My Senior Brother Is Really Good at Pretending.

The main character's name in this book is a highlight. It's rare to see a name like this.

It's not easy for newbies, I hope you can bear with me and support me

I really hope I can update tens of thousands of words every day

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's a good start, come on, keep up the good work 🌹

I have read Chapter 10 and the author's writing is very good. Is the author really a newbie? Let's speculate first: Yao Xiaomian is also a time traveler and has no system. Because he traveled to another world and was helpless, he suffered from persecution paranoia. I always feel that it is a bit awkward for the author to write other people's descriptions of the male protagonist's handsomeness. Not many cultivators are ugly, and their voices are like gossips and nymphos. Shouldn't cultivating immortals be a little fresher and more refined? Amazing in appearance, temperament, and strength, they wouldn't be so out of the ordinary.

Chang Xiaokeng: My story is all up to your imagination.

Good guy, the sense of immersion is immediately fulfilled

The setting is good, and the three views of the protagonist are also portrayed. The writing style is relatively immature, but it does not affect the overall reading.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Author, after seeing the latest chapter, you said you were confused. In fact, let me make a suggestion. Maybe you, the author, don't quite understand the nature of social disorder. In the final analysis, it is caused by strong negative emotions such as low self-esteem, fear, and avoidance. The protagonist with this kind of character is unlikable. This kind of character, let alone the protagonist, even if he is a passerby, in real life, he must be a waste. In this book, the protagonist has a golden finger and has appeared in front of others many times. This is in huge contrast with social barriers. Maybe your description points out the protagonist's last resort, but it just shows the protagonist's waste, initiative, positivity, improvement, and hard work. This is the character of the young people of our generation. Even if we say to lie down, it is to lie down as a last resort. The protagonist with this kind of personality is not likeable, and he doesn't even have the sense of immersion in the novel.