
This Is My Primitive Tribe
这是我的原始部落
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 10mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Palm Edge Birth and Death·fantasy
The palm edge arises and dies, and you follow the path. See flowers in silence, grasp eternity in a moment.
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Thirty Years
Over the past ten years or so, I have read most of the genres, and slowly accumulated some novels that I personally like, which I will slowly recall and update from time to time. Looking for a swordsman for thirty years Leaves fell and branches sprouted several times Ever since I first saw a peach blossom Even now I have no doubt
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I Watched Them All by Myself Before.
I've read a lot, and I'm gradually less interested in the public's books, so I'll share some of what I've read! Lazy!
Star Tower & Book List!
The king of heaven suppresses the tigers of the earth, and the pagoda suppresses the river monsters! My favorite styles keep changing. I used to like reading, but now I have the book I like now, and I might read it tomorrow. Try another style of book and pay attention to those with the same taste.
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The plot unfolds slowly, the story is told eloquently, and the logic of the setting is very interesting and interesting for old bookworms. It is really a good source of food. Book friends who read this comment highly recommend this book.
Doesn't the author know that using bronze kitchen utensils to cook, and using bronze bowls and cups to eat and drink can lead to heavy metal poisoning?
It seems okay at the beginning, but I would like to make a suggestion. Since the animals and plants in this world are so different from those on the earth, it is recommended not to name them after the plants on the earth. You can use the functions of the animals and plants here to create something and write a sense of difference. For example, if you plant something to eat, you will not call it rice, but a new plant, but it may also need to be shelled. This may be a lot more exciting. And writing this kind of ancient text from another world, I think the most exciting thing is to describe the civilization of the earth. Bringing the past, as modern people, going to ancient times is a bug. We can bring the order of a mature society and establish the soil for the growth of science and civilization. The world may not necessarily be very advanced in the end, but he can achieve self-improvement with the things established by the protagonist. The native primitive people can also have their own thinking. I think this world has been successfully shaped. Finally, I hope the author's new book will be successful and become a hit. I am a fan.
Collection of magical plants and animals. If you have thought of or seen some plants or animals with strange abilities and strange looks, you can tell the author here, and the author will choose the appropriate ones to write in the book. Thank you all for your support.
Thank you for your support. If you have any good suggestions or opinions, you can tell Qingshi here and Qingshi will seriously consider it.
Every fight is with Shendou, the protagonist is the vanguard, and there is no other presence at all. You can just briefly mention the situation of developing the tribe. You have written so many fighting scenes. If it is all about fighting, it will be useless for you to travel to the past.
I think the main problem is that the protagonist has the ability to directly upgrade his tribe to the feudal system without moving, and then directly crush all the tribes. Now it feels very silly to have to find a way to move to the central part to find trouble.
If you know how to use charcoal, you can make iron. In ancient times, bronze was first made because you didn't know charcoal. Burning wood directly at 700-900 degrees won't melt iron, so bronzeware was developed first in ancient times. Charcoal can reach 1500-2300 degrees and can easily smelt iron ore. In fact, there are far more iron ores than copper ores, both in the known universe and on Earth, with a difference of two orders of magnitude.
To develop, if someone wants to invade, fight him. To develop, if someone wants to invade, continue to fight him. . . . A little numb
Author: Can we write less about our villains... After fighting mosquitoes and wolves, crows, and then the divine bird that was intended to be the villain appeared, another lizard was killed before the fight was finished. Or the opposite party invaded the protagonist first and then the protagonist fought back. Can't it stop? …By then I'm afraid the whole book will be either about development or fighting.
Without Teng Shu, the protagonist would have been a dog for a long time, and his IQ would not be much different from that of a savage.
