Developing the Myriad Worlds, Starting with One Person

In the first world, you encountered something and you were confused. In the tenth world, you encountered an accident and you were still confused. You traveled through so many worlds in vain and you didn't grow at all.

I'm finally ready to write. I read a novel in the middle of the night and was about to get pissed off, so I read a few chapters of the previous person. The behavior and character of the protagonist are almost Yue. I'm a social beast in my thirties. I rely on the anime and novels I read to identify people. Some people compare the protagonist to Zhang Chulan. He doesn't deserve it. Zhang Chulan's meanness is disguised and purposeful. There are other big guys there to set it off. The protagonist is really mean, mad. The more I think about it, the angrier I get.

It's anticlimactic and disappointing. The protagonist created by the author is a complete loser.

Among the later batch of people with crooked views, the part about the girl in yellow from Yitian, where the protagonist takes things without telling her, and even if she is discovered, she still has a say-how-you-discovered attitude, just because she is better than her? Taken for granted gangster logic?

All I can say is that it's poisonous... Well, it's not just any poison. I didn't see anything in the third golden chapter. The first world was completely mean. You said this fits the character of the protagonist as a bitch, and I agree. You managed to show off your skills and broke the system without doing anything. After writing more than ninety chapters, you got the Heavenly Barrier (which was drawn during the settlement). The first world has passed, and your own strength has not improved at all, right? I can only say that it doesn't look good. One hundred points is wasted, so I just treat it as a lost dollar.

It's already the ninth world, and the protagonist hasn't seen much growth, either in character or ability. Traveling through the world is completely random. His personal strength is not as strong as the Heavenly Master. He dares to contact gods and immortals. His survival is entirely due to the protagonist's halo. There are too many uncertainties. Being able to keep traveling like this is just down to luck.

Could it be possible to make the protagonist's IQ a little higher? If there are several more worlds, couldn't he grow up a little?

Licking Natasha wildly from behind. What! Can't live without her?

It is recommended that the author delete all the first few chapters and rewrite them. With this beginning, no matter how good your subsequent writing is, you will not get good results. Originally, these things at the beginning are just a small poisonous point at the end, but when placed at the beginning, they are extremely poisonous. At least more than 90% of people will immediately turn away after reading this beginning.

It's hard to see this protagonist as a positive character, as an anti-hero, but the fire is not yet there. It can only be compared to the little Luo Luo killed by Deadpool, the gang leader of DC Joker. I hope that the charm of the protagonist will be increased in the later stage. He is too silly and too bad to be completely bad, neither good nor bad.