This Is My Primitive Tribe

It seems okay at the beginning, but I would like to make a suggestion. Since the animals and plants in this world are so different from those on the earth, it is recommended not to name them after the plants on the earth. You can use the functions of the animals and plants here to create something and write a sense of difference. For example, if you plant something to eat, you will not call it rice, but a new plant, but it may also need to be shelled. This may be a lot more exciting. And writing this kind of ancient text from another world, I think the most exciting thing is to describe the civilization of the earth. Bringing the past, as modern people, going to ancient times is a bug. We can bring the order of a mature society and establish the soil for the growth of science and civilization. The world may not necessarily be very advanced in the end, but he can achieve self-improvement with the things established by the protagonist. The native primitive people can also have their own thinking. I think this world has been successfully shaped. Finally, I hope the author's new book will be successful and become a hit. I am a fan.

Collection of magical plants and animals. If you have thought of or seen some plants or animals with strange abilities and strange looks, you can tell the author here, and the author will choose the appropriate ones to write in the book. Thank you all for your support.

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Every fight is with Shendou, the protagonist is the vanguard, and there is no other presence at all. You can just briefly mention the situation of developing the tribe. You have written so many fighting scenes. If it is all about fighting, it will be useless for you to travel to the past.

I think the main problem is that the protagonist has the ability to directly upgrade his tribe to the feudal system without moving, and then directly crush all the tribes. Now it feels very silly to have to find a way to move to the central part to find trouble.

If you know how to use charcoal, you can make iron. In ancient times, bronze was first made because you didn't know charcoal. Burning wood directly at 700-900 degrees won't melt iron, so bronzeware was developed first in ancient times. Charcoal can reach 1500-2300 degrees and can easily smelt iron ore. In fact, there are far more iron ores than copper ores, both in the known universe and on Earth, with a difference of two orders of magnitude.

To develop, if someone wants to invade, fight him. To develop, if someone wants to invade, continue to fight him. . . . A little numb

Without Teng Shu, the protagonist would have been a dog for a long time, and his IQ would not be much different from that of a savage.

Author: Can we write less about our villains... After fighting mosquitoes and wolves, crows, and then the divine bird that was intended to be the villain appeared, another lizard was killed before the fight was finished. Or the opposite party invaded the protagonist first and then the protagonist fought back. Can't it stop? …By then I'm afraid the whole book will be either about development or fighting.

After reading more than 200 chapters, I really don't blame others for the book's lack of popularity. After reading this, most of the things the protagonist does with modern knowledge are not shown in the text to be of any help. First point: Plants are huge. Other tribes can feed so many people by gathering and hunting. The protagonist starts to add good fishing and meticulous agriculture to feed less people than others. People often say that there is not enough food. If they eat more than other tribes, their combat power is not reflected. Second: The hard work of making bronze bow and arrow weapons is not reflected in the same point as the above point. When fighting the first medium-sized tribe, after describing the result, is it different whether the master uses stone spears or bronze spears? Third: Battles all depend on the totem gods. Victory and defeat have no impact on the totem gods at all. The war totem gods can just fight each other, and people only need to look at the results. And even the intermediate gods can fly around and hunt on their own, so there is no reason to protect people at all. The fourth point: The most important salt is not kept secret by you, but you are still trading, and bronze is starting to be produced. As long as the secret method is used to arm and increase combat power, it is colored, kept secret, and not used in large quantities. Then you use it to make knife coins. You also tell others how useful and sharp the knife coins are. You are not telling them to melt them quickly and try to make weapons. So what secret did you keep before? The fifth point: It is not possible to use other things to make currency. As long as the anti-counterfeiting is done well, the anti-counterfeiting has divine power, witchcraft power and magical plants. There are more ways to do it than reality. It can be done with wood, and another person has to use it. The easiest way is to use your currency to promote it at a discount, or limit certain products to only be purchased with currency. Where is the need for transitional currency?