I Am Practicing Qi Immortality in Hokage

The protagonist is tortured by the Uchiha clan using illusions like this. If he doesn't kill the Uchiha family who tortured him later, he might as well find a piece of tofu and kill him as soon as possible.

I'm halfway through watching it, and I'm starting to see the Uchiha being crazy. If there are really so many dirty people in the Uchiha, can they not defeat the third generation? Also, what I said in the early stage was so awesome, but in the later stage, I felt that I started traveling too quickly after writing. According to your imagination before going out, the fairy mode plus Tai Chi was a perfect super shadow. As a result, the experience turned into travel. And it's too descriptive of the protagonist's inner story. I'm convinced, I feel like I didn't understand it in my previous life, and I'm living it again in this life. The most important thing is that you have traveled through time and you are still looking for the true meaning of life. It's understandable that you said you have no ambition when you are invisible to everyone, but the time-travelers have the biggest cheat, their control of the future and their understanding of the world, they are submissive. In short, as the protagonist of a cool novel, he is indecisive and fails in many things. As a fan, he rarely fails to describe the main plot. It feels like he is wearing the skin of Naruto. By the way, I can't accept that Tsunade is described by you as being the same as the third generation and the others. The second generation didn't even say that they killed Uchiha people because they were evil.

The protagonist should just leave.

I don't like to talk very much, because I used to read other books and the book circle was very noisy, which made me a little scared (˘•ω•˘) I just typed words quietly, everyone has good opinions to offer. Although my opinion may not necessarily be good, I won't necessarily change it, so feel free to mention it (๑˙ー˙๑) In short, I hope this book can bring happiness to everyone, just like a delicacy (*/∇＼*)

The author probably cares little about politics. In the fights between big people, small tactics are rarely used. They usually hit you hard and fast. When you are fooled, they will give you a thunderous blow to uproot it. The method may not be very clever, but it must be very quick. Politicians are ferocious beasts who value killing with one strike. You cannot keep food by trying your best to kill your prey. Just like in the comics, first instigate rebellion, then slow down, and then arrange to be used as consumables on the battlefield, and then rush to a relocation site and finally exterminate, this is in line with the political principle of "do it or not, do it". What you write is more like a palace fight between women, while official fights are about the art of war.

How should I put it, what is the use of practicing immortality in the world of Naruto? If you really want to live forever, just eat a fruit of the sacred tree. As long as you eat the fruit of the sacred tree, you will become immortal and you can only be sealed and your lifespan will be longer. For example, why does Kaguya want to live forever? There's no need to plant trees. Just be more realistic if you can't plant them.

I don't quite understand. Orochimaru should be the commander of the sand ninja defense line in the third battle. Get a Jiraiya. Okay, let's just treat it as a second creation, but Uchiha and Hinata are on the Kiri Ninja line of defense! After that, I saw Shimura framed Uchiha, and I was embarrassed to come out of a villa with my toes. The fierce conflict between Uchiha and the village was the first after Kyuubi. I can't complain, author, do you have time to carefully read Naruto? Also, in the third battle, Uchiha was the last one to go to the battlefield, and it was Uchiha Fuzuki who led the team!

I have read tens of thousands of words. As for your Qi training and your immortality, the three golden chapters are not included, so forget it. The following chapters are not included, so the article is not on topic.

When I look at it, I don't think it smells like Hokage anymore, it smells like a mafia family cultivating immortality.

Forget it, give it up, it's boring, the author has changed, the style has changed, and I rewrite it as Jiangzhiliu. The author writes more for the sake of writing more, and adds plot for the sake of increasing the plot. Kyuubi thought it was okay before, but why did Kyuubi directly give the protagonist a wit? The settings of the original work have all been overturned, and Minato will be able to use the Thunder Escape Chakra mode. The original work is so good, Minato does not have to die, and the jinchūriki's seal will be weakened when he gives birth to a child. It requires a person who is proficient in the whirlpool sealing technique to suppress the tailed beast, which you don't have. In the original setting, the tailed beast is gone, and part of the tailed beast does not need to die if it is put back in. With this setting, why does the protagonist go to help Obito open his eyes? He said that he wanted to mess with Minato, but his behavior was because he was afraid that Minato would become cold. He was so brainless. He was afraid that Kushina would die. When Minato was cold, he could just put the Tailed Beast's legs on Kushina. The protagonist was reduced to his wits.

