
Pirate Gravity Controller
海贼之引力操控者
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 202k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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93Chapters
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It's so nonsense. The ability to control gravity can actually absorb fatigue. It's really a flesh ball fruit that can be used for everything.
When some people in the comment area mentioned the Gravity Fruit, they tried to imitate the science of the real world, while other unexplainable fruits imitated the science of the Pirate World. Very possible😂
I suggest the author take a look at a character in the Zombie Brother comics, Space Traveler. His superpower is gravity, but it is super developed. Thousands of tons of gravity, gravity stone rain. Gravity Ripple, Gravity-Storm Apocalypse, Gravity Spear, and many more, such as gravity controlling the sea to form a water spiral spear to pierce the enemy.
From my point of view, the writing is good so far, and the children like it very much. In the future, I hope to mention the following small ideas for the author's reference: 1. I hope that the drawings will be pure and neat, and don't make some strange things here and there. For example: there is a pirate book, a big sword, a holy light, a heroic spirit, an infinite sword system, and a Kamen Rider. It's a mess. I hope the author's lottery can be more normal and not draw the weird things mentioned above. The painting style is like a hodgepodge. 2. If you don't know how to write emotional dramas, please be sure not to write dramas in which women are greasy, because it will be disgusting if you don't write them well. Please try not to write dramas about women. You can warm the bed if you want, but please do it in one go and don't write greasy things. If possible, the child really hopes that you will not accept a harem. Harem articles are the most annoying. Perona is very good, please treat her well. 3. If possible, please try to make the dialogue and painting style closer to the direction of sea heroes, real men, and macho men like pirates, so that they will have a strong sense of identity when reading (ps: I personally like men with the height of generals) 4. The most important thing is not to forget, the ultimate characteristic of pirates, various distinctive laughter, this is the soul. If you don't mind, please design a distinctive laughter for the protagonist. I hope that the protagonist is a heroic sea hero, a real man with incomparable arrogance. I hope that I can work hard to shape him. Create various heroic and domineering aspects of various sea overlords, and don't write them like fools (of course, if the writing is of this level, how to create a local character that looks like a pirate can refer to the admiral Huang Gou next door, this one is written very much like a pirate). That's about all I have in mind. I hope I can write better and better. If you don't care, I'm optimistic about you. ps: Remember to make the protagonist a domineering and heroic real man. It would be better if he has the height of a general ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
It's chapter 20 and you haven't gotten your own shadow yet? The progress is too slow, right?
The first thing that comes to mind when using the Gravity Fruit is Pain's Tendo skills, Shinra Tenzheng, Wanxiang Tianyin, Earth Explosion Sky Star ╮(‵▽′)╭Theoretically, the Gravity Fruit that Golden Lion and Fujitora can do can also be done
When I saw the heroine, I immediately collected it. It is so rare for Perona to have a single heroine. I hope the author will write it well.
The protagonist is 2.6 Meters tall, Perona? ? ? Can't get in
Gravity control, do you also want to speed up time?
More Perona drama. I haven't watched the single heroine Perona yet.
When the body dies, the shadow disappears. When the protagonist passes through, isn't the original body dead? Still have to find the shadow
Why is the update discontinued? Where is the author?
I thought it was to develop various applications of the fruit, but this is the result. It feels like selling a sheep's head to a dog's head. In the same fruit article, other people's imagination is so open, you will shit your pants right away.
The lottery persuaded me to quit 😥
It seems that Pirates don't have fruits that can directly control the force. Fujitora emits gravity waves, Kidd emits magnetic waves, and Golden Lion emits touch control. The protagonist directly manipulates the feeling of natural gravity, which is a bit awesome.
Do you believe in gravity I admire the first person to eat mushrooms because they may be poisonous
The gravity play was so bad, and I kept using a knife as an attack method later on. If you don't develop your gravity well, just play with knives. Lost the watermelon and picked up the sesame seeds.
I have an idea The body eats a devil fruit What will happen if Moriah controls the shadow and eats a devil fruit?
I see in the character file that the male protagonist is 281cm tall. Is this true? The heroine wrote 160! Is this gap between a father and his daughter? In fact, you can look at the civilians, pirate minions, and ordinary navy in the pirate world. Their heights are all normal! Only some of the top officials of the government navy, captains of the Shichibukai Yonko, and officials are unusually tall! That is to reflect the importance of the role! (Except for special races) Don't believe that the average person in the pirate world is 3 meters! 99.9% Of the people in the pirate world are under 2 meters tall! So give the protagonist a normal height! Under 220 Especially if your heroine is of normal height