I Can Rewrite My Own Script

The protagonist is very well portrayed, giving me the impression that he is a man who is extremely talented and will do whatever it takes to find a wife in order to survive, but he only has basic moral principles when it comes to treating people. In order to survive, Qianye could eat "miscellaneous noodles" without changing his expression, he could chase monsters and kill them, and he could calmly observe every punctuation mark of the prophet's ability. However, when dealing with a person who was eaten by a goldfish, he was "stupid" and used the precious opportunity to change his character in exchange for a cheap life. Even if this cheap life may bring nine other lives, in fact ten lives are still "cheap". To the extent Qianye can do it, he helps others for free, even if he is insulted. I don't think this is very holy, I just think this is what a qualified person, at least a qualified Chinese, should do. In the current environment where everyone in Qidian is a cold-faced butcher, I admire the author for daring to write such a protagonist. This not only means that the author has justice in his heart, but also means that the author is willing to deliver a trace of positive energy at the cost of being criticized by some people (I dare not even say a few people) as a "holy lady" and complained about "poisonous points". I don't know when it started. I've looked over the starting point and found that the protagonists kill people like crazy for their own benefit without caring about others. The few protagonists who take care of the interests of others (others here refer to strangers they meet for the first time) will be criticized wildly, and the work will be criticized for being toxic. But I know that only when there are more and more people like Qianye can I see a harmonious starting point, and I don't have to face people every day. Only then can I dare to travel far away from home alone, because I know that then I will not feel cold among strangers.

Let me give my evaluation first Judging from the current progress, this is a good book worth looking forward to But the node of this publication is confusing to me. It may be better if the countercurrent part is completed with a small climax before being put on the shelves This book should belong to the category of infinite flow, that is, there are people participating in the game in other worlds, high-level masters, and the acquisition and increase of abilities. At least that's what I understand by the definition of infinite flow Let's talk about the content: 1. The plot basically has no flaws, although it advances slowly and does not make people feel like it is water character 2. The characters on the scene are well established. Withdrawn The main character is not the Holy Mother, but a "good guy" who can give it a try and then see you again. If someone cheats you, you will want to get it back 3. At this pace, the problem with the book is that it is really not updated well, and it doesn't have a good chapter 🙂 4. One book reviewer is right, the text rendering is not strong enough. What I am referring to here is that, for example, works about historical themes lack a sense of historical heaviness, the protagonists in comedy works lack a sense of joy, and they lack a sense of suffocating oppression in extremely dangerous situations The above is all, I hope it will be helpful to you ps: I remember there is a book club group in one chapter, I can't remember where it is, can anyone give me directions?

A reminder for newcomers, the protagonist is the Holy Mother, and there are some things that should be written down whether the protagonist says it or not. But after reading it, I understand that the author's character is too dramatic. If he wants to keep it without depicting the protagonist's growth and inner strength, it will only get worse in the future. Whether you keep it or not, this "character" must be experienced and then retained or abandoned to become something more acceptable to readers. To be honest, readers are not people who cannot accept the light in their hearts and the darkness in their actions, but this kind of person. For a character, the inner description must be clearly described, and the inner thoughts and behavioral logic of the character must be well written in order to be accepted by the audience. For this kind of character, the protagonist must not be too stupid. If he is stupid, he will become stupid. His intelligence must be well established, and he must know better choices. Next, I still retain the trace of kindness. Only this time, the protagonist's character is established, and the readers will no longer be disgusted with the protagonist's behavior in the future. To put it bluntly, if you want to establish this character, you have to write it well, instead of being like this, such a pure fool, it is actually the author adding personal information! Do you understand? This is a novel, not a composition or a diary. The plot is very important, and the character of the protagonist is not added in this way.

If you want to change the title of the book. Let's crowdfund! One person at a time, I'll go first (Fate Playwright)

Mistress, how do you feel about this?

In ancient times, the three realms of heaven, earth, and man coexisted. The earth realm is also the underworld. There is an endless river running through the void, which connects the three realms of heaven, earth and man. It has many names. It is called Tianhe in heaven, and it is called Jiehai in the human world. And I would rather call it Santu, or... Wangchuan. On the banks of the Wangchuan River in the underworld, a strange plant lives all year round. Oh no, to be precise, it should be said that they are strange creatures. They have one leaf and one flower. Although they are separate individuals, they are twins. Flowers bloom once a thousand years and remain silent once a thousand years. A leaf lasts for a thousand years and wilts once a thousand years. Since ancient times, there are flowers but no leaves, there are leaves but no flowers, and the two cannot meet each other. They seem to be aware of each other's existence, but they have never confirmed that the other party actually exists. Legend has it that there is an old man in the sky, who has been trapped in the Incense Forest Palace for a long time, weaving sweet, sour, or bitter love for hundreds of millions of creatures, just to spread the red thread of cause and effect all over the sky, looking for something. Legend has it that there is an old woman in the underworld who always stays by the Naihe Bridge, cooking the past life for the idiots, and settling all the love and hatred in the past. Time and again for thousands of years, knowing the other person but not being able to see the other person In order to see the leaf, the flower postponed its destruction at the cost of losing its soul, just to see the leaf. And Ye also has the same idea. In order to see the flower, it does not hesitate to dissipate and wake up in advance, just to see the flower that has not yet sunk. When the flower spirit flies away, the leaves on the bank cannot be seen, and when the leaves disperse, the flowers cannot be seen. It's as if there is no other person in this world at all.

To be honest, this book is a pity to throw away and tasteless to eat! Just one answer and you'll be damned!

It's a bit scary for our family.

It's unreasonable. It's so difficult for a cheat as big as the protagonist to survive. It's impossible for other people to survive. How come there are so many other players? There is also a dungeon that is too long and has too many bugs. The protagonist can control the ghost stories at will with a golden finger.

As long as this book doesn't collapse, it may become popular🔥... Of course, the story must be sufficient and lively. I haven't seen such a classic infinite article for a long time. Nowadays, there are a lot of invincible and infinite streams, which makes me want to read... Some suggestions for the author: 1. The text does not convey a strong atmosphere. You can add some more soulful text and describe it from the side. For example, I liked the description of heartbeats very much before and I still like it very much now. There are similar plots in "Mysterious Recovery" and "The Devil's Examination Paper". 2. The story can be more reversal. I know that the rules of survival in this novel are [routines] and [anti-routines], but you can add a little reversal. For example, [hateful people must be pitiful] [there is no worst, only worse] and other similar attributes. 3. Interact more with book friends! The author is a newcomer and has just published a new book. He is not famous for his first book. For example, "Thriller Paradise" has a name that is not very distinctive and is easy to ignore, but its author was famous for his previous work "Trafficking Crime". If not, even if the story is exciting, it may fail. The author is a newcomer and must increase fan stickiness. There are ways to interact. For example, set up a book club and distribute Easter egg stamps (forget it). Finally, go update! ! !