I Wanted to Be a Store Manager but I Became a Swordsman

According to my level, I should be able to speak appropriately. First of all, I only read three chapters. After all, there are three golden chapters. The second chapter made me feel particularly speechless. If there were no cheats and I arrived in time, what would you do to save that woman? Based on your two months of practice? Or is it based on the physical fitness of an underage high school student? What's more, the woman backhandedly tricked the male protagonist. Although she knew that this was to promote the plot, the promotion and development of the plot was very confusing. I suggested that the author change it in the future, so I slipped away 🙏

In these recent chapters, why has the protagonist suddenly become naughty? He has to wear a hood and a hat when fighting monsters. It feels weird.

In "The Store Manager and the Swordsman", the male protagonist is neither the male protagonist (referring to Miss Okita who has a bunch of fanart pictures), nor the store owner (referring to the lack of plot about opening a store), nor the swordsman (referring to the lack of martial ethics in his fighting style).

I caught a loyal fan of Shiba Ryotaro and saw a lot of plots in Shinsengumi Blood Wind Record. The chapter about half-body entering the sword was borrowed (?) From Shiba Ryotaro's Shinsengumi Blood Wind Record. The duel between Saito Ichi and Tanitaro. I feel that we are reading the same translation. We actually also saw the Mibu Gishiden by Asada Jiro. This is so rare. Come on, the author.

After reading the one-on-one gym section, I feel that a problem that often occurs in novels of this genre is that there is no obvious gain after the war. Saving money to hold back the rewards is like constipation, forcibly suppressing your strength. When the time comes to hold back the rewards, you dare not write to be very crushing. Another wave of suppression, daily changes to low-key pretense, repair Refining and brushing points are currently reducing the income (although the grinding point pressure is still acceptable), let alone getting gem money to improve your life, it is obvious that extraordinary things have come out, and readers' expectations cannot be met. The protagonist's strength evolution curve should not be made into a gap, and don't always pass the level with residual blood.

It's a bit toxic and I feel like the plot is developed just to show off.

Don't mess with the harem, focus on the system.

Soji-chan

The first chapter looked pretty good. In the second chapter, there is nothing wrong with saving people when they don't understand the truth. After all, it's considered a good deed. But I didn't understand the main character's operation later. Was it forced to do this to advance the plot?

Don't worry about those writings about not having a harem and letting things take their own course. Nowadays, some people are led by certain people to read harem literature through colored glasses. This kind of comment can be seen in many novels. Very disgusting.

Why do Japanese light novels have to have girls? 😅 Nine out of ten books have a girl

It makes sense that my grades are bad, at least it will allow me to finish the third chapter. But I can't stand the second chapter you wrote. You can probably read it without thinking. The family has no money and has a younger sister to take care of. Then out of nowhere comes a setting that says I will help you regardless of whether you are a beauty or not to forcibly send cheats. Come on, author, I can't stand it. . . .

I barely finished reading it, but it was kendo that attracted me to continue reading, and apart from kendo, I didn't have much desire to read other things written by the author.

It doesn't matter if it smells like a child, and it's okay if you don't change the knife all the time. But when you are cutting with someone, you hear your sister finish shouting a sentence, causing you to pause while cutting? ! Isn't this a bit much? When I raise my hand and slap your face with a stick, can anyone say a word?

Even if there is a lightning strike at the opening and the hero saves the beauty, it is still a prank show. There is no formal program where the candidates are randomly selected. Who will be responsible if something unexpected happens? Wasn't the show a sudden death on the spot? Wouldn't it be better to write the script in advance and let the actors come on board?