Let's change the title of the book and call it the time-traveling me. I was a waste in Uchiha.

Fluid magic? This guy is an Uchiha-style taijutsu, bro, you are just writing nonsense.

Another peddler selling dog meat

It's just a self-titled article, a no-brainer ancient fantasy story, with everything in it.

It was originally good, but the author wanted to die, and the more he wrote, the more messed up he became. One moment, the protagonist's sister was dying, and another, the protagonist was dying. Day by day, he was dying or living. Speechless, what the hell?

If you write about Naruto, if you don't black out Konoha, will anyone read it? Even if he's an Uchiha, this character is a failure. No matter how well he writes, he can't get good grades, let alone the writing is not that good.

What about practicing Qi? I came here because of the title of the book. Isn't it unfair to blame the author?

The people of Konoha thought that Uchiha was the city administrator, and Uchiha thought that he was the Vice-President Xi, who was only one step away from the bamboo mat. This was the Uchiha's misfortune.

The author's writing is quite good, but there are too few updates, and the zoning is wrong. The light novel section for Naruto fanfics is quite large, but there are also many people reading it.

Inexplicable setting and plot

The author is young and illiterate, and he is an early ancient fantasy writer. The body breaking of Shen tm affects the formation of a shadow. A rough indicator of combat power has become a training level. I didn't finish the free chapter, so I went to the study version and flipped through the back. I said goodbye. I should have listened to Shen Nong's advice. 😰

I didn't see anything to do with Qi training. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I didn't even want to read the one about breaking the proficiency system, so I gave up.

The writing style is still good, but the biggest problem is that it no longer has the flavor of Naruto. It seems to be writing in a fantasy style, and it is still a shadow. Moreover, gay love is often written about in Naruto. Love is pure love. There is no need to write about protrusion and backache. It is full of passion. The real interaction is with gay friends.

Uchiha Fluid Technique, flow refers to the school, there is no setting of Fluid Technique

I don't know what to say. I haven't seen the VIP part yet. What I feel so far is that this book is boring, dark and stuffy.

The main character becomes weak after being hit. I don't know what the author is thinking.

I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing chapter 75. I haven't seen Qi Qiang yet. The title is ridiculous. He also invites younger sisters to have affairs with her. Is he forgetting that the protagonist is only 13 years old? Now he is a little kid in the second grade of junior high school? Cultivation of immortals is divided into multiple levels. You can practice qi, build the foundation, and form the elixir of Yuanying. You are more stupid than the traditional cultivation of immortals. You haven't practiced qi for 75 chapters. Think about the traditional cultivation of immortals that takes 300 chapters to build the foundation and ends with 600 chapters. Yours is even more extreme. I clearly want to build the foundation in Chapter 600.

Fall in love with Uchiha, raise a father, save a vanilla, raise another father, catch a monk, gain another father, Hey, meet a person, have multiple fathers, how do you end up at the bottom of society, it's embarrassing.

I saw that there were 150 chapters left, and I only read the beginning of the next 50 chapters. Because I can't read anymore. 1. The setting of the story is interesting, and the main line of the story has a theme. 2. There are many incoherences in the sentences, including missing words, predicates, objects, and yes or no. 3. The logic before and after setting is somewhat unclear. 4. There is a complicated story behind. 5. This book can be used as an early adopter.

Except the system. Tmd is still a system. The beginning of morbidity. Or is it that today's young people like systematic writing?