Ultimate Firepower

This chapter is so awesome that I read it twice. The first time I read it, I was completely confused. The second time I read it, I read the fighting action. It was like watching a wonderful martial arts movie. With a swing and a lean, the two of them got up and down in just a breath. They took advantage of the force and passed the enemy. With a backhand swing, a punch forward, two more people died. After stepping forward, he pulled and collapsed. With a smooth swing, he killed two more people and stepped aside to let them pounce. The enemy, jump up and knock away the enemy's weapons to resolve the crisis, hit the enemy's weak spot, hit the head with a swing of the hammer, turn around and kill 5 people with one swing of the hammer, and easily kill 5 people with the hostage in hand.

I persuaded the protagonist to quit from the seventh chapter. There is a sense of innocence and stupidity in the lines of the residual words. It is completely different from the one you wrote before. I am afraid that this kind of character is not allowed to live in the underground world. I have eaten too many scraps.

Following from the previous book, the plot advancement, detailed description and writing style are impeccable. But I feel that so far, the main profession in this book is said to be a killer, but in fact his methods are no different from those of a PMC or a mercenary. According to the current development routine, no matter which profession is mentioned above, you can spread out your network of connections and intelligence to crush your opponents. The battle is also violent melee combat, and you can crush them invincibly in melee combat (currently there is not much difference between them, one pistol and one cold weapon). From a sensory perspective, it's like re-doing the old book again. To sum up, this work is equivalent to a green leaf among the many text garbage. It is a good work for readers who have never seen similar works. For me (or people who don't like to repeat the plot after reading similar works), I feel a sense of aesthetic fatigue. It is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it.

The characterization is great and the character interactions are interesting. Even if there are a few people inside chatting, eating and drinking, it is very interesting. Because the interaction is interesting, I look forward to seeing the protagonist and supporting characters meet again later. The book is very special. The protagonist is a chivalrous character, and it pays attention to character creation and interaction. Each character is very vivid. This is a relatively rare writing method in online books at present. I like it very much.

Why are you deleting the comment? If it doesn't look good, let's stop talking about it.

Coming from a single-day monthly ticket holder, why does the author describe the characters and talk about who, who, and what? Repeating a word too much can cause discomfort. Also, after reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that compared with other novels, the transition is not very good. It always feels a little inconsistent when reading, and the characters' actions before and after seem inconsistent.

When I first read the title, I thought it was about military affairs, but I didn't expect it to be about urban martial arts that interested me. This is the first time I read a book by a big guy, it's really good. I like the character of the protagonist, he is very charming, and I like his behavior and outlook. I read that Fang Zhenwu was mentioned in this chapter. I'm interested. I'll go take a look when I have time.

This book is like a joke, you just put the pen in your hand and you can write whatever you want. After two hundred chapters, you are no longer writing a story, you are just writing about politics with your pen. It is no different from listening to an old man discussing politics after drinking. I really can't stand it anymore.

A waste of my book money 🙂🙂🙂

The writing is very good, there is no system, there is no immortality, it is like a prequel to the King of War, it is down to earth and very detailed.

Can't book at all.

What we want is truth

After reading your book, I can't read other people's books🌿

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I met a 30-year-old young woman on the Internet. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good. But she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She lives in my city. Not far away, we made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. We didn't choose to meet somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have a beauty function, but when she got out of that Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She is much prettier than in the photo, and she is also my favorite type. She also recognized me and didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she suggested a hug. I said yes. She smelled particularly good. I jumped and sat in the milk tea shop for a while. We went to have a meal, and she basically didn't eat much. She spent the whole process peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. After finishing the meal and walking out of the restaurant, she held my hand and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home. I said I would take a taxi back, but she insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Update ten chapters to unlock subsequent content.

