The Great Shaman of Honghuang

A witch clan who can't cultivate immortality without soul, is actually in the realm of immortality? ? ? How can you tell? ? ? Do you want to pull it off a little more? ? ? It didn't matter if I wrote like this before, but do I still write like this now? ? ? Do you have a brain? ? ?

I feel that the writing style is weird, weird and weird, with no imagination. The description of the battle is like a reckless man, and the dialogue is in the style of a gangster. It is hard to imagine that Daluo fights or fights hand-to-hand. The innate spiritual treasure is used to hit people. Honghuangliu now has to express his feelings. I personally feel that the way of fighting needs to change. Wu Clan Tian The law of biological control is to modify the physical constants when it comes to reality. The result is that the fight is still the same as the beginning of the movie. If there is no new idea, there is no desire to watch it. Although everyone has written like this in the past, there are too many people like this, so there is no feeling when reading it.

Zhu Jiuyin calls Zhu Rongwei——Lao Si... Hehehehe, do you write urban literature or prehistoric literature?

Author, in order to show the protagonist's recovery ability, you weakened the protagonist's body to such a degree that his head or hands were cut off at every turn. How reckless the protagonist is when fighting, but how cowardly he is in normal times. When he meets a strong person, either a fellow Taoist or a senior, he will be as humble as possible.

In the second-part plot, you almost get beaten to death every time. In more than thirty chapters, you are in danger seven or eight times, almost killed five or six times, and you even asked the ancestral witch to act with you and fake your death once. Will you not improve your strength if you die a few times?

In fact, Yuanshi was the best master in the prehistoric era, and he protected his shortcomings. It was difficult for his apprentices to bully the younger ones, so he would end up personally. Although Tongtian received a lot, he still had some thoughts in his heart. Duobao Wudang Holy Mother and the like were the real disciples. Others like Zhao Gongming and others fell just because they felt embarrassed and wanted to make a big deal out of a big deal. In the end, he set up the Killing Immortal Sword Formation but was criticized by his own disciples in order to regain his face.

Day after day after birth. He also said that he was an otaku in his previous life, so don't discredit otakus.

When I make a breakthrough, I feel so awesome. When I get into a fight, I feel like a piece of trash. Just smile.

Summary: Hit someone, get beaten, get injured, be rescued, recuperate, and fill in the content in the middle. What it feels like to watch Young and Dangerous. Young and Dangerous is only that short in total, and it's so satisfying in the end. Author, if you haven't watched all the Young and Dangerous movies and just watched them one by one in the first hour, will you be frustrated or want to watch them? Is it possible for a novel to ignite something a little and then extinguish it immediately? How many times can this feeling of suffocation be repeated for thirty chapters?

When I read Chapter 37, I was either being abused or being rescued and recuperated. I was either being rescued and recuperated, or I was being abused on the way to being abused. I was being rescued and recuperated. Summary, training, fighting, being abused, and being rescued. Interspersed with content in the middle. A perfect closed loop. It has been repeated several times in thirty chapters. It was just a little ignited, but it was quickly extinguished in just a few words.