I Live Broadcast Mutation in the End of the World

It's good from the beginning until entering the seventh defense zone, but it becomes boring after entering the seventh defense zone. The following are personal thoughts, the author can refer to them briefly. The author probably doesn't want the protagonist to upgrade too quickly and cause the whole book to collapse, but I personally think that writing about the alien hunters in a large space will make your book collapse faster. The setting of the alien hunter is a highlight, and some key plots and turning points can be promoted by this highlight. But! Writing a lot about the alien hunter plot has already made me think that the name of this book is not "Live Broadcast Doomsday Mutation" but "My Years as a Alien Hunter" The title of the main line of the book has been given to you, Live Broadcast Doomsday, the protagonist fights monsters and upgrades, but why are all the alien hunter plots after chapter 40? The most important point is the protagonist's thoughts. This is very important! The protagonist does not want to upgrade. This is the most ridiculous idea I have ever seen, and it is also the most poisonous part of this book. The protagonist can be a virgin or a villain. But! The protagonist cannot stop thinking about becoming stronger! Especially after experiencing the boss battle in District 8! Not changing 40 chapters would be the reading limit for some (me) readers, because there is nothing left to read. The following plot must be that the protagonist encounters the boss, barely defeats it and then levels up. It seems like there is no problem, but this is the biggest problem. Security You are the author, and you know that you cannot give the protagonist an invincible boss. But we readers are horrified by our protagonist's lack of firepower. Some readers (me) will take themselves to the protagonist. I (the protagonist) don't know what kind of boss I (the protagonist) will encounter in the future. Will it destroy the world? But after I went through the boss battle in District 8, I wanted to become stronger, not to mention invincible, at least to be able to defeat the boss in District 8 without being hurt. But the author happened to write that the protagonist would not upgrade, and I felt anxious about the future of the protagonist. And I can't change the protagonist's mind, so I can only change the protagonist. So a group of people like me quit reading. Above. In addition, if the author deliberately uses this method to screen readers, then just take what I said above as a fart. Also, the author should not try to please all readers, because you can't do what rmb can't do. Just change your persistence to persistence. Finally, I wish the author can become a god with this book.

Many readers complained about the protagonist's problems with the Virgin 😭. This is indeed due to my lack of experience, which makes readers uncomfortable. I have modified some chapters without affecting the plot that has been released so far, trying to make the protagonist kill decisively, and subsequent creations will avoid these mistakes. Thank you readers for their opinions. Although some of them may have abandoned the book and cannot see this comment, I still want new readers to give me a chance after reading it. If possible, I hope they can point out the poisonous points (it is best to say which chapter made you feel poisonous 😟) so that I can correct it in time. The most important thing for a newcomer to write a book is to learn lessons and make continuous progress. I would like to thank all my friends who are willing to read this book. You are my motivation to keep going! 😡

What can I say, the plot with the girl in the front was okay and I could accept it. But I can't accept the idea of ​​eradicating the dark web and joining an organization. The protagonist has no intention of actively upgrading. When something goes wrong, he just throws in a wave of minions to upgrade. He has been taught a lesson twice. No progress at all. I might like the kind of solitary upgrade story.

I don't know why there are so few comments. I can't see the comments and don't dare to read the book.

If the needle doesn't poke, please give the author a big boost 🌹🌹🌹

We've watched Chapter 11 and can't help but complain 1. The audience in the live broadcast room are people from outside the floating island. They didn't suspect anything when they saw the content of the live broadcast, as if it was supposed to be like this. 2. The protagonists were all born in the apocalypse. It is a miracle that they still have the heart of the Virgin when they grow up so big. 3. The protagonist actually gave the gun to others, and then gave the backpack containing supplies to others for safekeeping. This is equivalent to giving away his life. This is the most incomprehensible to me. 4. There were four people accompanying them, one was selfish, one was Virgin Heart, one was Bichi, and one was a gangster. It was a surprise that these people didn't cheat on each other. Instead, the gangster saved the couple, which I didn't expect. 5. Chapter 11 says that the origin of the virus is the Internet, so why did the virus outbreak only occur in one place on the floating island? Did you even get a cover to cover it? 6. It is a miracle that food and drinking water have not been cut off 20 years after the virus outbreak. According to the performance in the play, these should be in short supply 7. It has been 10 years since the protagonist obtained the ability, but the level is too low. The level is not worthy of the time he spent to obtain it. 8. After reading Chapter 11, I always felt that this plot was borrowed from the part in Attack on Titan where the high wall was not damaged but a giant appeared inside the high wall. I happened to be watching Attack on Titan recently, so I had a sense of immediateness.