However, martial arts novels need to be transformed. We can no longer write martial arts novels using traditional martial arts methods. First, the martial arts genre of Jianghu needs to be integrated into the urban genre, using an urban method, because modern ancient martial arts existed before, whether bodyguards, mercenaries, etc., Writing urban ancient martial arts can give readers the imagination that maybe there are really such powerful people in the world. Second, Gu Wu is integrated into historical time travel, and historical literature has also been in decline in the past two years. It happens to be assisted by Gu Wu, but it needs to be written by someone who is good at writing history, focusing on history, and Gu Wuwei is assisted, especially since Gu Wu cannot have the upper hand in the novel. Therefore, authors of historical novels need to do specialized research on martial arts knowledge. The decline of traditional martial arts novels is inevitable. With Jin Guliang at the forefront, few can surpass it, so let's open up another line. Maybe this is also what the website needs to plan for. First of all, the author is good at writing urban or historical novels, and then he must really study martial arts knowledge. Martial arts cannot be the main part, otherwise the novel will lose its vitality. It can only be used as an assistant, but martial arts requires proficiency.

When I read Chapter Seventy-Eight, I couldn't stand it anymore, because I really don't understand why the Garden organization needs to exist. Did I miss something? In these chapters, this organization is not a carrier of memory, and it is not used to place emotions and beliefs. It also does not reflect the special relationship channels of any ancient organization. If we compare it to a company, its most valuable and competitive asset is its killer. But now it has no killer. To put it simply, it is an empty shell. In such an empty shell with only money left, someone has to rebuild it. When the assets are not regulated and the things belong to whoever is in their hands, a person who buys Bitcoin only buys 6,000 and has no special beliefs, memories, or emotions. If he does not take away the assets to enjoy life, he must continue to work in the name of the garden. He is not afraid of killing his opponent who wiped out his organization. I just can't understand why this is. Where is his self-motivation? This organization doesn't seem to have a great mission. It's not reflected anywhere. Isn't the business of killing people just to make money? You can't logically think that making money is to be a killer, right? Have you filled this hole behind the scenes? Now that I read it, I feel like how to describe this organization. It's like reading a script about a man being pushed off a cliff by a woman, but the specific content is that the woman was talking about the Huanglongjiang faction with Bluetooth, watching the sunset with tears, and pushed the man by the way. She pushed the plot, but the push was particularly inexplicable...

My name is Gao Yi, and I am very unlucky. I have been practicing martial arts since I was a child, and I wanted to become a fighting star. In order to become famous, I competed with the famous Kung Fu masters on the Internet, but I never wanted to be a "master" without respecting martial ethics. I was blackmailed and lost all the house left by my parents. This time I came to Thailand for a martial arts competition. As soon as I entered the door, I was shot with the "American Iai Slash". …… When I woke up, I found myself lying on the operating table. When I opened my eyes slightly, thinking that the doctor in a white coat next to me was the doctor rescuing me, I heard him say: "Hey, this kid was shot in the left chest and he is not dead yet. It seems that he is a mirror image of a person whose organs are in the opposite position to normal people. Congratulations to the boss, this heart should be sold for a good price." My heart was hanging in my stomach in an instant. Fortunately, I have practiced martial arts since I was a child and am proficient in Bagua, Xingyi, and Baji. I am not a showman like Teacher Ma. I took the opportunity to grab the scalpel and performed a carotid artery surgery on the doctor on the right. I also performed an eye and brain nerve surgery on the doctor on the left. After wiping the boss's throat, I performed a "monkey stealing peach" surgery on the last little Karami who was holding a gun. Then I chose to lie back on the operating table with the gun and pretend to be dead, and quickly emptied the magazine when the last two people who rushed in from outside approached. After I finished cleaning up these little Karami, I had lost too much blood and almost fainted. I could only use the "boss" phone to dial SOS at the last moment and call the emergency help on the dark web. ...... After I woke up, the man who rescued me immediately told me that I owed him one hundred thousand dollars in compensation and thirty-one thousand and forty-six dollars in medical expenses, and asked me how to pay. I can only tell him helplessly that I don't have a penny now. He told me it didn't matter, he was interested in me and he could pay for it physically. So, I naturally became a killer, a killer who only kills bad guys in order to make money and pay off debts, but has a bottom line. The first thing I did when I became a killer was to practice marksmanship, because I found that times seemed to have changed. {"TopicId":"995701360950116352","TopicName":"Amway Famous Scene"}

Trump was shot. He tilted his head habitually. His ears were bleeding. He was so lucky. Suddenly, he thought of Asamyev, who was protected by a black box and was killed on the snowy mountain by firepower. All kinds of misfortunes were turned into good luck. He was really lucky.

