Global Lord: Start as a Desert Lord

The plot is procrastinating, counting the military units every ten or twenty chapters, and is sometimes inconsistent. Before one main line is finished, two or three more main lines come in, and then some irrelevant stories are interspersed in the middle. Each new unit or stage will be a long chapter, but the main line is completed in one or two hundred chapters. A battle can obviously be described in one or two chapters, but it has to be delayed for five or six chapters or even more.

The setting of the author's book is really good, and the characterization of the protagonist is very charming. The arms of each camp are also a highlight. There are not so many logistical burdens, which makes fighting more enjoyable. Later, we can highlight the medical aspect to flesh out the portrayal of civilians. In general, the setting is very strong and can be used in the next book. It's just that the framework and details are not in place enough. For example, the integration of reality and games, using game rules to erase the cumbersome things, seems very cool, but failing to use players to fill in the reality feels a bit shallow. It seems to have a strong sense of violation. It can give other players more management and value, which can also allow players to rely on the natives to get closer to the protagonist. Otherwise, it would feel dry to see the protagonist pretending to be in front of the players. You can also add a setting so that all dead players are exiled to other sub-dimensions, so that the world structure can be supported. It would be a lot more fun to sort out the main line from a more Godly perspective. I feel that the main plot of this book has just begun and can be further polished. The next book will be re-sculpted using this setting. It is entirely possible to improve the shortcomings of this book and become a god. Because reading the book review section, I feel that many people still like the author's book. Most of the people who complain are not simply dissatisfied, but want to give the author some good suggestions.

A few years later, when faced with all kinds of hardships in life, I will definitely not look the same as I did many years ago. That figure drifting away on the water road...

Very well written, good luck to the author

It's all settled, and I'll give you the monthly pass as well.

Hehe

Has it developed to the point of updating every two days now?

Recently, I have seen many friends complaining about the author's writing here and there. I feel deeply ashamed and have built a complaining forum for everyone to complain. The deficiencies and shortcomings of this book have no other reason than the author's limited level. I want to write a perfect book more than anyone else, but with this little weight, I really can't write a book of the level of Mysterious and Covering the Sky, so I can only accept this fact. My reading friends are all kinds of experts. Their knowledge system is more comprehensive than mine, their cognition is deeper than mine, their social experience is richer than mine... Etc., Etc. Are everywhere, so it is easy to find shortcomings. So when you find loopholes and shortcomings in the book, don't be angry and surprised. Your abilities are limited and you are just laughing. If you really don't like this book, then find a book that you like to read. There is no need to be hard on yourself. When I read a book, I usually just turn it off if it doesn't suit my appetite, so I don't struggle at all. One more thing, don't argue with the setting of this book. This thing was thought up by me and does not conform to any real rules. The setting is subject to you, because there is no right or wrong, reasonable or unreasonable in this thing. It all depends on your own imagination. Everyone is welcome to give some valuable opinions and complaints. Posts will not be deleted as long as they do not involve personal attacks. I hope you will like this book. If you don't like it, I hope you can get the best reading experience from other books. Thank you for your support.

The writing is really strange. The protagonist obviously doesn't mess with anyone, but often gives out benefits and sells low-priced weapons. But just because he is strong and ranks first on the list, everyone forms an anti-protagonist alliance and is particularly malicious towards the protagonist. And this plot keeps repeating, everyone despises the protagonist, the protagonist rises against the wind, everyone is shocked, and the public is furious and wants to get rid of the protagonist.

Author: Have you ever read your own book? Look what you are writing now? Do you think the setting of the hero is reasonable? Are you sure this is not an assassin, are you sure this is a hero? I write about how handsome he is every day, and it seems like a woman can't even walk when she sees it. Men from other worlds are all damn ugly, right? No one is good-looking. Among the 20 billion lords, they are all ugly, but you are the handsome one. The hero is so awesome as a woman, it seems like all the men are dead. I don't even understand what you are writing now, and I don't even understand that there are still people writing like this. Do you think it was a few years ago? Stallions prevail. And when you wrote about 20 billion people, you didn't even think twice about it. As the old saying goes, money should not be exposed. I have two legendary pieces of equipment just because I am afraid that others will not know. Are you invincible or what? Small comments, I hope I can consider these issues when writing other articles of the same type in the future. See you again on the road to rivers and lakes

Compared with the previous books, the author cannot say that he has made huge progress, he can only say that there is no growth at all.

