Mythology: An Immortal's Path as a Ghost

Stop writing. You're not suited to writing novels.

I couldn't even finish the first chapter. A ghost reciting the Diamond Sutra?! I can understand reciting Taoist scriptures, but reciting Buddhist scriptures and still not dying? That's utterly absurd! "Absurd to the extreme!"

The writing style is good, and the writing is decent, but I'm afraid it might be abandoned someday.

I couldn't stand watching the fish demon scene. What did that tiger do to you? You don't kill the man-eating demon, but you kill the one that doesn't eat you. What kind of illogical logic is that?

This protagonist is supposed to be a Taoist cultivator? He wants to kill and steal treasure but acts like he's the victim. He's truly wicked.

You don't kill the man-eating demons, but you kill the non-man-eating demons? I get it now. The protagonist wants to show those demons how wicked people are and make them understand a principle: if they want to become stronger and avoid being killed, the only way is to eat people!

That's amazing! The protagonist is a spirit, a ghost, yet he can even separate his soul from his body. Incredible! Awesome!

It's just that our readers on Qidian are too picky. If you went to some other new websites, you wouldn't have any problems. Studios can become popular there, let alone you. But it just doesn't work on Qidian. The protagonist's double standards are too obvious. He's practically hypocritical, which severely impacts the reading experience.

Tigers that don't eat people are killed, but man-eating fish are spared and even given breathing techniques. What happened? The fish has successfully cultivated and is no longer a demon. We help the fish become a demon and then kill it.

What kind of saintly writing is this? I was about to invest because it seemed promising at first, but then you pulled this stunt. This is a challenge to the bottom line of human morality. There's no way this kind of writing will become popular; it's so poorly written.