Apocalypse: The Strongest Breeding System

Wasn't it supposed to be the strongest? I thought it was going to be an invincible story, and this is it? These days, are people afraid of getting criticized if they don't write about simps?

Is the supermarket still selling fruit after six months?

Readers beware. The protagonist is somewhat dim-witted: after being robbed of his food and mount in the apocalypse, he not only doesn't resist when confronted, but also tries to reason with his captors after being tied up, and the worst part is that he spouts this nonsense for several chapters... Author, are you writing a lame joke? The worst part is, it's not funny at all!

With a hundred times the power, even throwing a small pebble would probably have more power than a sniper rifle, yet you're using it to escape?

This protagonist is so weak, it's just so awkward to look at. He's practically a saint, what a waste of a good system.

Please revise the beginning. How could there still be apples and beef in the supermarket after half a year since the apocalypse? Either change half a year to two or three days, otherwise how can people still eat fruit and beef? Apples are okay, as long as the weather isn't hot, they can last for a week. But beef is unacceptable.

I suggest you study some good books of the same genre. If you had played it safe and focused on developing your character with a cheat-like start, you probably would have more readers now. Imagine how many points you could get a book with an ant-like character who can kill everything in one hit! Your writing is careless and reckless! As I read, I lost the motivation to continue reading. Failing to retain readers is a major flaw! What a waste of such a good start! Goodbye, author!

100 Times the strength, 10 times the speed, plus ant scouting—zombies won't be killed indiscriminately.

Again, I saw a woman unable to move...

A perfectly good single-player game has been turned into an online game; I've lost all motivation to continue reading!