Life Simulation: Start with the Flower Hunting Man

To be honest, I came to watch The Sims, not the time travel story.

I came to see the life simulator, not the history. There is a lot of verbosity in it. What is the main line? I read more than 20 chapters without understanding it, and I wrote a lot just looking for trouble. ​​You can take a look at Shuhuang and feel nothing.

After watching the beginning, I was shocked three times. Poetry once, the empress once, and the princess performing arts once, I was convinced.

What a pity. If you don't know how to write about the Empress, don't write about it. There are too many to come to the Empress. Too poisonous.

This book is probably about eunuchs. I can't see the use of Goldfinger at all. A fantasy novel is written in such a bird-like way, and it's so grinding and chirping. For those who don't know, I thought it was a historical novel.

Let me talk about the title of the book first, "Life Simulation: Starting with the Flower Hunter", which is borrowed from the life simulator to reopen. This is an opportunity for time travel. In fact, after time travel, it has little relevance to "Life Simulation". The author himself prefers the name "Shun Xin Ru Yi Yun Tan Hua Lang", which has a special meaning. As for the golden finger, the beginning points out that the golden finger is the talent and attribute of a life restart simulator, but this is not something that comes with the hero's time travel, it is a system-like existence. In fact, these so-called talents and attributes are possessed by the original owner himself. The male protagonist after time travel has no evidence to prove that his talents and attributes were brought over by him. It is more his own speculation. Therefore, the role of the golden finger is not as obvious as the system and can be called at will. It is more about summarizing the original protagonist rather than blessing the male protagonist. A brief spoiler, the so-called golden fingers are after the original protagonist is replaced by the male protagonist. These things will be slowly revealed and strengthened over time. For example, the "four-leaf clover" talent means luck, but this does not come out of nowhere, but is gradually revealed as the plot unfolds. Not much else to say. The third point is the problem of character design. The male protagonist's character creation has some failures. In the eyes of readers, he will be an incompetent time traveler who is not very guarded and blinded by beauty. He is even inferior to the ordinary people around him in many things. But in fact, this is intentional. The portrayal of the character should not be perfect and strategizing. The male protagonist was a playboy in his previous life and was not a big deal in the first place. Smart, after time travel, the previous life was the main personality, and the Tanhualang personality was very weak. When he first arrived in the different world, he should have been poor in all aspects. He would do many things that were not consistent with Tanhualang's identity, such as visiting brothels, not doing his job, etc., And full of philistine atmosphere. If he had time traveled over, he would be able to deal with all kinds of conspiracies and even make arrangements in all aspects. This is not in line with the character. It is the mediocrity of the male protagonist at the beginning that gives him more room for growth in the future. The fourth point is the plot problem. There are too many foreshadowings and too many things appearing. This is a problem because there are many elements needed to unfold the story, but the writing power is insufficient and it is difficult to wrap it up. The early plot is not compact enough, the rhythm is not strong, and it is fragmented. Many places seem very abrupt and inconsistent. However, because there are more foreshadowings, the frame of the story will be larger. When the plot unfolds to a larger length, the plots before and after are echoed, which may be better.

.... I thought I was picking a cheat from someone else's outline collection, but I didn't expect that the cheat was dispensable.

Dear readers who have collected it, for the sake of the author's diligence, please add a follow-up reading every day. Just turn the book to the best page every day. If you have no collection, the book will be dead if you don't follow it up. Thank you all readers🙏🙏🙏

The word "Tanhua" in the title, I thought it was "Tanhua".

I haven't read much yet, so I'm wondering if there is no heroine or if there is a heroine?

I've read a few chapters and it's well written. Why is there no one here?

It was written well before, but why did you suddenly go to solve a case 😒 in this fantasy world, play the plot of solving the case, use a Taoist spell to summon the soul, and the extraordinary ability is just for show.

The title is "Exploring Flowers", but I didn't expect it to be "Detective Case". . However, the writing is okay, but more would not be enough to read.

The main plot is not clear. What is the difference between the protagonist's personality and the protagonist of Stallion? To be honest, this book is probably not very popular with most people.

The subject matter of the introduction is good, but the writing style is poor.

It's a success, it's a success^_^