That poisonous girl is finally gone, after more than forty chapters. I can't see her anymore. I hope she won't come out even if she is here. Even if she comes out, she will take a few strokes and then die.          ：      ，，，，，，，，， Feel free to write, but don't label what you write as an apocalyptic novel. What are you describing in an apocalyptic novel? Although the woman in the front is poisonous, at least she is describing the apocalypse. Although it is poisonous and makes me hateful, doesn't it also show a little bit of the humanity of the apocalypse? You should focus on describing mutants, monsters, and human nature. These are enough for you to write about. What about the Holy Mother? Is it possible to respond to the call of the country? Stop being funny

The protagonist is the Virgin, and the author is very good at whitewashing the character, just these two poisonous points 🤫

It's outrageous. Not only was it released suddenly, but it also included an ambiguity with Luo. Did you feel happy writing it? Just admit it if you feel comfortable. The key point is that the special girl is all a misunderstanding. I think this is the biggest poisonous point in the whole book. The protagonist should not need a woman, not to mention that Luo doesn't even have a character card. It's boring to keep misunderstandings.

It's really well written. I've already invested in it. Thank you to the author 🌹🌹

Are you still such a virgin when you grow up in the last days?

What a holy mother, two unrelated people who escaped from the large army, and the protagonist tried his best to save them.

It made me feel uncomfortable watching it. The protagonist's mentality was more like a time traveler than a young man born after the disaster! The core of the apocalypse is survival. Whether it is killing monsters, upgrading, or farming and building, it is all for a better life. "Cherishing life" is the core of the three concepts of the apocalypse. I saw that the protagonist in Chapter 40 repeatedly committed dangers in order to save four ordinary people who had nothing to do with him. He jumped from the building as a meat mat, rushed into the zombie group to save people, and blocked the zombie group alone. In order to save people, I gave up my life! What's even more poisonous is that in the bathhouse at the back, old people, women and children gathered around and snatched away their backpacks. They were indifferent. When their female companions were raped, they killed the leader. There is a saying on the battlefield that no matter whether old people, children or women pick up a gun, they are the enemy.

What should I say, come on 😁

I read more than a hundred chapters, and in each chapter I saw the four characters "twitched my lips"!

I'm asking for support for my new book. If you have any opinions, feel free to mention them. Newcomers still have a lot to improve on. I hope you will give me your ideas if you have any ideas 😌

Feel free to write, it's normal for comments to be either black or white

The protagonist Queshi is a bit of a virgin, but the protagonist's growth is organized and intervened, making the protagonist's character tend to be good. There is nothing wrong with such a Holy Mother. The end of the world is not pure darkness, it also represents hope. Come on, author! ! !

Regarding the issue that may go off topic after entering the defense zone. Many readers reported that after entering the defense zone, there was no improvement in mutation level, and the protagonist had no idea of ​​​​upgrading, which felt very salty. I reflected on this and made changes. In fact, the main plot of the entire book shows the improvement of the protagonist. After entering the defense zone, he will encounter BOSS (larger experience package) due to various opportunities and continue to improve himself. It is more interesting than the boring leveling of killing zombies outside. However, I didn't handle the transition period well, so I couldn't watch it anymore, and therefore I couldn't see the back part. So I made changes to some chapters after entering the defense zone, but it will not affect the published plot. Friends who have been reading can rest assured 😜