After Rebirth, I Really Have Someone I Like.

The writing is quite good, but I feel that joining the student union is unnecessary. Saying that I have become very busy, but joining the student union is of no use to me.

I suggest you change the name to another one. The name Cup 1 is too rubbish. The thief is out, and can this trademark be used? This is also a problem.

Are you new? It is recommended to strengthen the description of the character's expression and appearance. It is too bland. The emotional description is only about falling and falling, but not rising. It makes the reading boring. Come on. Support newcomers and hope to bring good works

It feels lifeless, there is no psychological description, and the facial description is not very clear, but the emotions cannot be read.

Very well written. Why are there so few people?

The author describes a young man with the mentality of a middle-aged man, who looks like he has no interest in anything he is reading, has seen everything through, and is very sad.

Aunt Fish

Not many people read it. The front part looks pretty good, but the ones at the back are about the sea.

I haven't read it yet, so I'm blindly guessing that this is some kind of ambiguous eunuch story, and the main character can't even get into any of the 500 chapters.

What's wrong with you as an author? You like to start a new book so much and then become a eunuch. You can never write a good book like this.

Okay, okay, persistence will always be seen. I just discovered this book.

I wrote 460,000 words in 160 days, an average of 2,874 words per day. What else should I write?

Starting from the senior sister, it completely collapsed. There was no hope.

Don't tell me, this kind of mediocre scum doesn't have any taste at all.

Is this stock trading or a harem...

How come the recent ones have been written down in a running account?

It's pretty good, but the pace is slow. There are currently six female protagonists. I think that's enough. If there are more, reading will give me a headache.

Is the male protagonist still a young boy now? He's too plain to watch.

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The novel is very well written. Unlike other novels where the male protagonist fails to catch up with the person he likes in his first life and becomes indifferent and disgusted with the female protagonist after his rebirth, and then later discovers that it was a misunderstanding and whitewashed the female protagonist, there is not so much hostility.

If you like watching this type of stuff, you will find it very nice. It's really good. Come on💪

The author's updates are too slow. When will he update 5W a day like the protagonist?

It's broken, it looks like it's a pigeon... To be honest, it's pretty good looking... Why is it just a pigeon?

This book has hundreds of chapters and all kinds of ambiguous virgin stories.

Good guy, what if you haven't written this yet? A direct finale? Awesome... No, you write very well, why can't you continue writing, you have to be a eunuch.