Publicly Revealing Transmigrators: Cultural Invasion of a Parallel Blue Star

Why am I also a time traveler and when I reveal my identity, others call me stupid? ? What went wrong.

Suddenly I realized that this subject is so niche.

I want to see the collision of cultures from two worlds, and I don't want to see the protagonist doing a live broadcast in the wilderness.

There is a question. You attack a country from various aspects, and then the protagonist is an alien. In the end, it turns out that he is really a loser. What will happen to him?

Here's a suggestion for all you book friends. Guan Zhang Comment! Especially the part about military history, be sure to turn it off! The chapter comments are all fights, with all kinds of half-knowledge and criticism, and are full of elementary school-style comments: "When I know an unpopular person, I can't wait to jump out and praise him, and then crazily belittle the well-known celebrities to show that I am educated." Although this is a virtue in all history-related forums and comment areas, it is particularly outrageous here, and it also affects the perception. I can say that the Three Kingdoms period was just a bunch of noobs pecking each other, so I have nothing to complain about... Although other parts are not as outrageous as this part, there are still a lot of fights, regardless of the chapter review, it looks terrible.

The subject matter is quite good, but the content is not grasped well. Take Li Bing as an example. The reason why Li Bing is great is that he designed the capital weir extremely ingeniously despite the extremely limited technical means. But the author completely ignored the power of industrialization. Take the Tainan Plain as an example. During the Japanese colonial period, the Japanese were able to build large-scale water conservancy projects in the Tainan Plain by relying on steam engines. Not to mention modern. The author can definitely write this, because in ancient times Blue Star did not have water conservancy projects like Du*yan designed by Li Bing, so Shu was always a land of water in ancient times. It was not until industrialization that this situation was solved. Let's compare how the Blue Star Shu land without capital weirs experienced floods, and how the Shu land with capital weirs became a land of abundance. Isn't this better? Writing it this way is too blunt.

When I first started reading it, I liked the theme and routine, but the so-called questions used to prove falsification didn't work at all. They just forced the plot to be drawn out. After complaining, I deleted the book An expert said that Blue Star has a very powerful water conservancy project. He asked whether there is such a powerful project in Earth Star. Is this the same? Are time travelers related To prove that the protagonist is not a real time traveler, we should first let the protagonist introduce his original world, and then ask questions about the relevant people and things introduced by the protagonist, and then find flaws in the protagonist's answers, thereby overturning the claim that the protagonist is a time traveler

The topic selection in the later stage was not very good. Popular music is too broad and there are thousands of people with different faces. It is impossible to choose the best music, so the selection is not convincing. And although I am proud of my motherland, I really don't need to be too strong... Is it serious to praise Wang Feng in rock? I didn't say that he is not good, but it is too embarrassing to be compared with those rock giants...

No, there are a lot of mistakes and the plot drags. The biggest problem is to flatten the other world to nothing

The writing is good, but the subject matter is a pity. Generally speaking, the feeling is not enough, because the identity of the time traveler is open and transparent, and the pretense and face-slapping scenes have no effect. If the video and other content are hidden at the beginning, the protagonist is obviously a time traveler, and for some reason he needs to prove that he is a time traveler, but he cannot prove it himself. Then the program team invites all parties and the entire network to do everything possible to really want to expose it, and then he is unconsciously slapped in the face by the protagonist. It will be more enjoyable, the plot will be better, and there will be more dramatic conflicts, instead of having to rush to open new dungeons and turn it into a running account The beginning of the book is really attractive, but it is a pity that it is probably for the purpose of dialogue with ancients or something like that, so it can only be set like this.