I Just Want a Happy Love

Here comes another damn young lady. This character is so annoying. What I dislike the most is this kind of character who bullies others with unscrupulous honor and so-called power. Isn't it okay to have a good relationship? I had to create this one, and this kind of character is found in several romance novels next door. Do you think this is fantasy?

Can we not add the eldest lady? It seems very annoying. The life we ​​had before was very good. Why do we suddenly add a eldest lady? Don't you think it is superfluous? There is no such thing in reality, even if you are stupid

I still feel comfortable with Tsukino as a couple

After reading Chapter 62, let me express my thoughts. The first thirty chapters are pretty good. The turning point is that after the character of the eldest lady came out, I don't quite understand why the author added a disgusting and boring character like the eldest lady. Is it to enable the protagonist to open a harem later? This is not how a harem works. After the character of the eldest lady came out, I could no longer see the sweet and interesting daily life and love life in front of me. I was only filled with thoughts of "when will this eldest lady die?" The writing is okay, but your plot design will only disgust the readers to death. They can't stand it anymore and are poisoned to death. I would like to advise everyone to think twice before reading this.

He was attracted to Tsukino and was persuaded to leave by the eldest lady. To be honest, not many people can stand this early stage.

Most of the protagonists of this kind of "eldest lady" would choose to kill them in the future if they were replaced by other systematic protagonists to avoid future troubles. Really, if you are still so angry with the system, you really can't go back to your country, you can't afford to offend, and you can't hide? Just looking at it makes me feel murderous.

If you bend over too much, you won't be able to stand straight.

Why do Japanese youths like the role of a bad lady? I'm tired of aesthetics, and I look uncomfortable.

Go through high school as early as possible, otherwise you won't be popular. Just have a few in high school, like the previous book "Standmates," isn't it an example? If you have too many in high school, you'll get bored.

Now I can barely watch the plot of the eldest lady, (I don't know if I have strange XP😔), it's too slow, too slow, when will the protagonist make a counterattack and turn the eldest lady into a maid?!

Is the author a eunuch? Does he want something exciting? Or does he just write in a bland way✍🏻

How to say, the rhythm is very tight. Probably, 50 chapters is about the same as others' 300 chapters.

This kind of eldest lady role is very classic, Suki, even if she says to kill, she is not like Jiu*Meimei, but she keeps giving benefits, although it is cheap and unreasonable to give her free time. The author's portrayal of the relationship between men and women is still too simple. I feel that Tsukino, Yuki, and Sara are too easy to give away, a bit hasty, and just... A bit boring.

Now that I think about it, I probably cut it off🤔

The eldest lady is really too redundant. I immediately deleted the book when I saw it. It is recommended that the author rewrite it directly.

It's fine from the front, but from the back it looks like it's eaten ten tons of shit. It's ugly.

This is completely unfettered, and I actually started writing multiple female protagonists.