Road to the Red Mansion

The label has the word "Taoist" in it. The main character should have the appearance of a cultivator. When I see the way the protagonist treats Li Wan, I don't feel like he is a cultivator, but more like a pervert ~ Taoist, Taoist, Taoist. Since it is written as a scholar, the protagonist should not have lustful thoughts towards Li Wan and other women ~

Grandma Liu and Jiao Da were both created as villains by the author, and I just didn't want to read it.

The writing in the first few chapters was okay. Although the author lacked common sense, the writing became more and more disgusting as soon as Grandma Liu entered the Rongguo Mansion. He slapped Grandma Liu in the face for twenty taels and redeemed the girl with two hundred taels. He said that feudal ethics are harmful to people, and he rubbed the maid's breasts. What a fucking thing.

I saw Chapter 5, about Grandma Liu, and I was disgusted. The author actually changed the character of Grandma Liu in the book based on his own likes and dislikes. You are really awesome.

The character of Jia Jue created by the author lacks a sense of logical reality. Even if the young master is a concubine, he should not be so harsh and mean. His attitude towards Grandma Liu is unkind, so what else can he do? Cultivation of immortals cultivates selfish character, what have become of immortals?

It's not good to read. I don't know what to write. I just talk about the gods and the Jade Emperor. How dare you, a mortal, to mention the gods randomly (this is a world with gods). Don't tell me that there is no Jade Emperor in this book... The protagonist is the author. Does he know that he doesn't? He opened his mouth without any caution at all. Originally I was quite interested in cultivating immortals in the Red Mansion, but what the hell was written about was a waste of a good subject.

The setting is that modern middle-aged people have kindergarten minds. Except for a few exceptions, today's people are not experts in trying to figure out their thoughts, but there will be no problem in dealing with basic human relations. Otherwise, are you just a fool? Even if you set up a pig's foot painter, is it possible for a painter to be good at light painting in modern society? When you are born, you may not be used to stealing the limelight from a big-faced person, but you can get over it. But later on, you start to seek the limelight again. You say you are a modern person? Middle-aged people? Modern middle-aged people who have been severely beaten by society will never like to be in the limelight. Profit-heavy and those who are not famous are the first choice. Normal minds are stubborn. After all, Jia Mu and Mrs. Wang are the ones who call the shots in the Jia Mansion. Their feelings are the most important. What they have to do is to be sensible and polite, be transparent at ordinary times, never steal the slightest bit of limelight from the big-faced person, have no sense of existence and never get into trouble and stay away from their sight. Only in that feudal ethics era, what can you do if you earn tens of billions of silver? If Jia Mu tells you to die, you have no choice but to die, putting the cart before the horse! What's more, you still have the means to cultivate immortality. Even if you are short of money, stealing from corrupt officials is a hundred thousand times better than being in the limelight now. When you grow up, your wings will be hardened, your thoughts will be peaceful and as plain as water, without twists and turns, and there will be no troubles. After the public relations are completely broken, you will separate the family, and stay far away from the Jia family. Then you can start to collect money, become famous, use modern methods to see, if you don't want to rebel, you want to be an official to please the king, it's up to you!

Everyone longs for beauty. If you travel to the Red Mansion and don't change the tragic ending of those women, why would you go to the Red Mansion? Why not create an original world?

I couldn't bear it after reading Chapter 5, it was too poisonous, and the sentences were not fluent in many places. Grandma Liu was not as good as the protagonist, who was born noble, but she was not a bad person, and she repaid her kindness in the end, but in the hands of the author, she basically became a villain. Does the author have a good family background, is young, and thinks poor people are bad people?

It's too poisonous. Has the author seen The Red Mansion?

I was reading a book review after looking at your profile. It's so poisonous. Stallion Porn Taoist.

I discovered it early. There are no poisonous points except for the opening of the sky. Since you are writing traditional mythology, don't stay close to the prehistoric times.

There is a problem. There are too many private goods. Basically, I suspect that the author has not read many original works. If the Red Mansions were removed, it would be fine as a book about cultivating immortals, but if the Red Mansions were added, it would be a big problem. Grandma Liu was the only Yu Qing left by Wang Xifeng, who saved Sister Qiao. Here he becomes a bad guy. The whole story is about money and desire. I don't know what it is that has a leather repair. There is a couplet hanging at the door of the bookstore that says, "The emperor guards the gate of the country." Guess how many times you would die if this were true in ancient times.

Is it the Jia family's nanny flow? When will you leave Jia's mansion? Without Lin Daiyu, would the protagonist be impotent?