My brother is probably tired, and today's update is so perfunctory. If he has such an attitude, it would be better not to update at all. It seems that I am being unreasonable and troublesome... That's all. My brother is usually so free and easy, but I have suffered a lot from my sister-in-law. One or two chapters a day should be enough, but my sister and I seem to be a little petty.

I don't know when, "IQ Online" became a dispensable label and the choice of a few authors I don't know when, looking at the choices of most authors, you came up with the idea of ​​writing yourself At every moment when inspiration strikes, you write down the creativity, looking forward to using this creativity to add to your own work Every time At a moment when you are not understood, you open your book and look at the protagonists and supporting characters, as if you have become them, and they have become your close friends And one day, you suddenly find this comment in the vast sea of books, and suddenly encounter this book, you may get a friend, get an understanding, and get some ideas...

There is no problem with the main line of the story, but there is a problem with the character of the protagonist. If you are a martial arts enthusiast, or simply have a family tradition of martial arts, there is no problem at all. Even if you follow up with martial arts apprenticeships, it is acceptable But if you insist on emphasizing that kung fu is killing skills, it will confuse your grandma. If you don't do it well, you should be prepared to be beaten by a group and beaten with a black gun Nothing (if you can, you can lie in the morgue) If you are not sensible, just go out and enter the world. You have a family history and a famous teacher to guide you Of course they can all be showy, but they are also experienced. Who dares to let you out if they know your thoughts? If your killing skills are handed down by your master, he will also teach you the life-saving method of walking in the world. You should be sensible. This situation should be known Where can I pick up a mission that never returns This is why I can't see it. The infinite loop bug The more backgrounds and skills are more prominent, the less likely they will appear at the beginning of the story

I'm sorry, I shouldn't have criticized you before. I used to think that the episode in Afghanistan was pure bullshit. A few people took out the Afghan prince with pistols. It was so fucked, until I saw this 😊

After reading more than 10 chapters, it feels like reading Tuo💩. Now that the Internet is so developed, I have never seen a real killer. Have I never seen entertainment works related to killers? Even if the protagonist is a novice, he can't be so mentally retarded, right? There is also the middleman. The part where the protagonist uses his super brain to guess that he has a grudge against some group is so childish. I feel like I am watching two elementary school students having a conversation. I am very curious whether the people who can watch it are like the characters in it. They are full of wisdom.

All the flowers he had been waiting for had faded, and enthusiastic book friends urged him in posts.

It ended too hastily, and it was a bit unfinished, as if it was over as soon as I took off my clothes. It was very uncomfortable! Should I write 2? You haven't published any extras? If the author doesn't write 2, he will write two extras. Please. Everyone, please support me.

Example: When killing Prince Feisali, he was actually able to get Prince Feisali to cancel the mission. . . Then the question arises: the task is public, and the task can be canceled at any time, so is it fair to the darknet killers who have already taken the task? Some darknet killers may have been preparing for a mission for a long time. What should the killer do if they cancel? How to compensate?

How to live stream a murder? If I design an accidental death, do I still have to hold a cell phone nearby to record it? Or maybe I poison, but I don't run away after the poisoning, and I also take photos of the poisoning process and the scene of the other person's death? Are you afraid that others won't be able to catch me? In addition, human organizations have loopholes. Which killer would upload his own photos to the Internet? Is the dark web safe? Will the reviewer sell you? And the killer is a high-risk profession. Don't you give a deposit before accepting the task? Those who have one foot in the gate of hell will not be given settlement allowance. . . The setting and writing style of this book are not as good as the new one and the previous one. I'm sorry, I gave it up.

One book is not as good as the other, and dogs don't even read it.

It's almost December. Where's the new book? Give me some time.