You can also keep it first Come on, author

The only thing I can't accept is the slaughter house. There was a similar book before. Because of a threat, he transformed into the ancient sword master Dark Night Slaughter House. Hundreds of people were all beheaded. What kind of person could do this? . It's cool to watch at first, but when you think about the consistency of his logic, it's actually disgusting. This kind of thing is earth-shattering all over the world. Similar to the drug traffickers who were buried in corpse graves in Mexico, there are also innocent people. I advocate that the perpetrators should be punished only by punishing them. Don't talk about my holy mother, some gangsters are just arrogant with words and have no practical actions. I have a primary school classmate who has been engaged in gangster life. How bad-minded do you think he is? No, but he is lazy, ambitious, high-minded and low-handed. He often conflicts with others, but he never actively harms others. There are people like this from all religions. I generally don't make friends with them, but I won't offend them either. What day will I need his help? As the saying goes, snakes have their own way. They rely on their parents at home and friends when going out. They are all born and raised by their parents. He even has a wife and daughters. In the future, when other people's children grow up and seek revenge from you, will you also kill them with a knife? Being extraordinary, one does not seek to benefit society, but one does not seek to be a vigilante or even a butcher in the name of justice. The dragon slayer eventually becomes the evil dragon. Not for nothing. Looking back at the current online literary environment, all are dragon slayers. Cultivate oneself, manage the family, govern the country, and bring peace to the world. He doesn't care about cultivating himself, managing his family and governing the country, he just wants to bring peace to the world. Like a kid holding a nuclear bomb button and saying and taking action to eliminate inequality. Human nature is complicated, just like Cao Cao. When he was young, his dream was to help the Han Dynasty to pacify the world, but he killed the people who helped him and massacred the city in order to avenge his father. In order to unify the world, success is okay, but failure? How many people are displaced, how many people wear sackcloth and wear filial piety, and how many people exchange children for food. I would rather teach me to betray the world than let the world betray me. Self-imposed people are the worst. Above

The plot feels a bit forced on the mind. Your sister and classmates were kidnapped, and you know who kidnapped them. Why don't you just call the police? Why do you have to go up alone? Normally you wouldn't be able to do this.

Others are attacking you even though they are using real swords to attack you. You have a real sword and don't need to use a wooden sword. This B's pretense is too poor. There are also people wearing non-slip clogs fighting on the sloping roof, ٩(͡๏̯͡๏)۶

... Do Japanese teachers dare to have an affair with their students blatantly? Anyone who dared to do this in China would have been finished long ago. She is not afraid of others knowing at all. Even if there is something wrong with this female teacher, others also have brains, right? When everyone sees a beautiful female teacher who usually doesn't speak pretentious words suddenly being very intimate with a student, why would you be suspicious?

Playing games requires a lot of effort. I was convinced when the protagonist just used the system. After more than 70 chapters, it was hard to pay back the favor. He was shouting back and forth about one skill. I don't know if it was cool or awkward. Anyway, the early stage was too bland and people couldn't watch it at all. Moreover, it was said that the protagonist can use skills without the system knife, but there is no passive bonus. Why do you still use a wooden knife at all costs? Let's use the real sword that was given to me. How much agility can be added to it will not be as useful as the attack power of the real name sword. I force the Riddler to open 50-50. The reading is very heavy, but the fighting scenes are okay. It is worth cultivating to see what happens next. But according to this writing, it is estimated that it will take at least 200 chapters before the protagonist can stand up. It may not be enough to make the book cool.

As a bookworm of eight years, I said that this book has great potential, with detailed explanations. I don't know why, but it always seems to be very suitable for me. I don't know how to review it. After all, I am not a professional reviewer. Anyway, it is a very good one. It is very detailed and real, and it feels like it has a very deep research on kendo. The writing is also very professional, which makes people feel very qualified at first glance.

Let me tell you the reason why I am not popular. The third-rate character creation, the image of a sister in a bad street, the sensationalism that cannot bring the readers in, and the inexplicable plot development. It is not that there are no advantages, but they are completely out of proportion to the shortcomings. Anyway, this is what I think.

To sum it up in one sentence, it's all fucking self-pleasure

He withdrew when he saw that others could also use the protagonist's sword.

After reading more than forty chapters, I felt like it was such a boring novel. I don't know what the pig's feet are really doing.

There is a novel that can persuade me to quit once I read the second chapter for the first time.

There is no main line, and I have no idea what to express. This kind of book that relies on various branch lines to tie it together cannot be blamed on others...

PS: Can you survive Chapter 2? Book friends 🐶

What is written here? ! There are a lot of clichéd plots that don't make sense.