Cultivation Begins with a River Carp

You say, if humans knew that aquatic spirit fish were highly nutritious, could prolong life, and could even be used to cultivate precious elixirs, what do you think would happen? 🙂

I just want to know if the protagonist is a demon with a straight back, or just a human in demon's skin?

It's unoriginal and lacks any highlights. It's like a mix of fantasy and demon cultivation. You could write about a snake with dragon blood and a built-in cultivation technique, or someone who, without the technique, would never rise to power. It's better to cultivate the technique within your bloodline than to have another demon cultivator pass on their skills.

I am a river carp, living in the river, which is perfectly normal.

I am a river carp, living in the river, which makes perfect sense, right?

Do you think a carp's ten years of arduous cultivation can compare to the dragon race's ten-thousand-year legacy? Are you planning to work for the dragons from now on? No cultivation techniques, no lifespan, mediocre aptitude, not very smart, and still a laborer in this other world? How tragic! But I can't figure out how you could possibly succeed.

Is this book by the same author as the one about Black Tiger? Both are equally well-written; I suggest you don't write another one!

I really don't know what people are thinking these days. The synopsis says it's about accumulating merit, but the first chapter is about the protagonist eating people and a Taoist priest exorcising demons. How many people have the patience to read novels these days? If you came for the synopsis, you'll probably leave after reading the first chapter.

Regardless of anything else, anything about dragon transformation is worth reading.

They're pretty arrogant, aren't they? They won't let you speak if you don't have any followers. They seem very confident. I like it.