Transform into an Alien Archmage

The prosthetic eye farmer identified it as poisonous. It is the original sin to be unhappy on the Internet, not to mention being invincible first and then limiting your strength in various ways, which is even more poisonous. The battle of wits and courage between the King of Bones and the Air is even more exciting. The author does not have the strength to control it. No matter how good the subject matter is, it is poisonous. After the transformation, my personality also changed, right? She became kind and gentle like a mother-in-law and a mother-in-law. It is called ordinary people who just traveled through time and there is nothing extraordinary. What do you think the readers are here to read? Is it possible to operate high blood pressure in another world?

The previous writing is quite good. The protagonists and villains are both above average in IQ and there are no brainless plots (the gangsters flirting, the rich second generation taking over). The plot of Wuwei Wen going to teach in a college and then receiving a useless class is a bit serious, but it's okay. There are some problems with the appearance of the demon lord Abaddon in the middle period. As the lord of hell, he is simple and honest. After all, according to some worldviews, demons are brainless and naive, but how can someone who can get along with the demon lord be so kind? There should be at least a few plots where the protagonist makes trouble or kills indiscriminately and is found out and then disciplined, instead of turning into a bitch as soon as he is subdued. In the later period, the two countries were a bit stiff in their connection with the alien plane, especially the country whose prince was killed. Even if a prince is killed, even if he is the heir, he will not sell the ball and fight against someone who can destroy the country on his own, right? Others are that some details are not very good. The god-level mage does not have travel/teleportation spells, and a group of gods rely on sound waves to speak. But overall there's nothing too toxic about it (it's hard for me to accept a tsundere lolita, but it's in line with the character of the protagonist)

I came to see the plot, not your thesis, which is a lot of nonsense and makes me want to smash my phone just by looking at it. The war does not have the tense atmosphere of war. Pu Taize (Else Weir) is like a fool, and other characters are worse than fools. The only motivation for me to continue reading is the two labels of time-traveling and sexual transformation (labels I set myself). Come on, author.

The protagonist's gender has changed to that of a woman, and her personality has also become that of a woman. She is verbose, silly, and weak. Moreover, the description of the article is inconsistent. In the first part, someone robbed me in the town, and the reason why I didn't kill him was that I shouldn't take care of it. Later, when the same group of people robbed me in the wild, I said that such a person deserves to die, and then killed him. Earlier I wore a veil to avoid getting into trouble, but later on I don't know why I started not wearing a veil after having a meal. I kept changing the scene and wrote that everyone was surprised by the beauty of the protagonist. Surprised at meals, surprised at auctions, surprised at hotels, surprised when visiting others, surprised when going out of town, surprised when going out on the street, is it inexplicably better? Moreover, the air leakage is inexplicably set to limit the protagonist's strength. The protagonist knows that there is air leakage and does not seriously look for a solution. Personally, I feel that this book gives the protagonist a strong setting on the surface, but basically the efforts are not used to the point. I failed to save people when I was trying to save them, and I kept a low profile when I shouldn't have. In general, the setting of a male protagonist who travels through time is simply superfluous. It can be said that it is a female time travel novel. Anyway, I feel that the protagonist is like the heroines in most other cool novels. She can just find trouble for the protagonist, attract the protagonist with her appearance and inexplicable kindness, and just be a silly vase. Just rely on the hero's aura as the protagonist to save you. The hero just needs to take the blame. No matter how stupid you are, the hero will take care of everything! ! Maybe it will be exciting later, but I gave up and never saw you again 🙂🙂🙂🙂

This is my third book, and I welcome your suggestions. The main purpose of choosing the theme of transformation is to eliminate the possibility of a harem. I wonder if you will like it?

I can't stand it. 😐 The protagonist is too virginal, he is constrained in doing things, and he has never thought about changing his bad situation. The magic power passed away without thinking about finding the reason or how to resolve the situation. Since the account mage is top-notch, he thinks he is also top-notch, and the continuous refreshing of his three views has not changed this idea. Precious magic items are given away without considering the subsequent impact. All in all, very brainless😌😌

The protagonist is too virginal, I really don't like this character

After reading a few chapters, I found a lot of fallacies. It is also a novice who thinks that he can become a master and write books to make money. He does not seriously consider his own books and it is purely a self-pleasure work. Low quality

The plot behind it is too ridiculous. At this time, even gunpowder and steam engines are not even available. Suddenly you can build rockets🚀 and go to space to fight space battles. Although it is a novel, the plot is too unreliable!

The protagonist's character is too weak, and he spends all his energy on useless trivial matters. The mobs in the city have revealed that the magic power of the mage in this world is mobilized from surrounding elements and does not exist in his own body. The knife is held at the neck. The protagonist has absolute strength but shakes hands and makes peace. He has almost invincible strength but is timid in doing things. He can choose to lecture others when they want to kill him. Also, can you write about smiling evilly? How can anyone normally smile like that?

I have read it from beginning to end, and there are many things that I like. The world view is very comprehensive, and some minor problems can be understood. In short, it is a very good novel.

This era has taught me that what you like is not women, but beautiful people

The author is a stupid loli who just graduated from elementary school (I'm sure) Identification completed

Can these authors stop writing novels? What are you writing about? If the plot is not good and the protagonist's emotions are not good, what else should I write? Come on, there are too many authors like this! There are all books written by this type of author! With so many books, only a few will do! What are the rest of them? It really makes people feel uncomfortable just writing them down.

Necromancer

I'm shocked, the one who transformed into Prefix didn't lose contact.

The character of this protagonist is too awkward and feels a bit weak. I personally feel that the character of this protagonist is real and a little uncomfortable. It is obvious that he is a boy who has changed into a girl, but the result is that he looks just like a girl. And then he is still very silly and sweet. It is really silly and sweet. It can be more suitable, otherwise it feels a bit abusive. To put it bluntly, she is the kind of sexy heroine in romance novels, the kind of person who is missing something in her head.

It is recommended that the protagonist's breasts be shaved off... F passed...

I thought it was that ancient book about eating sweet potatoes and adding magic powers.

Ahem, I think it's very good-looking. There's nothing particularly wrong with the protagonist's character. It's just that he's not a popular black-hearted character. He's a bit unusual among all the online articles (•∀•)

Why are there so many children's novels?