My Steampunk Ming Dynasty

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This book's Chinese and Western settings are very innovative, and its features really stood out to me! But then he said something about scientific electricity and the like, which made me speechless! If you focus on steampunk fantasy, just do steampunk. You can do witchcraft, martial arts, and magic, not science and steampunk hodgepodge, okay? Steampunk works and games are a world where steam and magic are combined! But don't add scientific elements! To add scientific elements, you might as well write urban modern writing!

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It's so funny that the protagonist still wants to revolution... Is there any soil for revolution? Who is your enemy? Who is your friend? Who do you get your rights from? I'm laughing so hard. You can't even see clearly and you're still talking about revolution It's so childish...

Go ahead, are you being raised to death by me? Didn't I say that the old author can still survive? What a great subject. Why don't you send me the outline and I'll make do with it. . . .

It's almost equal, let me tell you how I feel. Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The subject matter is novel. I have read some steampunk, mostly based on the social background of the Victorian period, and I have also read some books about the Ming Dynasty, most of which developed technology based on Ming Dynasty society to resist invasion, and directly applied steam to the Ming Dynasty background. This is the first time I have seen it. I don't know what kind of sparks the two will collide with, it's very fresh. 2. A grand world view. The author's intention is not only to build the Ming Dynasty and eliminate foreign enemies, but also to develop the industrial revolution, promote social change, explore the world map, and launch the era of free trade and great navigation and colonization. There is a lot to watch, and I look forward to the follow-up. 3. Be well prepared and logical. It can be seen that the author spent a lot of time reviewing information, such as the official social situation in the early Ming Dynasty, the technological extension of steam weapons and equipment, production needs, etc. He has made some reasonable explanations and speculations, trying to make the development of steam and the emergence of new things consistent with the national conditions in the early Ming Dynasty. Although it is a magical world, he tries his best to ensure that the logic is reasonable and not obtrusive. The author is very careful about this, which is great👍 After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages: 1. The biggest problem for me is that the author's voice-over description of the social background and the inner narration of the characters are too concentrated, which affects the development of the plot. Background information is necessary, but it is best to integrate it into the plot and gradually introduce the introduction as the plot unfolds, so that readers can remember it as they continue reading. For example, various new steam weapons are introduced one after another when attacking Jianghu sects in the first volume. The attack effects are shown in the plot, so the plot is smoother and these weapons are easy to remember. However, when the two armies in Jianzhou started to fight, they suddenly introduced a large section of what kind of new cannon it was, what kind of cannons and guns it had before, and what improvements had been made. In addition, the psychological activities of both sides and the protagonist's daily complaints were added, which greatly affected the smoothness of the plot. Another example is that after arriving at Shanhaiguan, there were several chapters introducing the situation. It took a lot of effort to finish reading it. Before I could digest it, the army was dispatched and the map was changed. The result was another long introduction to the background of Jianzhou. It was really difficult to read. It is better to design some plots and conflicts here, and let some supporting characters and new equipment appear to show the style and character relationships of Shanhaiguan. Jianzhou can also create one or two savage characters, and use their perspectives and psychology to show the situation of the primitive tribes and the surrendered tribes, their choices and encounters in the war, or they can later be integrated into the Ming Dynasty to develop Jianzhou, which can be used by the protagonist. Compared with the long introduction of Jianzhou's customs and customs, this will be easier to understand. 2. The character creation is relatively weak. Except for the protagonist, the characters are relatively flat and tend to be set on background panels. In the first volume, only the supporting role of the father is established, and the others are relatively weak. The female protagonist comes from a wealthy family of merchants, and she also goes out to manage factories. She does not show any shrewdness or ability at all, and her personality is not outstanding. She is just a moneymaker. In fact, since we want to write about the changes in industrial society, the heroine's textile factory is a typical social microcosm. We can write it in more depth, and even shape one or two lower-level workers, pave the way for some conflicts and contradictions, and foreshadow the subsequent free trade and social changes. There is very little written about the supporting characters, and most of them are forgettable when the scene changes. The protagonist has such great ambitions, and there must be someone behind him who he can trust, so he still needs to create some supporting characters that people can remember. 3. The plot is relatively straightforward, and there is no major suspense conflict to promote the main plot. According to the author's description, the main plot should be the social changes promoted by the protagonist, allowing the Ming Dynasty to enter the era of colonial exploration and exploration. The social contradictions and conflicts of interest between feudal royal rule and industrial society capitalism may be the main driving force. However, the current plot is basically that the protagonist constantly changes maps and fights monsters to increase experience, which does not reflect the protagonist's purpose, psychological journey and the difficulties he faces. Therefore, the plot seems a bit loose and not very attractive to follow. In general, the author's subject matter is very good and he is very attentive. He has made a lot of preparations and has his own outline plan. I still hope that the author can adjust the rhythm to make this book more exciting!

This book is very good, the writing is good, and the characters in the plot have good IQs, but in the end I only ordered it for the first time because I was poor. So I wish the author better and better results in the new year, good health, and happy family (*￣￣*)

Many people are asking about the direction of this book. Since steampunk has been mixed in, it will not be a hegemony or auxiliary stream in the traditional sense, nor will it be a pure revolution. All in all, just watch it, there are too many spoilers. ps. Refer to the history of European Renaissance and Revolution

Alas, after reading about ten chapters, I didn't want to read it until the sect was liquidated. The protagonist was just like the current keyboard warriors. He was a double-standard dog. He was self-righteous. You begged for the prince in the front, but after seeing it, I felt less vicious. Are you actually worried that you will be liquidated? If you really feel that you are right, you should unswervingly execute every order