It has a high beginning and a low direction. Once the time travel identity is introduced, the subsequent character descriptions and dialogues are difficult to read at first glance. For a man who wants to be a father before traveling through time, let's not say anything else. First of all, he must stop describing men and women, otherwise—the old tree will bloom? The underage Lin Daiyu who just entered the house is fascinated here, and the mature Qin Keqing over there is shocked. This past life experience is really profound! I also have thoughts on the follow-up development of the protagonist. To be honest, he is a little-known bastard in a big family. He has no backer, cannot leave the Jia family, and has a mistress with many thoughts. How confident are you that no one knows what you are doing? It's not fantasy, it's strong enough, but I'll do it alone if it's discovered! What's more, in Jia's Mansion, there are many servants, and it's just like in the countryside. Whenever something happens, someone will gossip about it, and the whole village will know it (everyone who has watched "Dream of Red Mansions" knows the specific plot). In modern times, it is easy for you to travel across provinces when traveling far away, and only your family members know about it, unless they tell others about it. The writing style is full of poisonous points. It is really captivating at the beginning, but makes you feel cold after reading it later. I felt much better after spitting out a mouthful of poisonous phlegm. I hope the suggestions are useful. I originally thought it was a magical book and planned to stay up late to read it.

This book disgusted me. The main character thought that he would be invincible by practicing some immortality. However, he was subdued by a monster as soon as he went out. When he came back, his sweetheart was killed. He looked smug. He was constrained by his family and wanted to separate the family, but he was always indecisive and did not talk about seeking revenge against his enemies. This made his labor and management very angry. How could there be such a useless time-traveling waste like the protagonist in this world?

The shit basin is rimmed with gold, and there is 💩 inside

The protagonist is so majestic outside, but he can't even fight against a woman in the backyard. The protagonist is also a cultivator. The protagonist can pretend to be a flower picker and snatch Mrs. Wang away without doing anything to her. After a few days, he will let her run away secretly to see if she still has the face to live. If Mrs. Wang falls, won't the protagonist be free of these disgusting things? Do you still want to separate the family and dream about it? Mrs. Wang sees that you are so good and presses you down to serve as a stepping stone for her treasure.

I think it's well written. Come on, author, come on. վ ̮ վ Isn't it just a ticket? For you!

First of all, I don't think Grandma Liu is a bad person. How many times has the author read Red Mansion?

Do you have to be angry if you want to become an immortal? If others do bad things to you over and over again, it is equivalent to murder and heartbreaking, but you can really tolerate it.

Isn't this book just for those who believe in Buddhism and come to the underworld?

The author's attitude towards Grandma Liu gives me reason to think that he hasn't even finished reading Red Mansions, and the protagonist in this book is not as good as Jia Baoyu. Jia Baoyu has no skills but he is really good to the people around him. Regardless of whether he is a man or a woman, given his status, that kind of attitude towards others may not be shared by many current high-ranking officials and "young masters". And who is the protagonist in this book?

What are you writing about? It was fine at first, but then the protagonist turned into an idiot.

An auspicious thing came out, luckily it was a pustule, otherwise the house would have been ransacked long ago, and two came out, what do you want to do? If you want to rebel, I, the emperor, would have wiped out your whole family long ago

This protagonist (author) is so disgusting🤮 I only asked "What kind of immortality have you cultivated, what kind of Taoist skills have you practiced?" He always showed a lustful attitude. Taoism is the most important thing about pure heart. Even if the heart is tempted, it will not react so much unless it is a calamity of the heart. Is it possible that a woman who makes the heart of a person who has practiced Taoism for more than ten years sit in a restaurant for such a long time and no one else responds? Could the others be eunuchs? You have read eleven chapters in total. How many times have you fallen in love? If this "Nine Transformations of Inner Alchemy" falls into your hands, even if the book is alive, you will feel that you are unclean!

​Recommend "So Many Prides in Red Mansions", "Uncle Lai in Red Mansions" and "Red Mansions: My Father's Name is Xia Shouzhong". The characteristics of these three books are that the author's writing style is very good, he can bring the characters to life, and he has a strong sense of substitution.

When I saw Grandma Liu in Zhang, I immediately retreated.

