no grid.

Accept Xiao Nan as the heroine, don't be original, it's a pity that Sister Nan is dead. Accompany two fools.

The protagonist contradicts himself by saying that there are no Yin Shield resources in Iwa Ninja Village, so he gave up. However, when Iwa Ninja Village can have the greatest earth attribute, he gives up earth and chooses water. The whole person is playing with earth and resources, so I won't choose it.

This book is so discouraging. In the first few chapters, there is always talk about poor physical fitness. This is not good, that is not good. What can you tell when you are only three years old? Chakra has not yet been refined, and ninjutsu is the mainstream in this world. How did they know that the protagonist has a weak kidney constitution? Random second guess, uncomfortable

The rating of Ninjutsu includes energy utilization, otherwise what is the use of your rating? A C-level fireball increases chakra output 100 times. Do you dare to say that it is not as powerful as B-level ninjutsu? The rating of Ninjutsu is multi-faceted, such as danger, amount of chakra, difficulty, scarcity, power, etc. The energy utilization rate is the most basic. It doesn't mean that you won't be allowed to create a second time. You can't create blindly. At least you have to be reasonable! ! ! ! !

There is also a chief in the same period who has reached the film level. This barely explains that he died in the original work, but the result is that the pig's feet influenced him and made him stronger. Even if Luo Tu is not at the film level yet, he is the film level. Such a genius, why didn't he enroll as a genin, graduate as a chuunin, and graduate in 1 year? Have you studied like pig's feet for so many years? As for the issue of willpower, do you think this was a problem during the Hokage era, especially for big families? Before graduation, the family probably took them to kill wandering ninjas to practice their willpower. Such as ferret. To put it bluntly, the Kage level that comes so quickly from ordinary ninjas, without blood stains or cheats, will last a lifetime as an elite jounin. Kakashi is also a peerless genius, but he has also reached the shadow level. White Fang and the Fourth Hokage are both shadow levels and cannot beat the Kyuubi. Are your 15- or 6-year-old movies suitable? The loess lives on the dog for the rest of its life.

After reading Chapter 40, I feel that the author is too cautious in his description. Think about it: Xiao Li weighed several hundred kilograms during the Chunin Exam, and it took the protagonist three years to increase his weight from five kilograms to fifteen kilograms? The physique of people in the ninja world is different from reality.

The blood stain developed by the protagonist is too porcelain. This is not a porcelain escape. It is just a mud shield. It does not reflect the hard properties of porcelain at all. Even if it does, it can only be regarded as a cement escape. At least you need to add some fire to become a porcelain escape.

The author wrote the substitute technique as Xiao Fei Lei Shen. It is estimated that many people who withdraw from this will not get better results.

After watching a paragraph, let's not talk about the plot. This writing technique is very uncomfortable. It's just like this. After a while, after a while, and then, what are you talking about? The characters are very templated, and the supporting characters' personalities cannot be written. The dialogue is stiff and the protagonist is useless. What else is there to see?

I endured reading part of it, but in summary, it was childish and taken for granted. What I didn't expect later was that the progression from jounin to elite jounin and then to kage level depends on perception. Yes, it is the kind of perception in fantasy novels.

Just your chakra conversion method can poison a group of people

There is no need to write about Naruto as a civilian ninja. Really, the peak of civilian ninjas is Minato Namikaze, which is still in the Kyuubi mode. The real high-end power of ninjas is all brought by Otsutsuki. The peak of civilian ninjas is the Kage level. You have to do some civilian things.

Personally, I feel that the author's writing skills are still lacking, and the main manifestation is that there are serious problems in promoting the plot. For example, the comparison of strength between the protagonist and Ikura, there is basically no description of the process of Ikura's strength improvement. However, the protagonist who was initially written with a lot of ink was far inferior to Ikura's strength. Later, after entering the shadow level, Ikura's strength seemed to have stagnated, and he was far behind the protagonist. This situation may happen in reality, but the author's lack of description of Ikura makes this process very baffling. In addition, there is a lack of a main line about what the protagonist wants to do after coming to the world of Naruto. He knew clearly that the final bosses were Black Zetsu and Kaguya, so he should have been preparing for the final war, improving his personal strength, protecting the Earth Country, and minimizing the conflict between the five major nations when possible, so as to preserve the power of the ninja world for the final war. But what does the protagonist do? Participating in the Ninja World War, even actively provoking the Fourth War, and taking the initiative to kill Jiraiya during peacetime. Although it is understandable to do so due to the relatively hostile relationship between the Land of Earth and the Land of Fire, it is completely inconsistent with a character who knows the final outcome. At the same time, after the protagonist takes the initiative to kill Jiraiya, the relationship between the three Yahikos cannot be restored as lightly as in the book. The people who have a grudge against the Yahiko trio are the Konoha ninjas, but Jiraiya is a mentor who is closely related to them. In the original book, Nagato turns black after Yahiko's death, and Nagato only kills the killer when Jiraiya takes the initiative to investigate for information, and Xiaonan is still very entangled about this. Even if the protagonist is also a good friend of the trio, it is impossible for the trio to remain indifferent to the initiative to kill Jiraiya. Therefore, in my opinion, the transition of this plot is completely untenable, and this is caused by the author's lack of writing power.

I can only say that it's not without reason that so many people criticize it. The chakra setting alone is very discouraging. 10D🟰1c and then 100c is 🟰1b. Will it be 1000b🟰1a in the future? 10000A🟰1s? The protagonist is ten years old and has only 0.4B of chakra in his whole body. At this growth rate, can the protagonist use an S-level ninjutsu at the age of 20?

Can anyone tell me how Jiraiya died in this novel? I'm afraid it's poisonous. As long as it's reasonable, don't tell me that they were killed during peacetime or during war when they could be captured or had already been captured.

Quasi-yin attribute chakra I was really speechless 🙂