Myriad Worlds: I Seek Immortality
诸天：我欲长生
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
536Chapters
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21.7kFans
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Reader comments 32
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Hiding Xu Xiaojian's power? Still pretending to be a fool and not being discovered for more than ten years? You are taking the readers for fools. It's impossible for someone with such intelligence to go out without someone above King Kong to follow you. You can only go out secretly for one night, and you have to go home during the day. You can't get out of a city. The whole city is surrounded by Xu Xiao's spies. How can you not be discovered? You're wrong about the basic logic. Everything behind it is nonsense. It doesn't make sense at all.
The writing is generally good, but there are some contradictions. You have been hiding for 20 years. Well, I stopped hiding it at the beginning of the plot. You hide it from your father and your brothers and sisters, but you don't hide it from the maids around you. You can also develop your power under Xu Xiao's nose without being discovered. There are too many logical contradictions.
Isn't it possible to write a book without treating the readers as fools?
Since there is a will of the world against the protagonist, why not travel through time and let's go straight to the finale?
If you don't listen to Shen Nong's words, you will be poisoned before your eyes. Arsenic is not as poisonous as this book
Chapter 4 started to turn directly into a dog licker
It would be boring if every time you changed the world, your meridians would be cut off and you would lose all your skills and become a child. You would have to start over again every time. Where is the symbol of immortality in the title of your book?
Chapter 2: Death from poison, the former one, confidant, maid Shunxin, the only one who knows that the protagonist is not simple. The latter one, the confidant among his confidants, the maid Cai Yue, is the only one who knows the protagonist's ins and outs. Where are the matryoshka dolls here? In other words, learn from Lu Xun: There are two trees in front of my house, one is a jujube tree, and the other is also a jujube tree.
Although it is set in the snow, the content caught me off guard. In what age does this old-fashioned bloody plot still exist? The author should work hard. 886
Poisonous, extremely poisonous. There was not a single chapter in the book that didn't persuade me to quit. The author is testing the reader's IQ. No one who suffered from cerebral hemorrhage for ten years could write this thing.