The same surname is Zhu. Zhu Wen did several wrong things and was cast aside by future generations. Why didn't Zhu Yuanzhang?  See the world with logic Original 1 year ago · High-quality creators in the field of history Attention 1: Disloyal, unkind, capricious 1, Betrayal of Huang Chao Huang Chao was kind to Zhu Wen. The Huang Chao rebels fought on the move, with only Guanzhong as their base. , At a critical moment, Huang Chao sent general Zhu Wen to guard Tongzhou. However, at the most critical moment of the rebel army, Zhu Wen, who had the highest hopes, led an army of 150,000 so-called soldiers and became a traitor. He became Zhu Quanzhong of the Tang Dynasty and continued to attack Huang Chao, prompting Daqi to be annihilated. From the beginning, Zhu Wen was rebellious. His theory was based on Cao Cao's famous saying, I would rather betray the world than let the world betray me. This is a magic weapon for survival in troubled times, but it is a pity that he carried this traitorous spirit until his death.  2. Burning allies When Huang Chao retreated to Henan, his troops were still very strong and Zhu Wen could not deal with them. He pretended to ask Li Keyong for help. In today's terms, what is yours is mine, and what is mine is mine. He has no credibility at all, and he doesn't even bother to find excuses. He handles things simply and roughly with white terror. 3. Betrayal of the Tang Dynasty Zhu Wen was originally a defeated general who surrendered. The Tang Dynasty accepted him and gave him a high official salary as the Xuanwu Jiedu Envoy. He became Zhu Quanzhong, the first vassal in the world, and could be called the reincarnation of his parents. However, Zhu Quanzhong was disloyal, rebelled, forced abdication, and slaughtered the Tang Dynasty clan and ministers, which was very cruel. It can be described as cruel and ruthless. A typical example of a non-toxic and non-husband, he has three masks, Zhu Huang, Zhu Wen, and Zhu Quanzhong. He has many faces and two sides. He follows the trend and waits for the price. Finally, he sells himself for the maximum value and becomes a king of the country.  But the traditional historians who were influenced by traditional Confucianism and were loyal, filial, and righteous would definitely not spare him. Although the world was chaotic, it still had its own set of operating rules. Anyone who violated these rules would have a bad end, because you could not win over the hearts of the people. At that time, the hearts of the people were not among the people, but among the local ancestral temples. To put it simply, it is still an era where personal charm shines. People only follow the crowd and do not think. So you see, he treats the people well, but what's the use? After Shi Jingtang came to power, he also made some concessions to the people, which brought some peace, but it did not hinder historical evaluation. Some people say that he offended interests, so what's the use? Wang Anshi offended more interests, but it does not hinder historical evaluation. Zhu Chongba did at least a few things wrong: 1. Betrayed Guo Tianxu Guo Zixing, the father of Guo Tianxu, was Zhu Chongba's reborn parent and had the kindness to meet him, but this did not prevent Zhu Yuanzhang from using the borrowed knife to kill people. Knowing that Chen Yexian did not sincerely surrender, he still appointed Chen Yexian to assist Guo Tianxu in attacking Jiqing. As a result, Guo Tianxu was killed. Judging from the method, he was obviously much smarter than Zhu Wen. Even when he later killed Guo Zixing's other son, Guo Tianjue, he also found a lot of excuses. The so-called "resentment" and "rebellion" are justifiable. Zhu Wen just made excuses lazily and directly used the power in his hands to interpret totalitarianism to the extreme. It was said: "This thief is so deceitful and the most untrustworthy, I will allow him to do so." - "Records of Taizu of the Ming Dynasty"  2, Betrayal of the Yuan Dynasty When Zhu Chongba was in danger moment, he professed his vassalship to Yuan Ting, but killed the Yuan envoy afterwards. There are currently many theories about this incident, but one thing is certain. In order to cope with the dilemma of being surrounded by several sides, Zhu Yuanzhang did have a certain deal with the Yuan Dynasty. After the civil strife of the Red Scarf Army, the entire Shandong Province lost its master, and the Yuan Dynasty's military campaign against Shandong was progressing smoothly. At this time, Lao Zhu was surrounded by enemies on three sides. Once the Yuan Dynasty regained the entire Shandong Province, his situation became very bad. Accepting recruitment at this time, only Chen Youliang, who proclaimed himself emperor, became the target of public criticism and could maintain his position as an independent warlord. Later, when he found that the Yuan Dynasty could not do everything in Shandong, Lao Zhu swung his sword and killed the Yuan Dynasty envoys. It can be said that subtle control lies in one's own mind. Zhu Wen may have the ability to assess the situation, but Zhu Wen cannot learn this ability to find opportunities to exploit, so he deserves his bad reputation.  3. Betrayed Han and Song Dynasty, killed his master and sought glory Zhu Chongba raised an army under the guise of King Ming and claimed to be a minister of King Ming. In the end, he even avoided abdication and directly killed King Xiao Ming. He became the emperor himself, which was very cruel. In December of the twelfth year of Dragon and Phoenix, Han Lin'er died because his boat capsized and sank into the river. From the brothers Guo Tianxu to King Xiao Ming, everyone who blocked Zhu Yuanzhang's power ladder died for various reasons. But this does not affect future generations' evaluation of him. The reason is that Zhu Yuanzhang is more reserved in doing things, and is not as rude and brutal as Zhu Wen. They are both from the old Zhu family, and their routines of doing things are actually the same, but one is rough and the other is delicate. In the end, only the delicate Zhu Yuanzhang can succeed. Once the emperor's career is established, the Confucian right to speak can be stolen. From this point of view, Zhu Wen's defeat and bad reputation are not resentful at all. Looking carefully at the growth trajectory of the two, one is nothing more than a wild one and the other is shy. Zhu Wen is telling the world that I am such a person. If you accept it or not, I will kill you if you don't. I will keep the ones who do. Zhu Yuanzhang is different. He said affectionately, I am not the kind of person you think, but in fact, there is a knife hidden in the smile, and the attack is not ambiguous at all. In terms of ruthlessness, I personally think he is better than his master. Conclusion: Therefore, everyone must have a fig leaf. People like Zhu Wen who even put up a fig leaf to avoid trouble will naturally not have good results. This shows the importance of the fig leaf. Therefore, everyone must have a fig leaf. Going on stage naked is not sincere but more ugly.

Personally, I think the writing is quite good, with a reasonable structure and a good story. Come on.