Developing the Myriad Worlds, Starting with One Person

In the first world you were completely bewildered by what happened, and in the teenth or so worlds you encountered an accident and are still bewildered. All those worlds you've traversed have been a complete waste; you haven't grown at all!

Finally, I can write. I was almost driven mad reading a novel late at night. I only read a few chapters of one character, and the protagonist's behavior and personality almost made me want to cry. I'm a thirty-something working adult, and my understanding of people is entirely based on what I've seen in anime and novels. And some people are comparing the protagonist to Zhang Chulan?

It started strong but ended weakly, a huge disappointment. The protagonist created by the author was just a complete loser.

The moral compass gets completely warped in the later part. In the scene with the woman in yellow from "The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber," the protagonist takes the item without asking, and when he's discovered, he acts like, "How did you find out?" Just because he's stronger than her? It's a robber's logic that makes it all justified.

All I can say is, it's toxic... Well, not just ordinary toxic. I didn't get anything out of the first three chapters. The first world was just pure idiocy. You could say that fits the protagonist's idiotic character, I'll accept that. But at least be idiotic in some way!

This is already the ninth world, and the protagonist hasn't shown any growth. Neither his temperament nor his abilities have improved. His world-traveling is completely reckless; his personal strength isn't even as great as the Old Master's, yet he dares to approach gods and immortals. His survival is entirely due to the protagonist's halo. There are too many uncertainties; his continued world-traveling is practically pure luck.

Could you please make the protagonist a little smarter? After several worlds, can't he grow a little more?

Why is he fawning over Natasha like that?! Can't he live without her?

I suggest the author delete and rewrite the first few chapters. With this opening, no matter how well you write the rest, you won't get good results. Originally, these things in the beginning would have been minor flaws later on, but in the beginning, they are extremely toxic. At least 90% of people will just give up after reading this opening.

It's uncomfortable to see this protagonist as a good guy; he's an anti-hero, but not quite there yet. He's more like a minor character in Deadpool's movies, or a low-level gang leader in DC's Joker. Hopefully, the protagonist's charm will be increased later on; he's too naive and innocent, and not thoroughly evil either—just stuck in the middle.