Seeking Immortality in the Republic of China

Author, you should write the fight scenes like this: After an unknown amount of time, Qin Li suddenly moved! He moved! He had never seen such speed before, as if it surpassed time and sped past years. He pounced on the man in white with an incomprehensible speed, but the man in white remained motionless, as if he had stood there since the beginning of time, and would stand there in the future…

The protagonist transmigrates with nothing but the Qi Absorption Technique, which he's practiced for two years without any extraordinary feats. Then he encounters the female lead, and a booklet (system) offers him a choice of three rewards: a protective robe, a tranquility jade pendant, or a nameless cultivation technique. Guess which one he chooses… The robes, you didn't expect that, did you? I didn't expect it either.

By the time I got to Chapter Fourteen, I realized that I had spent over a year's worth of savings on Si Teng since we met. You could call that an investment, since I only met this one demon. But in Chapter Thirteen, you gave your robe to Siton. What are you going to do with it? Later you even explained, saying something like, "Mountains may crumble, it's better to rely on yourself." Seriously?

I initially thought it was a story about seeking immortality, then I discovered it was a story about a simp, then I found out it was another story about seeking immortality, then another story about a simp. It keeps switching back and forth. The protagonist completely acts abnormally whenever he meets Si Teng.

As someone who prefers a cautious approach, I was defeated after just one chapter. Author, are you writing about your protagonist or the male lead from "Si Teng"? The protagonist who transmigrates to another world has experienced several life-and-death situations and is considered a (jianghu person, a person who is skilled in martial arts and chivalry), but he goes to save a woman who is lying on…

Stills of Si Teng (Jing Tian)

Well, to put it simply, regarding the title, those who started reading shortly after I began writing should know that the title went through many revisions, but it wasn't my idea to change it; it was the editor's suggestion, probably to avoid risks.

If the update speed is too slow, readers will all leave, no one will read it, and it will fail.

The book is titled "Seeking Immortality in the World of Sito," so I suggest the author intersperse some small glimpses of Sito's current situation into side stories or within the main plot. I feel this would be more engaging for readers. 😁

Good heavens, the female lead is Si Teng, and in the blink of an eye, she becomes someone else's second wife. She's one of the six most beautiful women in the Central Plains, and the male lead fights to the death for Si Teng, yet she becomes a mistress in the blink of an eye. You might as well write a smutty novel. Dao Fa Cai Lv, I thought you were aiming for a romantic relationship with Si Teng, but it's just as bad as that lousy book by Zi Yang.