Traveling Through the Tang Dynasty, Li Bai Asked Me for Immortality at the Beginning!

What can I say? For now, this book gives me the feeling that it is like the fantasy I had when I was in the first grade of junior high school. I can freely follow the rules, feel comfortable, and feel good. There is no too strict setting, so many times the logic cannot be self-consistent, it is forced to be reasonable, and the naming is arbitrary and unreasonable. They all exist. Well, this book is like this. It feels like the invincible fantasy of a middle school boy. Don't worry about it, just feel good. . .

A good book that reminds me of my invincible fantasy in junior high school. I just thought that I would step on Sun Wukong and punch Tathagata Buddha. That's great, come on. I won't continue reading. After all, it's not my time in junior high school. People are getting old, hey. It's good to be young.

This novel is very good and has reached the level of a primary school grade composition!

What is this? The author is probably underage. This is really a primary school student's novel. In the past, talking about primary school students was just a metaphor, but you are really a primary school student.

The invincible start is okay, but this routine is almost broken! The author doesn't have anything new, so it's okay to pass the time and read, but if you take it more seriously, you won't be able to stand it anymore.

To be honest... If you want better grades, try to write some fictional themes. If you can conceive of a complete and wonderful world, a logical and self-consistent story, with more reasonable twists, you can be interesting. In addition, it depends on the author's own literary skills~ It's really boring to always find some time travel~ Because the main plot is always wandering on the story line that the reader knows, and the time traveler uses the information to reach the top step by step. The routine cannot be changed, and the only way to make breakthroughs is in the plot and writing. If the writing is too magical, it will feel awkward when compared with the classic original work. For example, the universe you opened about Xiaoao Jianghu actually has a good entry point at the beginning, but the more you write it, the more magical it becomes, completely imagining the original work. If you write like this, you might as well open a new imaginary world, because when I read your book, I will often subconsciously compare it with the original work, but you can't surpass Jin Yong in terms of plot or writing style. Why bother ~ it will greatly reduce the interest of readers ~