
A Travelogue of Developing Another World
异界开发见闻录
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 879k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 4y ago
- English
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340Chapters
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10.2kFans
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Traveling Between Two Worlds, Starting as a Reseller
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The protagonist, such a precious gem, actually became a scout? I don't know what he was thinking. He made the countries in that world so stupid. Only the protagonist can control the portal; aren't they afraid of problems arising in such an unknown situation? If anything goes wrong, it's all over. Anyone with a brain knows they should keep the protagonist well protected in the rear.
I don't dare read these kinds of books, for fear of being reported for trolling. If I get reported, they'll definitely be shut down. Several of them have been like that. Sigh 😔
Let's put it this way: once it's confirmed to be true, within 10 seconds, a no-fly zone will be established above your head; within 30 seconds, your military region will be on high alert, missile units will prepare for missile defense; within 5 minutes, several J-20 fighter jets will patrol overhead 24/7; within 10 minutes, several helicopters carrying special forces and security personnel will…
It has a distinctly stupid feel to it. No one would make the foolish decision to send the only person connected to the time portal to be a scout and a vanguard. They were talking about his safety one minute, and then they agreed to let him go as a scout. Didn't they think about the consequences? Or is it that they can't write anything without a protagonist?
In reality, going to Shanghai Jiao Tong University is indeed a good choice. However, the skill requirements for an author writing novels differ tenfold between submitting them to a national journal and developing them independently. If you can write well on the national journal path, you can become a master at anything. Military, technology, society, officialdom, organization and mobilization, scientific research, weaponry—any flaw in any of these areas becomes a fatal flaw.
The logic is too flawed. How could a country possibly send the protagonist to another world, let alone a scout? Are you kidding me? Delete it.
First of all, it's not my prejudice, but starting the first chapter by describing how incredibly handsome he's become is just too much. While it's true the protagonist is good-looking, almost 90% of novels these days start with him being incredibly handsome in the first chapter, which is aesthetically tiring. You're way behind the masters.
Regarding the protagonist's deployment to the front lines (must read)! First of all, I apologize. I didn't expect that this would have such a negative impact on so many readers. Jinshu thought her explanation would convince everyone, but in the end, it turned out that Jinshu hadn't considered things thoroughly. Therefore, I sincerely apologize here.
Anyone who watches a bit more military films and documentaries wouldn't portray the military and the country as so idiotic as this author. He's just riding the wave of the "open door" trend and playing the same old tricks.
These days, it seems like anyone, no matter who they are, dares to write about state-run content, right?