Players Who Enter the World of Martial Arts Games

When I first looked at the title of the book, it contained the words Time Travel, Martial Arts, and Online Games, indicating that this book is a time-traveling genre with elements of martial arts and online games. Next, read the introduction. The introduction is a sign. The introduction is well-written and makes people want to read the book. The introduction reveals the main plot of the book. The male protagonist travels through the world of martial arts online games to the villain Evil Lord. However, when he was a teenager (traveling decades in advance), he was framed as a thief and his martial arts was abolished. There is no such thing as right or wrong. As long as he has a clear conscience, let's see how the protagonist conforms to his destiny and breaks the Evil Lord's ultimate fate. No matter how vicissitudes of life, no matter how ups and downs. What controls people is the spirit and the unyielding will. See how the author writes a magnificent world, where the love and hatred of children are intertwined, there are bohemian knights, martial arts masters who are both good and evil, heroic heroes, lawless evil, and sanctimonious righteousness, waiting for you to understand one by one. In this world, the characters in it all have their own distinct personalities, which are condensed a lot. You can look at them objectively and appreciate the artistic conception. The penetration of true feelings is the inexhaustible source of the charm of the novel. Rereading it will give you a deeper understanding. After reading it roughly, I feel uncomfortable without vomiting.

A very classic image of a witch, basically one of the necessary heroines in many fairy tales, martial arts, and fantasy multi-heroine novels. It can really be said that it is poorly written. She is like all witches, unruly, willful, and has her own way of behaving. Not only the character in the book, but the readers also dislike her because she always tries to trick and make things difficult for the protagonist, which makes me very unhappy. She has not appeared in the current plot, but I have guessed what to write next. The image creation of the witch is nothing more than that, suppressing first and then promoting, creating a very unpleasant image in the early stage, full of shortcomings. Then through a story climax, a certain advantage in her is magnified, such as dying for morality, giving up everything for friendship or family. A very clichéd and classic story can establish the image of a witch who dares to love and hate. Naturally, the protagonist will no longer reject her, and then slowly develop, she will naturally develop feelings for the protagonist and become one of the heroines. If you don't do this, it can easily become a poisonous point that affects readers' reading experience. There are other advantages to this. The protagonist can continue to be his righteous knight, and some shameful things can be left to Shen Youdie to do (it feels a bit hypocritical...). Anyway, I think this plot may be more enjoyable, and the protagonist will not be subject to unnecessary pressure from public opinion, and then some bloody plots will appear. Of course this is a whitewashed version, but many readers agreed to let her die. This is also a big project and requires a lot of preparation to create a tragic character. This requires writing a long plot, and then Shen Youdie plays a very important villain role in it. On the one hand, he is against the protagonist, and on the other hand, he is secretly helping the protagonist. This kind of contradiction and conflict can vividly express the image of the witch. Of course, this requires strong writing power. In the end, the protagonist was tricked at a critical moment, and then the protagonist killed her. When she was on the verge of death, she had a memory kill or suddenly awakened to help the protagonist defeat the villain or something, a bitter drama, and then let her die silently in the protagonist's arms. Such a tragic character image was established. Making readers love and hate her is probably how this type of character is written. Of course, these are for reference only. It depends on how the author wants to write. I hope it can be written well.

Good-looking 🙂 The plot is smooth and the content is substantial. The settings in the game and the protagonist's personal experience are unfolded. It is very comfortable to read.

The protagonist is not aboriginal, and the article also mentions that he is constantly changing his mentality to integrate himself into the world. Therefore, I personally feel that some of the poisonous points are poisonous but acceptable. After all, the protagonist is still using modern thinking and methods to deal with problems intentionally or unintentionally. But there is one thing to say, isn't the protagonist practicing evil skills? He should be a little more crazy in dealing with things. He who restrains his hands seems a bit useless.

，，，，……？ The author wants to portray him as a righteous person, and the plot is also developing in this direction. I would like to give you a slightly cruel suggestion. In the following plots, let the evil lord's character influence the protagonist, and make the protagonist become a half-demon and half-saint. On the one hand, he is hoeing the strong and supporting the weak, and on the other hand, he is doing willful things and wantonly killing those corrupt and hypocritical righteous people. You can also write about the psychological conflicts of the protagonist, as well as the conflicts with the people close to him in this situation, describe him in a unique way, and then it is nothing more than successfully swallowing the evil lord's mind and retaining only the evil lord's power, and it will end successfully!

