Yunmeng Peak

My head hurts from watching it. I haven't had any desire to read it for a long time. I don't know the priorities. It's like a running account. Let alone dividing a sentence into several paragraphs. The effect of the three golden chapters has not been brought into play at all. The characters are too confusing. There is no need to have so many names. You are writing it from the perspective of a protagonist. When I write it now, I feel like I am writing a genealogy that has not yet been written.

Dear readers, please don't read this book when it's new. I'm going to burst. Come and read it. It's going to be on the shelves soon. Read it, read it, and read it. Let the pursuit of reading fly

In the early stage, I was addicted to the immortal family novels and couldn't help myself, so I searched through most of the immortal family novels on the market and made the following summary 1+ Most of the immortal family novels are not good in writing, plot and structure 2+ Baiwuyi is a cultivating family novel, and most of the authors are not as good as some senior immortal fans. List one (there are three foundation-building families competing for hegemony in a village at the beginning of this family story) and list two ( In many family articles, the system of cultivating immortals is a low-end version! The Qi training period is not much different from that of ordinary people. The reason is that the mana is too little and the speed can be about 10m/s. Good guy, you are a foundation builder, even I am not as good as the earthlings. The fighting method is to throw away the talisman and release the spiritual energy shock wave) 3+ The first part is still a waste account full of poison points 4+ Holy Mother, the first book I read was Immortal Evergreen, which can be regarded as the originator of the family school. I have read all the poisonous points complained by various book friends in the early stage and resisted it. Until it was the golden elixir or the Yuan Ying, the protagonist and the heroine killed a person because of the foundation building period. They hugged each other and cried bitterly and repented. I really couldn't resist and died directly After 5+30/60, foundation building cannot be done, and I don't know who pioneered it. Please, you are in the world of immortality. If you are short of qi and blood, you go to find those elixirs to replenish your qi and blood. What's even more disgusting is that you like to set a elixir to replenish qi and blood that starts at least level 4 or 5, corresponding to the Nascent Soul Transformation. Awesome, you take qi training too seriously. There are countless similar settings ... I can list many more poisonous points, but it is a waste of energy and time. There are several books on family literature, but not one on fairy grass. The desert is just fine, Qinglian is not good, the Han family is the same, can't float in the front and the back is not good, and the one who is on the monthly ticket list is also good in the front, but not good in the back.

At present, the best writing about family flow is to be evergreen step by step, and the layout and conception are all the sameflow

The writing is good, there are not so many cheats, and it won't keep wandering! Come on, I hope the more you write, the better!

There are too many bad sentences and typos, and I have no desire to read them.

The author comes to read with me!

Dear brothers, stop keeping books and read them.

Thank you readers for reminding me to correct typos

Looking at the author's achievements, I have always been interested in Chapter 38. I always feel that the author can be a eunuch, so I haven't paid much attention to it. I have kept it since I lost my first subscription. Can you tell me about the author? Can you be a eunuch?

I really can't stand the family type of cultivating immortality.

The title of the book is not easy to search for. I suggest you change it.

It's getting pornographic sooner or later every day. I haven't watched it. I haven't even finished the chapter on prostitution, but I don't want to watch it at this update rate.

The author writes well! Come on

To be honest, those who are popular now are all bad people, and those who are not bad will die nine and a half times.

The oath of heaven, too much, God has so much time, 770

I'm really speechless. Is it the Fire Spirit Root? I can't write a family story without refining elixirs. Why don't you come up with a counter-routine? The family is strong, the protagonist is talented, and he fights for supremacy in another world. What a good subject. I have to write it into a waste material. The key is that the first few chapters are disgusting. In less than ten chapters, I know all kinds of skills, exercises, beautiful women fall in love with me, or become a licker when I see a girl😔😔

Is this book available? Come to Shennong

There is a character introduction to Yun Mengcheng's family at the front of the chapter. If you don't understand, look ahead. Typos are being corrected. Sorry.

The author should pay attention to details! In Chapter 49, you mainly write that the protagonist wants to buy a second-level mid-level or high-level alchemy furnace, but you write in a large space in Chapter 38 that the family has 7 alchemy furnaces, a total of 4 alchemists, and a guest, and the family also wants to train the protagonist to become a third-level alchemy master. This writing makes the protagonist feel good about himself.

Author, how many sentences do you need to write to sigh a few sentences in each chapter and let out a breath of turbidity? Mixed number of words or there are really no other adjectives? Really affects the sense of reading

It's fun to have sex for free! It's always fun to have sex for free!

The personnel information of the Cheng family is in the work information, Chapter 1

Isn't there Bingfeng Leilinggen? If not, I'll say goodbye.

Great book. Please write more female characters in the family.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, don't imitate those eunuchs

I came to comment because my surname is Cheng and my hometown is really in Yunmeng. I just read the book and my writing needs to be improved, but I hope the author's book will get better and better.

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Author, it's too annoying for you to write so much "baby"

Come on brother, although there are not many people watching now, persistence is victory, I believe in you👍😁