Tokyo Enforcer

Jue Jue Zi

It looks very awkward. The main reason is probably that the supernatural power was introduced too early, and then in order to give the protagonist some self-protection, a treasure was given in exchange for power. This led to two very awkward points: 1. I was used to seeing treasures worth millions and tens of millions of order points at the beginning. Who else wants to see you solve a case and collect 100 order points while working for a group of happy people in your daily life. 2. Because of the treasure hanging at the beginning, you will see a very "interesting" scene. The protagonist has kaleidoscope eyes, the Senju and Uchiha's all-encompassing power, senjutsu chakra, dust release in the left hand, flying thunder god in the right hand, and a lot of messy ninjutsu and illusions. Even in the later stages of Naruto's battle power, he is considered a character. Then you can see such a person who can destroy the world, discussing very seriously how to deal with the black organization, and treating it as a formidable enemy. He even said euphemistically: There is no way to guard against thieves for a thousand days. They can't deal with me and target women. What to do with friends' families (I said your illusions are just decorations, right? Give Gin an illusion, Rum an illusion, Belmod an illusion, and give those messy real and fake wines an illusion. Is it really difficult to uproot the black organization?)

The author is Hokage Buki. I won't talk about a police system that can be exchanged for various extraordinary items and abilities. If you exchange a lot of things for Hokage when you know that there are ghosts and gods in this world, can chakra kill ghosts? This is not mentioned in the original work. Shouldn't normal people first find the ability to kill ghosts? Also, chakra is not easy to use in modern society. First of all, the movement is too great. Although Naruto is set as a ninja, all their ninjutsu are very noisy. Illusions and so on also interfere with chakra and are not clearly effective against ordinary people. To be honest, the ability of White Zetsu is easier to use. If you really want to change to extraordinary abilities, Shanari's Feng Jue would be a good choice. In a word, the Naruto system has its advantages, but it is really stupid to replace them all at once. There are also problems with the understanding of various abilities. The most difficult thing to accept is that it is obviously a police system but it is written as an exchange system.

It's outrageous, and it's not a harem story. As a result, the top management of a unit are all women. It doesn't matter if they are excellent, they are all passers-by, with no merit at all. 😂Let it go and you can't write nonsense The list is even more hilarious. There are more than 20 policemen and only Takagi is a male policeman😂 Takagi is still a well-connected person, forget it, the author can be happy with the writing, sooner or later the harem episode

I need fan points to speak, so I can only bear the pain of wasting my monthly ticket. I can only say that I can read it if I can, and run away as soon as possible. I saw a few more chapters introducing the redemption items and left first. Introducing the system to my girlfriend is a poison that I can't stand. I always feel like I share a system before I have fully explored it. The more I look at it, the more awkward it becomes, and I run away.

Ordinary skills are also ridiculously expensive, simply.

The title of the book "Tokyo Enforcers" starts with donations and extraordinary abilities. Without handling some ordinary cases in the early stage, there is no sense of substitution and foreshadowing, and it also wastes the opportunity to have a low number of words.

The author can be less politically correct. I know there are many minefields when writing about Ni Hongguo, but there is no need to stress that you have not forgotten your original intention. This is a joke. After all, the main character in the book is a police officer. As long as you don't write anything that crosses the line, it basically has nothing to do with politics. Isn't it good to just treat yourself as a character in Conan? I found that when it comes to traveling through the Neon Kingdom, it becomes a disadvantage. Basically, it's all about traveling to China.

If the protagonist wants to establish his own "Uesugi Group" in the Metropolitan Police Department, it is best to include these people under his command...

There are currently two issues. First, the daily life is too little and the span is too big. I only wrote two or three articles about Ke Xue's daily life and then jumped directly to the supernatural chapter. Most of the time, I was cheating or on the way to cheating, as if I was reading an instruction manual. Second, following the previous point, when there is too little daily content, new characters appear like a spurt. A new character is a different world view. Such treatment in the early stage of a new book will undoubtedly cause great reading difficulties for readers. It is recommended to keep it steady.