I can tell what's going on just by looking at the table of contents. There's no need to waste time and money reading the content 😒😒😒

Can the protagonist stop laughing and acting like a silly person? Can he be more mature? Or is it that the author only writes about mentally retarded characters?

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It was pretty good when I first read it, but now I feel like it's not even a novice, it's just a mindless novel. Others know that the protagonist is awesome but they still give it away in piles, and it's just this routine. I'm so convinced. It can be said that except for the protagonist, everyone else is just a sidekick. As long as the protagonist is present, others will not fight randomly, but will only come together to give experience. You might as well write that the protagonist traveled through time and became an NPC.

How can ordinary troop nests be maintained at a price of more than 400 resources? They are all things that no one else wants. They forcibly increase the difficulty of the plot.

The fairy grass in the early stage is a piece of shit from the middle stage onwards. The author has limited control over the world view.

In fact, it's actually quite good. I probably miss it a bit since I haven't watched this type of movie for a long time. However, there are indeed many shortcomings. Just like many people say water, in fact, it is not completely water. Some chapters really need to be paved and transitioned. However, a big question is whether the author has really done a good job of guiding the outline. Many of the plots that talk about water are the author's confusing content, regardless of the importance, hammering in the east and shoveling in the west. It's like the Centaur plot. It has been said tens of thousands of times that the situation is serious, but the result is that it develops in other places, with no sense of coherence and focus. As a result, many readers feel that the author is dishonest and false. This brings me to another point. Pig's Feet has been gradually becoming more and more emotional towards Twilight City, but you didn't show it in your article. It seems that just talking about it makes it appear that Pig's Feet is very emotional. Why don't you show it if you are very emotional? Let's just say that the butler's name seems to be "Kalu". Every time he is said to be getting older and older, have you done anything for him? Every time I say something like, "Ah, they worked so hard, I'm so touched." What makes you so moved? For example, what is the name of the blacksmith? (Sorry, I read too many books every day. I am old) One-armed and his wife are blind. You touch their efforts but there is no expression. Many contents are touching to death, and they always emphasize the actual display of ruthlessness. You must know that readers are all modern people.                                      The descriptions of most players on the forum are like fools. There may be some people, but if you keep writing, it seems like you are overly supporting the role to reduce intelligence, and it also seems that you treat the readers as fools, so you are called stupid. Well, there is also the problem of data. I changed it well later and listed it separately. Finally, it is not a waste of data. But you also have to think about it. You may want to show that you are not good at listing it separately, but your data and content do not go together, and the sense of alienation among readers is getting stronger and stronger. I often I skip directly to the data chapter behind you, because there is no need to read it. It is really not used in the fighting text later. Even if it is used, you will describe it again, and 99% of it is just a few skills or data enhancements. I, a reader, need to play data games with you? Another thing is that you must pay attention to the gap between heroes and arms. Sometimes you want to show the power of the hero, and sometimes you are afraid that there will be no arms in the story and you will overemphasize the role of the arms. I don't know what to do specifically, so I have to take control. Finally, a crucial point is that typos and typo corrections can affect the senses a bit. Of course, there may be some mistakes that I have not remembered or forgotten, and the author has to control them himself. You do have to stick to your own rhythm when writing, but that doesn't mean everything your readers say is random. You can absorb good suggestions according to your own needs. If you don't like the suggestions or don't want to change them, just let them go. But don't bury your head in writing. What you write is not just for yourself to read. What's more important is for readers to adopt it. For example, I saw your book on the bestseller list or the recommended list, but I wasn't going to read it at first because the reviews of this book were not good, and when I read the previous chapters, many people said something about you, and some of what you said made sense, so it didn't feel good to my senses. Although there was still a lot of talk later, I took it in. Yesterday I spent time and money to watch the latest version. There are indeed flaws, especially in the mid-term, but it is indeed okay. Come on.

It is no different from the previous one. You can read it in the early stage and withdraw it in the middle stage.

The content is good, but the process is too tight. It only took two months after writing hundreds of chapters. Not one day is really developed. It's like walking on the edge of a cliff. It looks restless. The content should be relaxed and relaxed. How does it feel when you read a novel written by someone else and it only takes a month after reading hundreds of chapters. My feeling is that there is too much nonsense. It feels like the author deliberately stretches out irrelevant details. It looks irritating!

