Creating Myths, Starting with One Piece

Seeing that the first chapter talks about cause and effect, and the memory of the original owner is causing trouble, it really makes people quit. I believe there are many people who don't like this.

You wrote it wrong. As for Hawkeye, he has not yet become the world's swordsman. You directly wrote that he has become

A sandbox creation novel in pirate skin

I feel that the author is so lonely. He should use love to generate electricity, that's right

Can you build a system for yourself and play with it?

The author avoids lightning~ 113-----117 is poisonous, skip it directly and it will not affect your reading. This paragraph is the product of emotional problems. Others are fine.

Author, why are you writing more and more messy and messy? And write a parallel one, what the hell. At least write the only one. It's getting more and more chaotic,

You should write down what benefits pig's feet bring to the group members, otherwise they will become money-spreading boys. Another thing is to grasp the frequency of pig's feet appearing. There is still something to write in the front. If the strength is too strong later, it will be difficult to grasp.

I think it's okay, the main character is pretty good, don't ruin it

I was moved when I saw that there was no heroine and no ambiguity. I clicked in to read the first chapter. I didn't praise the pirates. I fell in love with it. I liked Luffy and the others, but there was indeed someone who escaped from prison... It was not easy to finally see an author who has a positive outlook on life and writes about pirates. I used to read Become a Pirate fanfic (but I only watched Pirates), but I didn't like Akainu because of the incident between Robin and Ace and the actions of Akainu's hawks. But some authors are really too good at the Black Navy, especially the Black Akainu. I hate him too, but I have to admit that Akainu protects civilians in the overall situation, and is just a hawk. And what that author did to Akainu really disgusted me (I won't say it, I don't want to say it, it's very disgusting), and I suddenly turned to being a fan of Pirates (except for a few) and a fan of Marine Road because of these two pirates. I especially hate those who join the Navy, but later plan to quit the Navy, causing the Navy's reputation to be damaged. If you don't like the Navy, don't use the Navy as a stepping stone if you have the ability. It's understandable if there are extenuating circumstances. Some people are ready to betray the Navy before joining, or just after joining. It's really annoying (that's what the author is like). Seriously, this is the first time I've hated a series because of one author. After I became a fan of the navy, I found that there are cute spots everywhere. Ahhh, I like the navy so much. I am very surprised!