1. When Shen Youdie and the male protagonist meet for the first time, there is no problem with the stranger's attitude, "I don't know you, your strength is still low, completely worthless, it doesn't matter whether you kill him or not. Then it's okay for the male protagonist to say harsh words, but Liang Zi has formed a knot, it can be regarded as a grudge." The second meeting was at the teahouse. The male protagonist returned from his studies. The purpose here was to highlight that Shen Youdie had changed and had calmed down the young lady's temper, and then asked Shen Youdie to recognize the male protagonist and show off his strength. This was considered excessive. The third time, Shen Youdie was hunted down, and she directly kidnapped Liu Qiaoyu and threatened the male protagonist to fend off the pursuers. Note that at this time, the male protagonist's strength was completely higher than that of Shen Youdie, and then Liu Qiaoyu was directly kidnapped? Still when Shen Youdie was injured. Then the male protagonist killed the two younger ones and the older ones as a result of being injured. Shen Youdie had the means but didn't do anything at all. She was obviously showing the attitude of watching a show. It doesn't matter if your male protagonist dies or not. Anyway, you just need to hold off the pursuers. You have a tool-man attitude. And then after disgusting the male protagonist, you still want to win over him? The male protagonist, who was sold as cute and then magical, felt that Shen Youdie was cute and took her away with him. It was outrageous. A child threatened you with your valuables to do things for him. You were afraid that the things would be damaged and you paid him money to do it. Then the child gave you the things and said to you: You did a good job, you can be my subordinate from now on. Ridiculous? 2. Liu Qiaoyun first appeared in the discussion of the supporting role. Liu's father died and her relatives robbed her property, highlighting her misery and paving the way for her subsequent appearance. Liu Qiaoyun's official appearance was to sell his body to bury his mother. After the male protagonist finished, Liu's mother also died at this time, and his relatives wanted to sell Liu Qiaoyun. Then the male protagonist heard that Liu's father and Liu's mother were good people and planned to help, so he spent a hundred taels of Liu Qiaoyun. Yun was rescued from relatives and a brothel. At this time, she paid attention to her identity. A weak woman whose family was in decline and who had been bullied by others was bought by someone. The person also said that he would make her his sister. If you create an image at this time, someone with a gentle personality will be moved, but she will be a servant. Then, after many times of caring and persuasion by the male protagonist, he identified with this brother; he was so numb that he didn't care who he was sold to, he would only do things numbly, and then under the male protagonist's care, he believed that there was still true love in the world, and then changed; he had a cunning personality, and would agree to the male protagonist on the surface, and then quietly run away, and might meet again for some reason later; then the author chose Silly Baitian, Liu Qiaoyun easily believed in the protagonist, and then she actually regarded herself as a younger sister and directly intervened in the choice of the protagonist. Then there is the relationship between the protagonist and Liu Qiaoyun. There is no need for the protagonist to fight for Liu Qiaoyun, because Liu's father and Liu's mother can still make peace with the protagonist if they have a grudge. If one person is optimistic about the other person, he can help, but if he is just optimistic about the other person, he will never pay too much. After all, there will be nothing if he dies. Of course, the author wants to create an image of saving people to the end. This does not matter. 3. I can only say that in general, the author's writing is very good, the writing style and details are also good, the description is quite detailed, there is nothing uncomfortable, and the plot is well connected, but you still have to pay attention to the characterization, just like if Shen Youdie wants to win over the male protagonist, he must take action after the two older ones arrive, and he still needs to give something to resolve the conflict afterwards. He can't just pretend to be cute and get away with it. Then Liu Qiaoyun's identity is the eldest lady whose family has been ruined, which is already very miserable. People always have to grow up. What's more, the male protagonist and she are still strangers. It is impossible to be wary and prepared. At this time, people are under the eaves and have to bow their heads. As long as this eldest lady is smart, she will never be arrogant. In addition, the portrayal of the protagonist's image is a bit weak. The author hopes to portray a kind-hearted protagonist who likes to stay out of things but does not offend others. But kindness does not mean that you forgive him when others bully him. Necessary killing is needed. The protagonist should also be a little arrogant. He should be low-key, but he should not be bullied by all cats and dogs and still swallow his anger.

