Weird Game Emulator

As far as the supernatural circle is concerned, this book is better than 80% of similar works A few comments First, establish the protagonist as soon as possible As of now, the protagonist's character is still a bit vague It's like a soldier's belief is to protect the family and the country A doctor's belief is to treat illnesses and save people The protagonist needs A belief, such as doing whatever it takes to survive is a kind of Sacrifice one's own interests to save the weaker ones Or the lives of relatives and friends are more important than one's own These characters can make people more impressed by the protagonist To be honest, I just finished reading the latest chapter Now I almost forgot that the protagonist's name is Jiang E. But Han Li, the mortal cultivator of immortality, Wang Lin, the rebellious immortal, Su Xiao, the reincarnation paradise, and Yang Jian, the terrifying resurgence, will definitely remember them even if they are not seen for several years or months The second is to try to write your own things. I read Fat Dragon's horror web novel in 2015. It's been 7 years since then. I may not be able to remember some of the specific plots. But I still can't forget the moment after the protagonist enters the Kongbu world and his supernatural power returns to him, and his strength reaches the level of group management. Defeat the official helicopter in the real world In my opinion, it's not important to imitate but to have more of your own things To be honest, I have been reading at Qidian for 12 years. I read at Qidian for the first two years without registering an account. It has been ten years since I registered. When I was just reading books, I always liked to comment on the author's books or vent my dissatisfaction, just like writing short essays Now that I have become an old bookworm, I am not willing to write long articles Mainly because I am afraid of annoying people if I write too much Read the latest subscription today After finishing it, I found that I was the fifth one to follow the latest update The book I found today, the latest chapter was the fifth one. What does this mean? This means that there are not many people subscribing, so I wrote a short essay to give my opinions and encourage the author. I hope the author will not give up. Come on.

Before joining the group, write a long review first, so as not to be embarrassed to start after joining the group First of all, although I will point out various existing problems in this book review, it does not mean that I think this book is not good-looking. On the contrary, in terms of the life of a new author, this book is already better than many new ones. The problems that arise are more unclear in ideas and details. 1. Percentage Although I have said it before, I still want to emphasize that percentage skills must not be given casually, because emmm, it is really easy to have data bugs. The percentage value can easily rely on superposition to have no upper limit in the early and mid-term or the increase amount in the later stage will cause the value to collapse. Of course, you can easily solve this problem by just adding an overlay upper line or a bonus extreme value. 2. Skill Description The current typical example is the skill of Spirit Vision [When you look directly at a ghost, the ghost can also look directly at you] This is a typical description bug, because the condition given in this description is that the protagonist must look directly at the ghost to see the ghost, and the ghost must look directly at the protagonist when the protagonist looks directly at it to see the protagonist. But the actual effect of this skill is [you can see ghosts at any time, and ghosts can see you at any time] To put it bluntly, the description is not clear, and the conditions and restrictions are not clearly explained. 3. Death cost This is mainly a choice between whether the protagonist is cowardly or not, because the lifespan of the protagonist is not clear now, and the duration of the drug is also unclear, which leads everyone to think that there is no clear concept of whether the protagonist is cowardly or not. It is suggested that the author can be a little more data-oriented. For example, the protagonist has two weeks of life left (two chances), and a box of medicine can extend his life by one month (four chances) (six times in total), but the protagonist will feel uncomfortable when there are three weeks left to die. In this way, the cost of trial and error is indirectly marked out, which can better explain the protagonist's behavior. 4. Volume One The first volume has a total of three chapters. I think the first volume is the best written. The horror atmosphere and character descriptions are very good. In the second week, I felt that the protagonist was a little too strengthened. Three props were forced to be found in a box, and they were still able to bring them out even if the level was failed. Personally, I felt that it was a bit of a violation of the rules, and it was too easy to obtain the props. There is nothing to say about the three-week game. But there is a logical problem: since the village chief is a ghost and he has to open the door to kill people, why does the village chief tell the protagonist not to open the door at night? The logic is a bit unclear. 5. Volume 2 In fact, I think it is reasonable to be a little timid about the second volume. At present, the process of this volume is very long, and there is more than one death point. It feels a bit like a dungeon within a dungeon and then a mini-game inside it. However, it lacks a weird atmosphere, places too much emphasis on escape, and ignores the story of exploring the dungeon. This makes the current dungeon feel very long and has less useful information. In fact, the story behind this copy can be better expressed through some scrap newspapers, documents, etc.

