Fairy Family Biography

It's quite average, nothing outstanding, at least it's not something that you can read in depth at once, and the protagonist doesn't seem to have anything praiseworthy. The impression is not deep enough. After reading the previous chapter, which is close to 100,000 words, the protagonist just follows the program, measuring spiritual roots, practicing, going out to experience, and going to Fangshi. There are no twists and turns, and the protagonist's memory as a time traveler is not even shown. The current protagonist is no different from a native cultivator.

How can this become popular all of a sudden? Nowadays, many authors have written tens of thousands of words in one book and not many people have read it. They immediately open another book and dream about it every day. I think if a book is read by no one, as long as you insist on finishing it, you have accumulated writing experience and the next one may be better. Tudou and Wangyu also wrote several books that were not popular before writing Dou Po and Mortal, but they must have gained something in the process, which later led to their explosion. So it's better to calm down, write the story of your own imagination, try your best to write the book well, and enjoy the process. Everything else is out of your control.

The family keeps letting people with Tianlinggen and Double Spiritual Root experience, and they are either dead or seriously injured. You are just a foundation-building family, not a Nascent Soul family. You don't even care about the Double Spiritual Root and Tianling Root. It really makes your head hurt.

After roughly looking at it, some current readers simply want the kind of mindless and enjoyable writing, the kind that does not require any plot except upgrading, killing monsters and changing maps. The most outrageous thing is that the fairy tale tells you logic and reasoning as if they have cultivated immortality. Why should it be written in the same way and slowly unfold?

First of all, the four major families broke up the cultivating organization. I wrote too many pieces, it was too procrastinating, and it was too useless. Instead, it was as if the group was going to be wiped out with several times the combat strength. I didn't know who was encircling and suppressing whom. The description of the fight is also unreasonable. The family monks did not cooperate and only received beatings. They did not know how to take action. They only knew one move and then used a shield to defend themselves. There are also so many characters in the family that it's hard to remember who is who.

I roughly calculated that according to the author's treatment of 180 family monks, practicing qi for a month will cost more than 1,500 spirit stones, and a year plus foundation building will cost 20,000 spirit stones. It is too much, one foundation building pill a year, and the resource point I am writing now only produces a few hundred spirit stones a year. I hope that the family's annual income of 20,000 can be written later.

I am still in the qi training period. There are more than 130 chapters. It's awesome that you can come into contact with Huaying Dan during the Qi training period. Death from poison

Tian Linggen is cheating when he goes to learn the skills of casual cultivation, and the family members who know the protagonist's spiritual roots don't tell the protagonist his own spiritual roots. As a result, the protagonist always thinks that he has a spiritual root of 2 and is not even 18. It looks like he should be 12 years old, so he runs around.

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After reading about 20 chapters, it can be said that there are no surprises. There is no golden finger, and the protagonist has nothing special. The mediocre Tianling can't arouse any interest at all. No wonder the average protagonist is not very qualified to write, and there is no sense of expectation at all. The plot is also bland and boring. You can also call it a slow-burning novel, but no matter how it is written later, it can't attract people in the early stage, so what about the future?

Let me tell you my opinion. What I wrote above is pretty good. I feel like I really have my own ideas when I read it. This is a highlight of the family story. It's no wonder that family stories are gradually declining. Many authors are just not good enough. They make elixirs with three spiritual roots every day, and then start with a hostile family who suffers from great hatred. The key writing style is rubbish and cannot be written at a high level. This kind of family story is called eunuch. This book does not have these problems at the beginning, and it is very comfortable to read. The problem is that the logic of the rogue cultivator is a bit problematic. The author did not consider many things comprehensively in order to portray the power of rogue cultivator. I didn't look back, and I didn't know how rare boiled eggs were in this world, but this group of casual cultivators had a second-level formation, high-grade spiritual stones, and second-level magic weapons, but they couldn't buy boiled eggs until they encountered talismans. In addition, their skills were either invincible at the same level, or they could threaten the foundation, and they should be top-level skills. I couldn't understand this configuration and couldn't get a boiled egg. This was one of them. The second is some battle details. For example, when the swordsman is escaping, he can recover 30 to 40% of his mana in half a stick of incense. Is this reasonable under the author's system? If not, should the swordsman be depicted as desperately swallowing pills all the way? For another example, two casual cultivators were seriously injured in the previous battle. Is it reasonable to say that they were seriously injured in an encounter instead of using a large formation? In the encounter, the spiritual consciousness in the foundation building stage should be a great advantage against the Qi practice. Is it reasonable that this situation can be clouded by the fog? Writing novels does not prohibit you from portraying the enemy as powerful, but it is very taboo for the author to deceive the enemy. The author said in the comments that if you change to the protagonist and there will be no such doubts, then you are actually looking down on the reader's IQ. Nowadays, unless the novel is invincible, once it involves overstepping the level, readers will definitely look at it with a magnifying glass. Even the protagonist cannot escape. As long as your logic is far-fetched, people will definitely be questioned. Therefore, the author wants to express the power of casual cultivators. There is no problem, and this idea is also very reasonable. However, how to describe it will test the author's order. Can all the details be flawless? Can the various settings be justified? The author can put himself in their shoes and think about it. The protagonist group encounters two foundations head-on, releases a smoke from a distance, then goes up to beat the two foundations, and practices Qi to beat the foundations until they are seriously injured and dying. Do you think it is reasonable?

A useless family, four foundation builders can only do a few evil cultivators who practice qi.

I didn't want to watch it when I saw 4 Boiled Chickens preparing to fight a few Qi Practitioners and almost being wiped out by the group. These Qi Practitioners are so strong and they still get boiled eggs. How can the other Qi Practitioners still survive? I really don't understand your description. Are you talking about foundation-building dishes or something?

The description of the fight is really unreasonable. I feel like firing a move is useless, so I just stand and get beaten. Defense is defense, and I don't know how to take action.

No wonder the results were so poor. Four foundation-building cultivators and a few who had perfected their Qi skills fought so hard against four casual cultivators who had perfected their Qi skills. They were bursting out after taking medicine and were seriously injured. The pig's feet were almost beaten to death. Everyone on the opposite side jumped to the challenge?

To be honest, the first few chapters are dispensable, and the three golden chapters are wasted on you.

The biggest problem with family stories is: there is a scum in the family that cannot be corrected. Bin Gong's law enforcement will make the people below him have their own thoughts, and small punishments and big warnings will make the people below him careless. The family will inevitably decline. In a sense, it is far worse than the sect. I have seen a family story where the originator of family stories killed people and betrayed relatives and friends. From then on, I felt that family stories were boring because they could not achieve a fair, just and bright future. ——Everyone who reads novels likes to dream.

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It's not bad. It's very comfortable to read. It has the flavor of Time and Space Hotel. Although sometimes the plot is a bit bland, it makes people want to read it. If the plot is not exciting next, I will definitely support it.