There Is a Fierce Daughter at Home in Tokyo

The story about Mei Hui's whereabouts was written in a boring way. Under normal circumstances, I would just rush in and kill others, but I would just ask the old man where he was. How could there be so much bullshit?

It's weird. I went to the enemy's lair to save people and turned on berserker mode. What should the protagonist do if I was the villain and held a knife directly on the prisoner? I took a step forward and stabbed my hand with a knife. If I dared to shoot an arrow, I slid the knife across my neck. I was very curious. I didn't watch it later and it was a bit embarrassing. I shouldn't have saved people. I turned on berserker mode. You just did the opposite.

When writing a fun story, the narrative should not be so ink, there will be too much nonsense description.

Regarding the recommendation after cutting it.

The more I read, the more annoying it becomes. It seems to be very enjoyable but is actually very frustrating. The writing seems to be very clichéd, but the more I read, the more annoying it becomes. At the end, five or six chapters begin to skip.

Is it too watery? No main plot?

It's not that you have to write well only if you get good grades, but that you have good grades only if you write well. You even have three books on The Eunuch and you still want to make money by writing books? I didn't achieve anything for a long time. I was really looking forward to the outcome of this book because the results were not good. The problem is that whether the results are good or not is not the reader's decision but the author's own problem. However, having three eunuchs in a row just means that you are not suitable for this industry. Find a construction site and move bricks.

I feel like I can write at least a few hundred more points on my last book...

It was fine up front, but I personally feel that the recent Holy Grail incident has made the world view a little confusing.

Can you stand it? When I saw Chapter 15, I was thinking that I had just finished the robbery with bows and arrows, and then went to the Kyudo Club to defeat the leader. I am not a member of the same circle as before. Hey, I can't understand this operation.

There are problems with the setting itself, and the ability to predict things that cannot be changed is the biggest pitfall, because this ability has no meaning other than meaningless pretense.

Listen to dad?

What a beauty. . . Will the heroine be hit by a train suddenly?

Hey, I looked so happy, suddenly there was a eunuch, and there was another handsome guy in the Daxiguang group.

After a one-month hiatus, the editor highly recommends . It's very good. Don't recommend it next time.

Can this also be used for daily detoxification? It is indeed a daily guide...

The results of this book are far worse than the previous book.

This cover is exactly the same as Online Dating Girlfriend is Jiutian Divine Phoenix

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Villains die because they talk too much. If a powerful onmyoji witch passes by, I will purify you as a weirdo without saying a word😏

This cover, I have played this game

Keep it up, I hope you don't lose it like this