Placement Type Cultivation

No wonder the results are not good. The seeds of a commonly used medicinal herb in the third level of Qi training have been banned from being sold by the sect for no reason. Moreover, everyone here is obedient. You can't buy anything that is supposed to be bad on the street. There is no logic at all. It is a setting tailor-made for the protagonist.

Isn't it the Qi training period where you can just pile up resources and go up? I've only reached the third level of Qi training and encountered bottlenecks twice. How about playing?

? The author is so entangled in the opposition between the inner and outer sects, and considers different things from different positions? No one really has an easy time eating from a big pot. Thinking from the sect's point of view, the sect should not develop, let's just muddle along. Another question: If you don't enter the inner sect with your pig's feet and your cultivation ability improves, and you don't become a high hall, you will just stay in the outer sect and finally go out to practice. You feel that the sect is unfair. If you can't leave the sect after you have experienced it?

Author, please listen to my advice. What is the title of this book? "Placement Type Cultivation of Immortality". What kind of readers will be attracted by this theme? Readers who like farming and development novels. Take a look at what content will be written after it is put on the shelf? One moment the sects are fighting, and the next the city is being massacred. Is this what we want to see? What everyone wants to see is: upgrade the system, find seeds and prescriptions, and take drugs to upgrade. This protagonist does not look like a protagonist at all. He is neither a righteous person (not strict enough), nor a passionate young man, nor has the character of a virgin (not in a derogatory sense, the virgin bitch is a derogatory sense). He is one of the slow upgraders when taking drugs. I feel that if the protagonist's friend had this system, he would have skyrocketed long ago, and the protagonist... It is no longer 10 years ago. Fighting, killing and fighting are not the main dish for everyone. What do you like? In a system article, what everyone wants to see is the protagonist's complete development of the system and the protagonist's (author's) imagination. Now that you are focusing your writing on fighting and killing, you are actually taking a wrong approach. In other words, you are selling sheep's head to dog's meat. I didn't want to read the content of the paid chapters after just one glance at the preview. If I wanted to read these content, why should I read your book instead of "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality"?

The author comes to read to me

The writing is so dangerous, and the cultivation level can be easily seen through by others. The later outline is probably about making trouble, fighting, upgrading and the like. It is completely different from the low-key look around to buy seeds for upgrading as I thought. I'm tired of watching the monster-fighting and upgrading stream.

There is indeed a problem with the setting of seeds. The elixir must be needed by everyone in the world of immortality. Along with the elixir trade, there will definitely be a seed trade. After all, whether you cultivate it yourself or pick it in the wild, you have the opportunity to buy seeds.

After reading Chapter 50, I only reached the third level of Qi training twice and got bottlenecked twice. It's really enough.

This book made me feel uncomfortable, how can I put it? At the beginning, there is blame for everything, and then various routines are used to push the plot, about the inner and outer sects of the sect. About Dantang, about going out to buy seeds and having to fight to the death, about putting the cart before the horse. The title of the book is very good and the plot is very poisonous. About becoming a licking dog. I really can't stand it any longer, so I'll collect all the poison points. Author, if you want to write a good book, take a good look at what writing style is popular now. If it doesn't work, just work hard and stop writing.

Now there are more than 100 chapters. I am still in the Qi training period and have entered the trend of licking dogs. It is best to return to cultivating immortals

The protagonist, who is at the peak of the third level of Qi refining and is close to the extreme level of half-step Dzogchen, can actually practice the spiritual eye technique and contact alchemy in advance. It is really terrifying.

Giving only seeds but no tools for planting is not the same as planting without a hoe? Is the Basic Judgment valuable to large sects? The Demon Sect is not like this either. Does it matter whether you give it or not? Whether it can be used is another matter? We already have law conferences, but we still care about basic law decisions.

The protagonist has a lot of shit that has nothing to do with the introduction.

As for the placement, don't stay at home, why go out and waste your time? You can't buy spiritual grass seeds anywhere, and you still have to take risks by yourself. Hang up early and let Goldfinger replace you.

Other than that, the author's data is really easy to confuse. At the beginning of the introduction, it was said that there were about 400 people, but in Chapter 9, it became about 300 people. The Dharma teaching conference for the outer sect is every third month. I didn't write two sentences and said that the Dharma teaching conference for the outer sect is on the first day of every month. These are obvious problems. I don't know how many details are required 🤔

Can you please let the mother go away? Do monks like us need a mother? I get annoyed when the main character starts licking her

This bottle of energy is written in a Buddhist style. Are you serious about why you can't break through this setting?

The writing is okay. After reading Chapter 14, I have a few thoughts 1: The protagonist's mortal life and family members are basically not mentioned. They just say that he is a farmer in the countryside and that when he is qualified to cultivate immortality, the local rich gentry funded the mortal silver. Although the theme of cultivation at the beginning is attractive, the story background and protagonist information are insufficient. It is recommended to add more to make the story and characters fuller 2: This book does not mention the setting of spiritual roots. I don't know if it is not included or will be added later. 3: The female cultivator at the trade fair was too imbecile, and she was even more speechless when she committed herself to the seller later. Even if you want to give the protagonist psychological growth, it is too retarded. Finally, the writing and plug-ins are okay for the time being. I hope the plug-ins are simpler, just planting is better. Don't just rely on plug-ins to advance the plot and solve problems. There must be more stories and the love and hatred of characters and forces. Click to download more copies and explore secret realms. Come on, the author.

Since it is called placing cultivation, you have to be more relaxed and don't place hammers.

I can't even see what this is doing, anti-theft? Is it popular to kill one thousand enemies and lose eight thousand to yourself?

It looks pretty good, I've rewarded it, just don't need TJ 😁