Start by Controlling Metal

The route is quite straight forward, and the description and setting of the story are quite refreshing to me. Good luck to you, author, please give me a boost＾0＾~

I saw the protagonist fighting with others, but now, I don't find that the protagonist has the slightest qualification or will to go to the end. I don't know why the plot is set up like this. He uses a higher-level incomplete godhead than others, and his level is higher than others. I don't ask you to say that you will fight beyond the level. You were jumped by others, and you were confident that you could fight at level five. Where did you get the confidence? Moreover, we didn't see the protagonist's subjective initiative towards cultivation. The protagonist obviously likes tattoos more than practicing. With this kind of mentality, I don't know how to reach the ultimate goal of cultivation. It is impossible for a person who is not keen on practicing to become the strongest, because he does not have the willpower. The strongest must be those who have the best talent, will, and opportunity.

The plot is too protracted, the protagonist is too much, and there is nothing exciting about it. There are so many books about Qidian, so few people are probably interested in slowly waiting for the protagonist's setbacks and growth. At most, I will keep one in my collection, and I'll probably forget about it in a few days. In the era of fast-food writing, there were a few slow-burning novels, but the key is that the slow-burning ones are not that satisfying.

Seriously, why doesn't anyone read it? The author doesn't think about it. The ability setting is too screwed up and the plot is not that good. It's boring to watch, especially if a metal person is afraid of some metal robot. There is something wrong with it, so he should naturally restrain himself. You said that if the opponent is also a metal person, it can be said to be level suppression, but with a pure metal body, for a metal person, isn't it the same as an adult hitting a child?

I admit that some of the settings at the beginning are not very pleasing, but many things are foreshadowing the subsequent plot, which will definitely become more and more exciting. Then let me ask three questions from my soul: Don't people change? As an intelligent creature, wouldn't it be possible to lie? Is the world that people see and perceive necessarily real?

Farewell, the top management is not that stupid to let a metal controller do tasks outside. This ability is used in material research. Researching various alloys is more helpful to the country. The country is not a fool.

The science setting in the front is always a big chapter, and the protagonist's abilities are not introduced in detail. It's too discouraging.

The best godhead and the trashiest protagonist

The author cannot challenge the public's perception. The more unconvinced he is, the more seriously he will be hurt in the end.

Getting a tattoo is self-mutilation, and it is somewhat psychological. Of course, the disease can be cured, but who wants to come into contact with a person with a history of mental illness?

The three golden chapters failed to attract readers and failed.

Is it related to science fiction? What the hell is this?

The strongest godhead? He's not the strongest person yet, so he's just another waste of money?

I just read the comments. The author means that the protagonist needs to be given some time to grow. However, in fact, our current society does not give him time to grow. At least readers will not give him time to grow, nor will they give the author time to grow. Therefore, the author still needs to learn from the suggestions given by the comments.

Dear author, I'd better change this introduction. Hmm~ It would be better to add some topics related to the title of the book.

I really can't stand it anymore, so I say goodbye.

The author, the protagonist's ability to control metal, is it a metal in concept? There is still metal on the fixed element. For example, if I classify graphene carbon as a metal, then it can be controlled as a metal. This conceptual ability still has specific limitations and can only control metals that are defined in their physical and chemical atomic structure.