Reborn in the Age of Opportunity

Twins, how interesting? I can't accept having a brother who looks exactly like me in a novel. And there's a high chance of melodramatic plot twists, which honestly makes me want to turn it off.

Authors these days really have no self-awareness whatsoever. Don't they even know what kind of rubbish they're writing? It's bafflingly self-important...

I've read half of it and feel there are problems with the outline. For example, there's a brother who lives with his mother, but the protagonist switches to science... Is this to help the family's electronics factory? Didn't you see the risks? When your brother comes back and takes a share of the factory, no father would refuse, since they have no conflict.

What the heck? It turned into a youth campus drama after it was released?! He's the boss of a company with 5,000 employees, why is he still running a student council and electing class officers? Has the author changed?

If the story continues with him helping his father develop the company while the shares remain with his father, there will definitely be some melodramatic family drama. Once the company grows large, the overseas brothers will find out and will surely come back to fight for the shares—such huge profits! And others have inheritance rights. His father will definitely be in a difficult position, but the shares will still inevitably be allocated to his other son.

Well written, keep up the good work!

The protagonist is so stupid! Even after being reborn, he still treats his brothers like this. There must have been reasons why the adults separated, yet he acts like a child.

All I can say is that the "want it all" model is over. After all, antitrust laws aren't created for nothing. What you've written easily reminds people of antitrust laws, and then they stop reading.

What's unpleasant about Qidian is that every book on the platform receives negative reviews. You can just delete them if you don't want to read them, but negative reviews are incomprehensible. New authors need time to hone their skills, right?

I don't understand these twins at all. What's their purpose?