I Open a Restaurant in Pokémon World

Character modifications must be given to the leave-seeking king! Why! What a waste

It was okay at first, but as I watched more, I felt more and more tired. All I did was cook all day long. There was no adventure, no leisure, and no Pokémon training. The description of the main character's cooking didn't make me feel how delicious the food was. In case of emergencies, we have to wait until the store has been open for a day before handling them. This is just to beat the workers, just shouting about the emergency but not feeling it at all. In the early stage, it is understandable that I worked from morning to night every day to pay off the debt, but it is not understandable that I still have to do this after paying off the debt. If I understand correctly, this should be a Pokémon food casual article. No one would write it as the main line of cooking and making money. When I go to a new city, according to the previous description, I should stop working for dinner at around 7 pm. The next day, I will get up and work at 4 am to sell breakfast. What are you trying to do?

The mature appearance of green onion duck Scallion pancake

It took me a year to update and I only wrote over 8,000 words.

The protagonist is a freelance chef, but feels more tired than a full-time chef. . . It's not like chefs in big hotels can cook breakfast, lunch and dinner. . . And basically I am in the dining car. In the city, I don't go to a few good places in each city, and I spend most of my time cooking. . . There are even fewer places for your Pokémon to go, and the protagonist often goes out without taking them So what's the point of traveling? Do you need to be so tired now that you are not short of money? Do you need to sell three meals a day to enjoy the joy of cooking? Spend more time relaxing with your Pokémon and the people you like, and enjoy it! After all, there is no pressure from gym competitions, there is no shortage of money now, and there is no time limit for tasks, so don't be so tired. .

One for the Fire type for cooking, one for the Electric type, one for the Electric type, one for the Water type, dishwashing, one for the Flying type, air drying, and one for the Frost Milk Fairy and Big Milk Can, ice cream and cake series. Finally, there is a waiter such as Steward, Gardevoir, Miss Skirt, Sweet Queen, etc. (Because I don't remember). If the restaurant has space for farming, you can get a grass type.

Except for the fact that his painting style changes when he meets a woman, everything else is pretty good

This Phoenix King annoys me so much. Even if he appears to be cute, why can't he have a loli body shape and a solemn and holy personality? It's just an inexplicable pride. I don't understand where the cuteness is. I'm sorry that I'm not proud. I'm so sorry! This pride is too blunt and ordinary.

This protagonist's mouth often twitches. Take him to the hospital to see the facial features department!

What's the point of writing about the deaf-mute girl? Is it to summon the Phoenix King to solve the problem or what? It only makes sense if you can solve it and write it down! What to write if the protagonist can't solve it? Looking for scolding?

There is really no need to drive when you have a disagreement.

Zoroa

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Another trapping Pokémon article, I really have had enough of this kind of article

If you don't understand, don't write blindly. How did Macado become a fantasy Pokémon in the Alola region?

Zoroa fast evolution

Is the protagonist suffering from a disease that will cause him to die in a single battle? Is there really no battle in the whole Pokémon novel? There is nothing else to do except cooking. I hesitated for a long time before entering the gym. Will you die on the spot if you really enter the gym? After agreeing to fight Charizard, you later said that you regret it. Not a brother. It's really aggrieved for a bellicose Charizard to follow you.

I have now read Ziyuan Town, and the writing is pretty good. However, you have written about other people's miserable lives several times, and you are not going to help. So writing it will only make readers feel uncomfortable and blocked. What's the point?

Modify the characteristics of pets. It is recommended to change the slow start of the Holy Pillar King to Hercules...

Thank you for deleting the time traveler The protagonist is brainless Go and take a look. I wanted to say that the comments can analyze what Pokémon it is based on clues The protagonist is a time traveler, but it turns out that the brainless character doesn't know anything and can't analyze it. This is a common problem in time-travel novels: the protagonist is brainless There is no difference between time-travel and no time-travel, so it is better not to write about time-travel and write the original novel

The protagonist seems to have the identity of a time traveler. Forget it if I don't know Hupa , and I don't even know the GS ball? This ball followed Xiaozhi for at least half the time in the first movie, and he went to the Orange Islands for research. I don't even know it. It's better not to write down your identity as a time traveler. Also, Sakaki and Nazi are at least one generation apart. This can be used to form a cp 😳

These tears are really a drama, why are you crying so much!

The protagonist is too kneeling and licking Sakaki, even Nazi is written as Sakaki's dog.

Karen Ya, before I look back, this character appears out of nowhere and makes me feel sick.

. . . . I'm guessing it's because when I was writing about the death of my loved ones, my grades were bad and another wave of deaths suddenly occurred. . . .

The full compound potion that I got from treating Xiaogang is not for Charmander nor for Old Spray. Can I keep it for Xiaogang? Back in the Quartz Alliance, there was a shaved ice machine to make shaved ice, and Kirby was taught how to make ice cream. But when we returned to Changqing, there was no shaved ice machine. Do we want Kirby to use fine snow? ? ?

I feel like the protagonist is so good that I know him and help him even if I don't know him. We help both familiar and unfamiliar people. With such precious props, it doesn't feel worthwhile to help a stranger.

So, Mimikyu Q just has a hard time getting over it.

What the hell are you writing? It makes me sick. It's so poisonous.