The Great Shaman of Honghuang

A witch clan member, who cannot cultivate immortality without a primordial spirit, has actually reached the Immortal Path realm?! How did you figure that out?! Should we go even further?! It was fine to write like this before, but still now?! Do you even have a brain?!

The writing style feels weird, strange and uninspired. There's no imagination, the battle descriptions are like brute force, the dialogue is like thugs' banter. It's hard to imagine a Great Luo Immortal fighting in hand-to-hand combat. Innate spiritual treasures are used to smash people. If the Primordial Era genre is to develop its own style, I think the combat system needs to change.

Zhu Jiuyin calls Zhu Rong "the fourth brother"... Hehehehe, are you writing an urban fantasy novel or a prehistoric fantasy novel?

Author, in order to showcase the protagonist's regenerative abilities, you've made his physical body so weak, constantly losing heads or arms. The protagonist is as reckless in battle as he is cowardly in ordinary times; when he encounters someone strong, they're either a fellow cultivator or a senior, and he's incredibly humble.

The plot is ridiculous. You almost get killed every time. In over thirty chapters, you've been in danger seven or eight times, almost killed five or six times, and even had the Ancestral Witch fake her death with you once. Do you think you won't improve your strength unless you die a few times?

In the primordial era, Yuanshi Tianzun was actually the best master. He was protective of his disciples, and would personally intervene when his disciples were in trouble or bullied those who were weaker. Although Tongtian took on many disciples, he also had a hierarchy in his heart. Only those like Duobao Wudang Shengmu were his true disciples.

He was arrogant and domineering from birth. He even claimed he was a shut-in in his past life; don't smear shut-ins.

It feels so awesome to break through, but when it comes to fighting, they're just trash. *Smile*

The feeling of watching "Young and Dangerous" is like this: you get beaten up, injured, rescued, and recovering, with some filler content in between. The whole movie is only so long, but it's satisfying in the end. Author, if you haven't seen all the films and only watch the first hour, wouldn't you feel frustrated and want to continue? Can a novel also be so easily extinguished after a little bit of excitement? This feeling of frustration can be repeated over thirty chapters.

Chapter 37 is all about being tortured, rescued, and recovering from injuries; it's either being rescued and recovering or on the verge of being tortured again, then tortured again, then rescued and recovering again. In summary, it's a perfect closed loop of cultivation, fighting, being tortured, and being rescued, interspersed with other content.