Abyss Slavemaster

When writing this article, I just caught up with the latest chapter 70. Since the introduction is weak, I will write one here so that everyone will not miss it: After the destruction of the old world, humans are still being born continuously from the "Human Manufacturing Factory". In the doomsday [Ringed City], they are lingering. Alien species, crazy killing machines, mummy pilots, they are struggling between light and darkness. Tang Hao, a time traveler from another world, unexpectedly possesses the ability to control humans. Faced with the people from other worlds who worship him as a god, he decides to use his tricks to pretend to be the "lord" in their mouths. Tags: Post-apocalyptic, farming and territory construction, science fiction, machinery Comments below: The novel is pretty good. If labeled, it would be post-apocalyptic farming science fiction. Games like this are too real. The plot conflicts and writing style are both up to a standard that can be tried. The only shortcoming is that the characterization is not good. It is still very promising at present. There are many doubts and clues, which can give readers the desire to read further, including why the world has become like this, territory construction, social development and other very interesting farming elements. If I were to comment, I would still recommend it. ps: 1 The term "Ringcheng" was not mentioned in the article, but I thought about it and it was very appropriate, so I used it. 2 It's time for the author to clean up the comment area. Those badmouthers seriously affect the perception of new readers. I almost believed it. 3 The classification of fantasy is very strange. Normally, this should be considered science fiction. Maybe the author thought that science fiction must be reasonable, so he chose fantasy. However, in fact, according to the outrageousness of science fiction in the current Internet literary world, your book can definitely be considered science fiction. {"NickName":"Dentists love to pull teeth","UserId":230989762}Give me some sperm

Why did the slave master of the abyss change his name to the Virgin of the Abyss?

That Catwoman was a failure. Maybe the author wanted to make her into a cute, lively and alert type, but I think the "cute" and "lively" are too much. When interacting with the serious and tall image formed by the protagonist "Lord of the Abyss" and other settings, it makes people feel that Catwoman's attitude towards the protagonist is even a little presumptuous and becomes more and more intense. The protagonist chose to ignore Catwoman when she first started to be "presumptuous". Later, when Catwoman entered the temple, she directly climbed up the statue of the protagonist to take off her helmet to see the protagonist's true nature. Yong, this series of plots made me a little bit poisoned. The protagonist's mentality was to avoid Catwoman. After Catwoman's "attempted action", she felt relieved, "Fortunately, she didn't...". This creates a great contrast and contradiction with the protagonist's character as the "master" of Catwoman and all survivors. You are the master, but you have no majesty that matches your identity. Another thing I want to say is that when Catwoman discovered that the eyes of the protagonist's statue were different from usual, she did not think about a lot of possibilities such as "divine manifestation", "special spells", "hallucinations" and so on. She directly came to the conclusion that "the statue is the protagonist's true body" and was convinced of it. There were obviously many more reliable conjectures than this, but she insisted on the unlikely one. This plot is also poisonous.

No, no, in writing they are called Abyss Slavers, two synonyms for darkness, and they also write about the direction of light, a negative or a positive?

These chapters of Dragon Girl have poisoned me to death. They are both edible and cute. . Complete poison points. . You worked so hard to collect food in the early stage, and then it will eat more than half of you. . Forcibly explaining the combat power is overwhelming. . I know some people will say that the black dragon has high combat power. Forget it, after reading books for so many years, you still don't understand what these authors are thinking. Of course, there will definitely be a scene in the later stages where the Black Dragon Girl saves the entire team, but she will definitely not be the main character in the end. If you don't like this kind of character, skip these chapters.

If the protagonist still has a bright future in this environment, I will send you to the street.

In a black dye vat, you can still wash white and show off. Just say this to you, it's definitely a novice.

Just my humble opinion, I hope the author can change the title of the book. To be honest, I came in for "Abyss" and "Slave Master". I thought it would be a good dark novel, but after reading it, I found that it was not. The protagonist cannot be said to be kind, but he is far from the standard of darkness, not to mention that he will become a "god" later on. It would be much better to change the title of the book. After all, it currently attracts mostly readers of dark literature, but some of them do not like the plot development very much, and those who do like the plot development do not notice or are not attracted by this name.

Selling dog meat as a sheep's head, showing love everywhere, more than 20 people in the team escaped with supplies during the war, but no one was sent to hunt them down or held accountable? Just pretend to say that I won't be punished severely next time? People on both sides started fighting. You came to break up the fight but ended up bleeding yourself and giving away technology? Just change your name to Our Lady of Doom.

I was really attracted by the title of the book, but this is the result.

After reading 130+ chapters, I have always had a question, why doesn't the protagonist control each layer and then control the local population to integrate resources and divide and distribute personnel? Sliding up the upper levels as if fleeing. This has been the case at the bottom from the beginning. It's okay to use 150 of the 200 balances. Wouldn't it be better to let 150 ability users control the conquered bases/villages/organizations? Wouldn't it be more reasonable to use 20 of the remaining 50 spots as the Imperial Guards around you? For example, Chapter 134 plans to demolish the factory? After taking away the energy core, why not find a way to repair the factory and let the adjutant control the produced tanks? The previous chapter mentioned that the protagonist has a remote control system, as long as the chip is installed during manufacturing. Using the contractor/chosen one as the control node to maintain rule, with a large population as the backing for continuous development, plus the protagonist's own golden finger to spread influence, wouldn't it be beautiful? This book also slowly unfolds to show that this planet and the civilization before its destruction are not simple. Hurry up and unify a planet to develop into the universe, or control the development of a large territory~ PS: The pace can be faster, the snowball can start rolling~ Then there is a link where the protagonist stands up in a battle armor and charges with his loyal subordinates!

You are selling dog meat with a sheep's head, what kind of slave master in the abyss, you would be better called the Virgin Mary in the abyss

Catwoman looks so awkward, redundant and unaware of her own status

You can't really write about light in the abyss, then you might as well change it to hope that this isn't Ultraman changing into light?

We, a third party, mediate between the natives of the two parties, and in the end it is the protagonist, the third party team, who gives away the latest technological weapons? ? ? I have never seen a referee pay compensation!

It was awkward when I saw the negotiation with Xue Xiren, and it was even more awkward after reaching the contract. I don't know how the protagonist dared? I can understand if you sell power armor, but sell machine gun vehicles? Or sell it to an unknown force? That's not the way to hang up street lights in a hurry. In less than a month after meeting Xue west, I have met a small tribal leader and a nominal president. I don't know whether they are a parliament or a centralized power, and I don't know about internal interest groups. I even know that there are high-level spies and a big cult in the Fire Country, and they can sell nearly half of their own weapons. What kind of brains does the protagonist have? Is this how peace and development work? We just talked about it for less than a day and it was sold like this. If I talk about it for a week, will you sell the mobile fortress and the planetary base? And give these armaments to the Fire Nation and let them directly help you build and maintain a transportation route? Isn't it better to rely on a spy to sell a favor than to Xue west? And even if they only get one month's worth of equipment, it will be a huge loss to the Fire Nation. If the chariot-enhanced people are directly destroyed by the Fire Nation, what should you do if you mess up Cat Girl's status like this? Others can't afford to conflict with Cat Girl? The old man is the leader. Besides, the cat lady has already deceived the protagonist once, is it really okay for her to delegate her power like this?

It's a bit hard for me to watch. Catwoman seems to have no respect for the protagonist. The protagonist indulges his followers too much. The protagonist has no punishment at all. This god's character is too low.

I passed the internal sign, I finally passed it, don't worry and pursue it.

Renamed Abyss Nanny

This book is poisonous, see clearly