Good lookingヽ(≧Д≦)ノ It is recommended to learn transitions. Sometimes the screen just jumps past. I look very tired. You also need to figure out how to rotate this lens. The content is really good, it reminds me of reading horror novels before. D(ŐдŐ๑)

Seriously, I've never seen anyone so stupid. What's not in the game? -_-|| Like the protagonist, he doesn't believe in the appearance of ghosts in the game 😅 Really, when I saw this was a game, I was dumbfounded. I don't understand why? Since supernatural games are supernatural, then ghosts must exist. This is a basic common sense for playing games. Don't you even know this? Just like in the game of cultivating immortals, you told me that there are no immortals In the game of ghosts, there are no ghosts It's really beyond the drama, very funny and funny, I shouldn't say very funny, but very ridiculous, it feels like we are watching a fool 😅

That's it. After reading, point out the unreasonable parts so that the author can make corrections (laughing) Sometimes when writing, I tend to ignore some things and forget to write. Someone has to point out the problem.

Look stupid to me, a supernatural and weird game player, this is an illusion, there is also an illusion, vomit.

It is a good horror game type novel, but the author's writing style is still very young. For example, the character of Pig's Foot is not established. When talking about Pig's Foot, you may not be able to figure out his character or person. Let me give you a suggestion. You can listen to the author. There is another author who also wrote this at the starting point. Absurd deduction. When I talk about this, I think of the crazy Yu Xing. You can read that book.

The writing is quite good, but I have a few small questions If the points obtained by different ratings of a dungeon can be accumulated, then why not max out the dungeon, die at various key points in the plot development, and then continue to grind. The first dungeon is worth a few thousand points. Law, repeatedly dying to gain points and finally pushing through the dungeon. If this is the case, the next highlights can only be the world view and horror plot depicted by the author, and in the end I am afraid it can only be reduced to a simple enjoyable article Also, I actually like to watch the kind of plot where the identities of the prey and the hunter are reversed. It is interesting to change it occasionally. Now the protagonist still relies on props to hurt the spirit body. I don't know when I will see the plot of chasing the protagonist for a long time before catching him, and being slapped by the protagonist with his backhand.

The more I watch, the more frustrated I become. The protagonist is a nǎo cripple.

At present, I feel that the police have been weakened and are useless 😅. I hope the police can be strengthened and at least play some role.

After reading the first twenty chapters, the description of the horror atmosphere is good and makes people feel scared. However, the protagonist is like a retard. The analysis of events is too poor and it is extremely discouraging. The supporting character is retarded to set off the protagonist. What kind of trouble does the retarded protagonist make?

They all entered the strange world and they still didn't believe in the illusion. One of them didn't believe it. Some of them didn't believe it and just persuaded them to leave. They didn't only have one life. If they died, they would have to restart. If I went out on the first night to test what it was, what was the use of being cautious about infinite restarts? On the first day after entering the village, I just found a reason to leave the team. After infinite restarts, I beat all the villagers to death. What kind of weirdness could be weirder than you?

Two chapters to persuade him to quit, and send him to the brainless female captain at the beginning

Is it cool? Extrapolation or inference? I won't read the inferences, they are generally far-fetched, but if you are interested in general suggestions, just take a look and feel free to read them. Is there any advice from Shen Nong?

Author, if you write so many more illusions to me, I will blow your head off.

Come on, as long as you don't make a fuss. Feeling better and looking better gradually. I didn't have any expectations at the first copy, but this second copy gave me hope. Looking forward to the next article

Go to the bookshelf first, the city will be strangely revived and then call me

Personally, I feel like it would be better if the protagonist were just a smarter ordinary person, which would make him feel more immersed in the story. I will also be afraid or frightened. Some writers make the main character too bold and not scary at all. It becomes a cool novel.

I don't feel very good about the plot of this volume. I will try to write a rules-based plot for the next volume. If brothers and sisters have any opinions, please tell me. For example, the basic types of the world in the back are welcome.

? What are they? Chapter 1: I didn't get through it

It's so exciting that I dare not watch it at night. . .

Reality has revived strangely, come and kick me again,

The writing is poor, and the characters are dull. After reading more than ten chapters, I still don't have a clear understanding of the protagonist and supporting characters. The polish of the plot is also not very good. The progression is very awkward and the connection is very stiff. According to your writing skills, you need to open at least two more books before you can get to the beginning.

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When will the real world recover?

Yes, Zhang Caisheng hit the point that he was most afraid of as a child with one move. The description that I personally feel is more terrifying is that of a woman suddenly standing around the corner, sticking her head out at 90 degrees to the wall and smiling at you. You can refer to the following.

There are more than forty chapters and I don't understand what is written.

How could a corpse survive being thrown into a manure pit? I just deliberately avoided this option

The first one is to persuade me to quit. God, if I sealed the express box and then no one would notice that I opened the express delivery, judging from his development, if he stole the contents and then sealed the express box, no one would notice that he stole the items? ? ? This character is truly amazing.

It's better to test it first than to let others do it. You won't die anyway. You will know what it is after a few tests. It will be faster to restrain what you test next. The fourth natural disaster is the biggest weirdness.