Seeking Immortality in the Republic of China

Author, your fight should be written like this: I don't know how long it took, Qin Yue suddenly moved, moved! I have never seen such speed, it seems to exceed time, faster than years. He pounced on the man in white at an incomprehensible speed, but the man in white remained motionless, as if he had been standing there since the beginning of heaven and earth, he was standing there now, and he would stand there in the future until the end of time. Bang", at this moment, the sky and the earth lost their color, the sun and the moon lost their light, and even the stars and rivers dimmed. The world was roaring, all the ways were shaking, and the two great figures seemed to have started fighting before the heaven and the earth, and they were going to fight until the end of the world. The battle intensified, and everything seemed to be reduced to chaos. Suddenly, the two of them stopped. A large pit with a diameter of five meters appeared where they were standing! They are indeed the two most advanced martial arts masters in the world!

The protagonist travels back in time and has nothing. He has been practicing breath-taking for two years and has nothing magical. When he meets the heroine, the booklet (system) gives a reward of three choices, a protective robe, a jade pendant for meditation, and an unknown skill. You guessed the one the protagonist chose... . . . . . . The robe, I didn't expect it, and I didn't expect it either.

After reading Chapter 14, I have lost more than a year's savings since I met Si Teng and spent money on her. This can also be said to be an investment, after all, I only met this one demon. But in Chapter 13, you gave Si Teng your robe. What did you use if you gave it to her? Later, he also explained that "no matter who you rely on, it is better to rely on yourself". Damn it, you gave her the robe on your own, the robe is yours, it's your life-saving thing. I felt guilty for giving her the robe, but I regretted it later, and after reflection, I came up with some truth... If the author doesn't like it, just delete it, just pretend I didn't say it.

I thought it was a book about seeking Taoism and immortality, but later I found out that it was a book about seeking Taoism and immortality. Then I started to find out that it was a story about seeking Taoism and immortality. Then I found out that it was a book about Taoism and immortality. It kept jumping sideways. When I met Si Teng, the protagonist was completely abnormal. I couldn't understand why the protagonist started to think and think about her as soon as he met Si Teng? The double standard is extremely powerful... This is not asking for immortality, it is just asking Si Teng to love me for once, and the two are not clear and unclear, which is annoying!

As a cautious person, I gave up on the first chapter. Author, are you writing about your protagonist or the male protagonist in "Siteng"? The protagonist who has traveled through other worlds has experienced several lives and deaths and is considered a charlatan. But when he meets an injured woman lying on the ground, he goes to save it. Although there is a psychological struggle, it is precisely the psychological struggle that makes me not want to read it, because it is more like a reason for the deceased to die with peace of mind. When a Jianghu person who can truly live to old age encounters such an injured person asking for help, his first reaction should be to observe the private environment to see if there are wild beasts ambushing the pursuer. Then he will look at the clothes of the fallen person from a distance to determine whether he is a farmer, a lady, a warrior, etc., And then quietly walk towards the fallen person to prevent it from being a killer who deliberately set up an ambush, and then check Check whether the wound was caused by the claws of a wild beast or a weapon, and then explore her body to see if there are any dangerous items. If you have the ability, you can also pinch the bones and muscles to see if she has fighting ability. Then, summarize whether you are in danger of saving her life and whether you can save her money. Of course, in this case, saving people is a loss-making business, after all, the protagonist is a small person.

Si Teng (Jing Tian) stills

How to say it? As for the title of the book, those who read it soon after it was written should know that the title was repeated many times, but it was not changed by me, but by the editor. It should be to avoid risks. There is also the issue of readers in the book review section saying it was poisonous. I didn't feel it was poisonous when I wrote it, but readers said it was poisonous. There is nothing that can be done about this. After all, everyone has different tastes, but I will learn a lesson and avoid being poisonous in subsequent plots. But after all, I alone cannot represent everyone. If I don't think it is poisonous, readers will still find it poisonous. This is a matter of taste.

If the update speed is too slow, readers will leave and no one will read it, and it will be boring.

The title of this book is "Seeking Immortality from the World of Si Teng", so it is recommended that the author intersperse some small fragments of Si Teng's current situation in the branch story or in the advancement of the main plot. I feel that this will be more attractive to readers 😁

Good guy, the heroine is Si Teng, and in a blink of an eye she becomes someone else's second concubine, the Six Greens of the Central Plains. The hero fights for Si Teng, life and death, and the heroine in a blink of an eye becomes a mistress. She might as well write a pornographic novel. . Taoist Wealth Couple, I thought you were writing Si Teng in the direction of the couple, but it turned out to be on par with Ziyang's crappy book.