Xiaoyaopai

Can the protagonist be decisive in killing? He is indecisive, like a mother-in-law. In the middle and later stages, he will have an affair with a woman. From a novice to a top in the world, his strength will only increase. If his brain does not grow, he will not be able to summarize and reason. Are he stupid, ignorant, and weak? If you weren't the protagonist, you would have died ten thousand times

Witnessed the process of becoming a god in a martial arts book. . .

There is an old-fashioned way of writing, but it is excellent. It is definitely one of the best among martial arts novels.

When I read Chapter 270, I felt that the protagonist's choice to lure the devil seemed too uneducated. When I was worried about doubts, I suddenly saw such a book, and I didn't doubt it. Moreover, I went with Miss Youjia. I didn't even know whether I had the magic book on me? Don't you have any worries at all? It looked good from the front, but when I saw it here I felt ruined. Can't stand it anymore

I saw a snake 🐍 that was as thick as a bucket and more than ten feet long. I felt that this snake was very slender.

Why is there no Platinum Master for such a beautiful book?

What about the magic technique to search for souls? Why can't the protagonist even use the exercises he knew before? Has the author changed?

Writing so many words about martial arts is awesome

A bit like a replica of Tian Long Ba Bu?

There are so many people using this tool, but so few people comment on it.

I didn't dare to start after seeing this word count.

The reward is 10,000 yuan, and I have been chasing it for more than 3 years. Come on, author🤓

The Evil Lord of Killing is the elixir!

The character displayed by the author often affects the behavior and personality of the protagonist in the book. When reading this book, I felt that I was always aggrieved. As a martial arts novel, that is, eating meat with a big mouth, drinking from a big bowl, roaring when there is injustice on the road, and taking action when it is time to take action. When the author is portraying the characters, the protagonist Huang Xiao is often timid. The author always wants to control a certain degree. It should be because of the writing style, which makes it feel very stiff when watching it, without that sense of fun. In terms of plot, although it has been improved a lot, there is no such thing as digging holes by oneself and jumping by oneself, but there is no feeling. Isn't it particularly awkward? For example, when the Poison God Valley destroyed the family, Ling Tianya made the three Poison God Valley ancestors fake death in order to stimulate the protagonist's demonic nature.

Don't listen to some people's nonsense. The early stage of this book is absolutely a masterpiece. The reason why so many people criticize it is that the author is too good at making money because of his grades. The pace is too slow later on. One chapter is divided into several chapters, which is too tedious. It is recommended that you can abandon the book after reading the first world and your mentality will not explode.

The more I read this book, the more frustrated I feel. Now that I have the strength, I still kneel down and lick the royal family, one bite at a time like an adult. When I read this book, everyone said it was good, but in fact it was just average, and the later chapters were even more poisonous. Don't look at it, I've been poisoned! The writing style of this author's book is too knee-jerk. It cannot describe the chivalrous spirit of martial arts, nor can it describe the pyrotechnics of low-level characters. Garbage!

The protagonist was fucked over and over again, and grew up while being fucked. The whole story was either poisoned or seriously injured. As long as the opponent was a human being, he couldn't beat him. He had practiced for countless years, and he relied on the tortoise to outlast the enemy.

Personally, I think the bottle of longevity may be obtained by Huang Xiao. In short, Huang Xiao will benefit a lot from this competition for the pill of longevity!

It has nothing to do with being carefree, it's called The Adventures of the Curious Scholar: Even a Fool Can Become an Immortal

Thirty years ago, it might have been an extremely common martial arts novel. But in this day and age, it can be called a retro style.

Why don't you just write about traveling through Jin Yong's martial arts world? All the martial arts and world views are copied. Isn't the death talisman the life and death talisman in Tianlong? The Tianshan Six Yin Kung Fu, the Tianshan plum-breaking hand, and whether the protagonist should lick a dog like this. A day or two after his master died, he went to lick a woman who had a crush on him. When he saw someone with a high status, he immediately knelt down and gave up decisively. It's better to read Jin Yong's fan fiction.

Let me tell you, Qingfeng is actually the real protagonist. His master died, his family was wiped out, he jumped off a cliff and encountered a secret treasure, Huang Yao tried his best to break through, but Qingfeng did it easily. Let alone the martial arts world, this man is actually the author's own son, the real protagonist!

After becoming the master of the Demon Palace, he is still so useless! There is no sense of being a master at all. Even though there are old monsters from thousands of years ago, the protagonist is described as too timid and does not have the domineering power of a powerful person! Previously, the master of the Demon Palace was said to be extremely powerful, but now he is an ordinary master. Every time, the realm ability setting mentioned before is very impressive, and then after the protagonist reaches the realm, it doesn't feel particularly powerful, it's just mediocre, and it wastes the readers' expectations! It is set that the strength of the sleeping palace master will increase after a thousand years, so the strength of the second palace master must be very high, right?

The protagonist behaves like he has never seen a woman before. He starts licking a beautiful one when he sees one. Even if the master is dead, he starts licking her. It poisoned me to death.

How many people can read this book is because it deliberately leads people to Jin Yong's novels. Borrowing people's curiosity, they think the protagonist is Xiaoyaozi. In fact, this book is really average. The plot is dull and rigid, and the protagonist has no characteristics at all. He completely follows the crowd and has no independent opinion. There are too many adventures and coincidences. He is beaten by people again and again, and he never succeeds. Every time, the plot ends with an anticlimax or a climax, or there is no climax or climax in the book at all. It completely subverted the image of Xiaoyaozi as a god-man.

You are not invincible at the same level, so why are you so carefree? Your strength depends entirely on chance encounters? !

You are an awesome author. This book made me watch it from freshman year to graduation and I haven't finished it yet. If I don't accept anyone else, I will accept you. I am willing to call you the strongest.

Despite the title of Xiaoyao's book, the protagonist and Xiaoyao have nothing to do with each other. The protagonist has no opinion and no self-esteem. I couldn't stand it anymore after forty chapters, one unreasonable plot after another. The protagonist has four big characters on his forehead, "Go with the flow." Whenever a character comes out, the protagonist is clearly arranged. It is true that the protagonist needs to grow up, but cerebral palsy does not. No matter how much cerebral palsy grows, it will only be a well-developed cerebral palsy.

The whole story is like a lazy woman's foot wrap, smelly and long. The male protagonist Huang Xiao is just a spermatozoon, he can't walk when he sees a beautiful woman.

Let me remind everyone that this book is a masterpiece before Chapter 1043. No one can beat it in the martial arts section. I can read these chapters three times. Don't read the rest. Just treat it as the protagonist failed to break through the martial arts world and went into seclusion. The advantage of this book is that it creates an ancestor of the Xiaoyao sect who looks a bit silly. This protagonist's deceit is really eye-catching. Because of this name, I don't know how many people want to see the Xiaoyaozi who can be free and easy to defeat the whole world from the beginning, the kind who recruits disciples from all over the world. I do not recognize all the chapters after Chapter 1044, and think it is a ghostwriting. Until now, I have not been able to see the end of the ancient world. I feel that the only relatively successful character in the martial arts world is Huo Lian, and even the character of the protagonist has changed.