Slip away, you will die if you lick the dog, it is too poisonous, and it cannot be compared with the leader of the reborn demon sect. I will point out a few shortcomings. First point, in the first few chapters, a cult woman kills the protagonist, and the protagonist's strength is greatly increased and he can't take revenge. I can understand the fear of revenge from the forces behind it, but I don't understand if you accept someone's feet. If you really want to take revenge (I just have a bad temper), I just abolish martial arts. Killed her whole family, sold her to a brothel for three days and then killed her. Second point, the protagonist bought a sister halfway, and she was still the cult woman, and was hunted down. His so-called sister was threatened by the cult woman. I really didn't expect that if it were me, I would kill the cult woman first, and I don't want the so-called sister. Third point, I saw half of it and made a prediction. The author may either accept the cult woman halfway, or become a good friend, or die within a few hundred chapters. I bet on the former, or even the protagonist becomes the leader of the cult woman's sect.

I have read more than 50 chapters, and there are interesting points, but more poisonous points. I can't help but vomit. 1. Two of the three weapons were buried. . . Slightly Poison 2, the father of the flower picker, who was forced to do so by all the witches, broke his arm and jumped into the lake to survive, but he actually let the flower picker go. . . Very poisonous 3. The leader has already destroyed your Dantian and sent you to the Crazy Sword Sect. Going to the Crazy Sword Sect would be worse than death! , The protagonist abolished the head and his son Dantian. . . Very poisonous 4, sold himself to bury his father, like his sister who died in a car accident. Very Poisonous 5, I am running out of money at every turn, I have only ten or so taels of silver, I still stay in a hotel that costs one tael of silver a night, I kill two top masters without even touching the corpses, I am short of money again, and I am a rich couple. He actually doesn't pay attention to it, so just don't mention the money, it won't affect the plot. . Very poisonous 6. The witch threatens the protagonist and the two of you with the sister you bought. Afterwards, you feel good about the witch because she came back and shot an arrow. . . Poison After ignoring all the poisonous points above, there are actually some points to watch, such as: the part where the protagonist engages in a flower picking thief and his uncle, the IQ online plot is reasonable and exciting. . But the protagonist's IQ fluctuates up and down. It feels like the author wants the protagonist to forcibly reduce his intelligence, and the protagonist's IQ has to be reduced. Obviously this book should be considered excellent, but the reading experience is extremely uncomfortable. I don't like to read exciting stories. In fact, after more than 50 chapters, I didn't feel happy at all. I still felt flustered when I read it. It's just that the poisonous protagonist is a bit too smart. . Shuangwen enlightens others, this is the protagonist who enlightens others. . . I will continue to watch it, hoping that the plot will get better and better and less toxic. . . .

After reading more than 30 chapters, I met this woman Shen three times. The first time I wanted to kill the protagonist together, the second time I smashed the protagonist's table, and the third time I kidnapped the protagonist's sister and forced the protagonist to kill her enemy. There are so many things to say, it wastes my time and ruins my mood.

Since the author chooses not to write cool articles, he should not be afraid of attacks from book friends.

Poisonous point: Chapter 1.30, The male protagonist thinks that the daughter of a good man has been devoured by the clan and sold her body to bury her father for 50 taels. He then bids with others for the last 100 taels or whatever, and buys it. He thought that he would secretly take it back later or directly rob the rich and give to the poor, but he walked away in despair? What about your top-notch martial arts? It is really aggrieved. You obviously have the ability to change but you just choose to be cheated by bad guys? 2. In the next 31 chapters, the witch is hunted down, and then you are asked to take the blame and call your senior brother. You directly take the blame and fight with others? What about the revenge on the witch mentioned at the beginning of the novel? It only lasts for ten or twenty chapters, so forget it? Then I couldn't watch it any more. The plot in many places could obviously be better, but the continuous poisonous points in these chapters sent me away.

The writing is very good, it has the flavor of real martial arts, adventures, experiences, masters, and the most important thing is the tackiness of not striving for excellence. Nowadays, many protagonists in martial arts are not "chivalrous" enough. They tend to follow the trend and rely on the system to take advantage of others. They are competitive in fights and will retaliate against the enemy for their flaws. I don't think the behavior is heroic... Even if it is bad, it is very worldly. It is not like the devil in traditional martial arts, but like a street gangster. The main character in this book is pretty good so far, and I will keep following it.

I feel reassured when I see so many people supporting the author in the book review section. San Guan Zheng and Holy Mother are two different things and cannot be confused.

