Crossing the Spirit and Attaining Enlightenment

I just saw your video on station b and came to read your book, and I roughly read a few chapters. I feel that the novel has many shortcomings, such as the description of facial expressions at the beginning is a bit too much. Also, Mr. Wang's invitation to dinner was not handled well. The small foreplay before the meal can be avoided. Mr. Wang only needs to prepare a small amount of wine and express his gratitude. There are also descriptions such as how much money the dish costs, the cooking skills of the dish, etc. If you are not good at writing and cannot write well, you might as well avoid shortcomings and just say that the dishes are exquisite and delicious. She also asked Mr. Wang to bring a bottle of Coke, and then reacted belatedly. The protagonist has just traveled to a new world, so he should be very cautious in his words and actions. He is not as relaxed as eating with friends in a familiar environment. Also, as a spiritual person, his consciousness and will should be stronger than ordinary people. Also, later on, you asked Mr. Wang and his son, two ordinary people, to take an oath of heaven in a serious manner. It would not be against the rules if you asked a cultivator to take an oath of heaven. These are just my personal opinions. Sometimes details determine success or failure. I also hope that the author can improve and write better and better. Come on!

It will be on the shelves the day after tomorrow. Book friends who like it can support it. If you just want to support it, then there is no need. Why not support the book you like? Writing a novel is not easy. I struggled for a year before making 10,000 yuan. I am not a talented player. On the contrary, I am a pure rookie. I was just lucky enough to sign the contract. I think it will take at least three years of practice before I can reach the level of a novice. But it's pretty good. At least it's a thousand and a half a month. Don't ask your family for living expenses. Normal expenses are enough. If nothing goes wrong, this book should be finished within one month of writing after three months of full attendance. I have already planned the outline of this book, so writing six to seven hundred thousand words shouldn't be a problem. The new book is already being conceived, so keep working hard. To my book friends and to myself...

The data for new books is definitely not good. The author does not have fan bonus, so he can only write hundreds of thousands of words and then recommend it and it will fly. The key is to maintain quality! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง✊

The one-day lifespan at the beginning requires the exchange of Yin Ling and Shou Yuan. It is still a system, I don't like it.

Those who came from station B to support me, come on, keep updating more

OMore than 100,000 words have been put on the shelves... From now on, I have to update every day, so I won't have time at night. Tears~

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Happy New Year, book friends! !

It is best not to have a system for Qidian, which is a bit of a classical fairy tale, but you can have adventures, treasures and other golden fingers. The readers of Qidian are older and not a website with a large student population like Tomato. This website was developed very early. The readers are those between 20 and 40 years old. Although the student group reads it, they pay very little! So the website style is catered to those people who are working! This group of people has rich social experience and higher experience than students, and they have great taste!