This book seems to have been written by a different person starting from around 420 photos, whether it is good or not is another matter. The (exaggerated) exclamations of passers-by made me feel like the hairs on my head were about to explode. One word (disgusting). Also, is this a stallion story? Why does a woman have a crush on the protagonist and trust him when they meet her? Either sow it, or don't write it like this. Didn't the author notice that after more than 400 photos, the comments on each photo became less and less?

A small suggestion, don't always be a female hero. When you write it like this, it seems like it's not good to highlight men. It's not that I'm biased. I have read some lord stories of the same type before, and the same operations are all about female heroes. The women in the other world seem to be more powerful and the men are very weak, but the lord is awesome. This is very embarrassing, and what you wrote is that you are traveling directly, not that you can be resurrected after death in the game. If you die, you will die, so you should be more careful. In addition, I would like to make a small comment. You are so good at writing heroes and soldiers of the same level, and I think your skills in writing soldiers are also very good. The levels of these arms are all about the same, but if you write a hero with a pair of 10,000 or a few thousand, are you writing the hero too powerful? Doesn't this make soldiers look useless? Shouldn't you write more to highlight the abilities of heroes, commanders, and troop blessings? You're so good at writing heroes, you don't even need soldiers, just become heroes, why waste so many resources? Also, you said that the territory is short of people, and heroes can directly grab them back. Why can't you bring in more people? There is another thing that I think is unreasonable. The undead troops are created without food or anything. Isn't it a bit outrageous? How can he exist without anything? Just like other types of troops who have to eat when they come out, it's not reasonable for you. Let me explain again, this is my little opinion and opinion. I only expressed my views and opinions because I liked it. If you don't like it, please don't criticize it.

There's no need to suppress the pig's feet, right? Are you planning to never level up again at level 10? Isn't it a bit of a joke for you to kill the clone of a god now? It is a god after all, so can it be killed casually? According to what you said, a few more twenty-eight-nine-year-olds will kill the gods directly. The gods are too cheap.

Crazy eating settings 😅, the author should count the settings issued by himself throughout the document, errors always occur

The player interaction part is so poorly written. The protagonist, being the first on the list, has never offended anyone, but as soon as he comes up, everyone gets it and kills him. We also gave out benefits later, but the result was still like this. No one cared about the benefits given by the protagonist and helped him speak up. Normal games like this kind of invincible boss are played by a bunch of licking dogs and dutiful sons, let alone this kind of game that is directly linked to one's own life? I'm too lazy to talk about the settings. After reading 700,000 words, the important settings are almost invisible. Of course, it's understandable. I already feel like I can't write anymore.

Unspeakable, laughing, veteran of hundreds of battles 🙂

The subject matter and gameplay are very to my liking, and this book should also have great potential. After reading it, I feel that the numerical settings have dragged down the book, which feels a bit pity After reading the previous dozens of chapters, the numerical and mechanical settings are somewhat casual, and the bonuses are 50% and 100% without careful setting; low-level soldiers can have various immunity abilities, and insect bodies can be immune to poisons, and curse immunity is completely unreasonable. Even if there is a restriction of the same level or just resistance? The description is not carefully set, which means that the result of the battle is based on the author's nonsense, and the satisfaction and rationality of the numerical values ​​are greatly reduced. In this regard, it is not comfortable to see, so it is better to copy the ready-made game data. The rough value is that there are 20 billion national lords. This is too scary and complicated. I don't understand why the setting is so large. The subsequent plot performance is no different from 220 million. Online games that I usually play can have a million online at the same time and have a super active forum and online experience. It is also difficult to set the trading system and prices for 20 billion players. It is really a problem for myself.

This novel really has a big problem with its pacing. It could have been written into 3,000 chapters. What a pity.

I was sent a 2,000 red envelope for recommendation votes and it was gone in two seconds. Damn you, I haven't received it yet. Come on!

The author should not write the story of the dark elf lord in the next book. I feel that the subject matter is a bit too old and is in the style of ten years ago or earlier. Today's readers are tired of this kind of subject matter and have no feeling for it. Personally, I think the setting must be more innovative, so as to attract new readers. The subject matter is in line with the current trend, so readers will like to read it. Writing a book requires personal passion. You have to be passionate about writing your own books that you like. Some authors blindly cater to the market. In the end, the more they write, the less passionate they are, and the quality becomes worse and worse, entering a vicious circle. But writing a book should not be based solely on personal preferences. If you write a clichéd book, you will be high on yourself, too few people will follow it, and it will not last long unless the author has a mine at home. Actually, the author has this problem in this book. There are too many conceited modalities and expressions in the text.