I can only say that if the author does not change the character of the protagonist, there will be fewer and fewer people. The old bookworm thinks that the writing style of this article is very good, but the character creation is not good. At least the protagonist's behavior towards this unprepared sister and disgusting shemale girl makes me very confused.

There is a lot of nonsense and no climax; the protagonist has a useless character and looks aggrieved; has the author ever played games?

The protagonist's IQ is comparable to Guo Jing's, and his emotional intelligence is comparable to Zhang Xiaofan. I can't live up to the readers' expectations.

This male protagonist has a very upright outlook on life. He also needs this kind of book as a starting point. Don't you get tired of watching the streets full of killings and decisiveness?

The protagonist seems to be Yazi who is not very smart.

I feel like the protagonist has no brains in what he does. He was poisoned and died in Chapter 14. He knew the secret but refused to kill him. He still kept him in charge because he was afraid that he would not die quickly enough? Because your senior brother knew that you were falsely accused, and then the woman didn't come forward, you said that he was stupid? I feel like the author writes based on his feelings, and the poisonous points are everywhere in just a few chapters.

A level 5 author with more than 400 comments. I thought the writing was very good, but after reading ten of them, it was too verbose. While scrolling through the comment area, someone posted dozens of comments in a row. Is it so obvious to criticize someone? Except for being a bit verbose, I have divided the contents of one page into two. I don't feel that there is anything poisonous about it at the moment. Maybe it's because I have high poison resistance?

There are several hurdles to pass in reading this book, let me go through them one by one The first hurdle is that the protagonist cannot break the game at the beginning, which does not conform to the mode of a cool novel. Some readers who like the protagonist's IQ to be online abandon the book. The second level, Feijianmen did not kill the enemy's whole family when taking revenge, which is not in line with the character of the evil master who is decisive and decisive. Some readers want to see the evil master killing everyone, so they do not read it. The third level is to recruit Liu Qiaoyu. This plot can be said to be inexplicable. Although the author forcibly patched it up and said that she is like a sister, it can barely be said. But some readers don't like the cumbersomeness of the vase and abandon the book The fourth level, the most poisonous point, Shen Youdie actually easily captured Liu Qiaoyu as a hostage. You must know that the protagonist here is no longer a newbie who has just traveled through time. He used treasures to plot enemies before, which is one of the cool points. It gives people a feeling of online IQ, but suddenly he becomes a novice in the world. The contrast between before and after is huge. Some readers who are more particular about logic can't stand it either. There are still some levels in the back, but after passing the first four levels, the rest is not a big deal. After all, I really love fans.

After watching it for a long time, I don't know what state the two of them are in.

The eldest princess is currently described from the side and has not appeared frontally in the article. She is a behind-the-scenes boss figure. Currently, my attitude towards the protagonist is still a bit vague. I don't know whether he will be a rival or a supporter of the protagonist in the future. As a powerful figure, the eldest princess will have a greater influence on the plot. I hope that the plot can be arranged in a higher style and not be too down-to-earth 😁 The most important thing is not to be included in the harem, not to be included in the harem, not to be included in the harem! Say important things three times!

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As a clan character, Chu Xiuhui is currently not a transitional role. Some plots and descriptions of other characters must be introduced by Chu Xiuhui. I don't know if further conflicts will be arranged in the future. If she is demoted from a princess to a princess and then marries the Tian family successfully, she will be a tragic character and there will probably be no drama in the future. If the subsequent plot is a deliberate plan by the eldest princess, it is estimated that it will continue to be active for a while. At present, there is no way to develop a relationship with the protagonist, and there is no possibility of buying a large amount of princess shares. I look forward to the subsequent development!

I just read Chapter 20, and one thing I'm confused about is the division between good and evil. The Kuangdao Sect is known as the first righteous sect in the area, so it must be cultivating Haoran Zhengqi. But whether the flower thief or his master uncle can also cultivate this kind of Haoran Zhengqi? Won't they go crazy? Or is Haoran's righteousness just a simple kind of vitality in this book? Then why do those who practice the other four paths have their xinxing affected even if they are evil sects?

If you don't accept one by one, how can you be in the world?

Author, why don't you just write about the city? It's really good like the previous movie "The Crocodile Sneaks"

After writing a dozen more chapters, I can get married and have children on the spot.

If you see a lot of female protagonists in martial arts, you can give up.