After reading more than 200 chapters, I really don't blame others for the book's lack of popularity. After reading this, most of the things the protagonist does with modern knowledge are not shown in the text to be of any help. First point: Plants are huge. Other tribes can feed so many people by gathering and hunting. The protagonist starts to add good fishing and meticulous agriculture to feed less people than others. People often say that there is not enough food. If they eat more than other tribes, their combat power is not reflected. Second: The hard work of making bronze bow and arrow weapons is not reflected in the same point as the above point. When fighting the first medium-sized tribe, after describing the result, is it different whether the master uses stone spears or bronze spears? Third: Battles all depend on the totem gods. Victory and defeat have no impact on the totem gods at all. The war totem gods can just fight each other, and people only need to look at the results. And even the intermediate gods can fly around and hunt on their own, so there is no reason to protect people at all. The fourth point: The most important salt is not kept secret by you, but you are still trading, and bronze is starting to be produced. As long as the secret method is used to arm and increase combat power, it is colored, kept secret, and not used in large quantities. Then you use it to make knife coins. You also tell others how useful and sharp the knife coins are. You are not telling them to melt them quickly and try to make weapons. So what secret did you keep before? The fifth point: It is not possible to use other things to make currency. As long as the anti-counterfeiting is done well, the anti-counterfeiting has divine power, witchcraft power and magical plants. There are more ways to do it than reality. It can be done with wood, and another person has to use it. The easiest way is to use your currency to promote it at a discount, or limit certain products to only be purchased with currency. Where is the need for transitional currency?
It's gone bad, it doesn't look good anymore
... I saw 24 years in 22 years... I am so strong
Are there any other books of this type that you would recommend? This author is too short and not enough to read😱
The mount doesn't even have a saddle. Neither do shields and armors. What else are you going to do? The big turtle next to the boat is not more useful than the boat. The ship was just a heavy target and a strange beast sank. When writing fantasy, don't just use modern technology. . You have to adapt to local conditions or you will be done with it sooner or later. . .
What I want to say is our smelting technology in Great China? It's impossible for a time traveler to not know this. So is the protagonist a science and engineering student or a liberal arts student?
Authors occasionally lie. This was the first book I read when I came to Qidian. Later, I started reading other books. Now that I have read a thousand books, I found that this one is still following me.
The author went to a primitive tribe to collect materials and was captured by primitive people?
I think this book is quite good. It's not that the original text is dead. There must still be people reading this track. The original + spiritual sacrifice is really interesting. I really like to read the real book. Readers who like it are also very tolerant of you. There is really no need to give up. Stick to this This book is finished. Don't stop updating it for various reasons. Most of the people who have new books are actually old readers. They have added them to their collections and kept them for reading. There are also some who saw that your updates were stable and unstable, but it collapsed again after only a hundred thousand words. I feel that all the monthly votes I gave you were wasted. Personal suggestion: If you still want to make money by writing articles, unless you change your vest, it is best to complete this book before writing it, and try to make updates as stable as possible. You cannot have your cake and eat it too, and don't end up failing to take care of both your writing and your life. Once this book is complete, write it down with all your heart. Go to a primitive setting (everyone who can read this book review section now is an old fan, you are not a new author), you can add some other elements, such as sacrificing souls and correcting soul travel. The protagonist can also use a cheat to make it stronger. The minimum is 500,000 and we will see. I won't read any book with less than 500,000 words. Instead of feeling sorry for yourself and worrying about gains and losses, it is better to focus on writing about the world you like. If you don't persist, how will you know that you are not the next Teacher Zhen?
Damn it, are you a fairy? Fujigami can speak. . . Will we have to transform later?🥵😅
It is an immature tribal story. You should not engage in primitive tribes, but form spies. It is too crooked. Primitive tribes cannot develop at all. You can just collect information and develop scouts. You use spies. . . However, the article is still barely readable
Come on, author, you must finish it! This book is the only reason why I still keep this software😍
A tribe of several thousand people has developed for so long, and they are engaged in copper smelting, shipbuilding, and other workshops. There is also legislation to unify weights and measures to make coins, but you have not developed education at all. The germ of civilization actually lies in education and writing. You have not written about either of these.
The author's monthly pass is given to you
Come on, author
It's not that the author is still updating, I thought it was early eunuch, but today I turned to the chapter and saw that this book is still being updated 🙂🙂
The subject matter is very good, but the writing is not good and there is procrastination. I can only say that I am short of books to pass the time.
I haven't watched it for a long time, but it still looks good if I watch it again.
What happened? It just broke out last month and then disappeared?