Admiral Due to Interest

In the update, the crotch is stretched like this, don't write it, pretty boy, please find an electronics factory to screw it as soon as possible.

First of all, I looked at the product before it was put on the shelves, and it was indeed a little watery, but after I ordered it all, it looked really good overall. The key is watery and short, which hurts too much. Secondly, the writing is quite good, the characters are described in great detail, and the plot concept is also very novel. But it's too watery. Because you are writing about all the characters in the plot of the fanfic, except for the original ones, the audience basically knows the plot of the characters. This aspect is described in too much detail. To be honest, I might as well write something original. Some time ago, it was very good to double-cross the world. It is completely possible to write Pirates as a parallel world that he traveled through, a world of high martial arts, and then add a reverse world, a world of future destruction or something like that. Let's take a look at the beginning of this book when you travel through danger (caught by pirates) and then awaken some special abilities to fight back. You live for a few days to understand the current environment of the surrounding countries, learn about special abilities and another world (working in a tavern, two penetrations and one punch), and then you join the master and join the force (learn the sword with one punch, join the navy) and then encounter any crisis, and understand the larger world view and so on. You see, isn't this completely acceptable? Moreover, your writing is quite original. I won't even call you stupid. The plot, power, and world view are all hard to come up with. I looked at game movies and pieced together a few things, such as the destruction of the world and the coming of doomsday. Another example is that the golden tree that carries the world needs a king to sit on it and reorganize the golden law balabala. Anyway, the author has good writing skills and can grasp everything. If my writing style wasn't like that of a primary school student, I would have written a book myself. 😭😭😭 Finally, if it's cut, just say so, and try to update as much as possible 😁

There are no hawks such as Akainu in the Navy. Think about what it would be like if they were all doves. In fact, it is Wang Luffy who has the final say whether the pirate world is in chaos or not. Once the prisoners in Impel Down City are released, the number of civilians who will die indirectly is infinitely greater than Akainu's. Wang Lufei's large fleet burned, killed and looted a few people, right?

Why do I think the navy wins? It would be a disaster to beat the bragging master of the world, killing both his son and his father. And not a single named navy person died.

How should I put it, the beginning is a bit unsatisfactory. After ten chapters of foreshadowing, the protagonist, who is a thin and ordinary person, is a powerful pirate who cannot be killed by ten shots. In the end, the protagonist with heavy chains on his hands was slashed to death with a knife... I haven't seen what happens next.

How many people have received it from the elf and sent it? Let me take a look.

Come on. Try to write well. Watch today. Station B. Gardevoir video. I am reminded of your novel. It took me a long time to find it.

The navy is looking for rice in a heap of rice excrement, while the pirates are looking for rice in a heap of rat excrement. Why is a thief a thief? Is it forced by the government? Use your brain. The government has forced those who have some conscience to join the revolutionary army. If you find someone who is a good person in a group that enjoys killing civilians, you are probably sick. You can find similar numbers in the Navy, and most of them join the army for the sake of civilians. Moreover, the navy described by Oda will definitely oppose the world government. Do you believe it? From top to bottom, even Akainu hates the Celestial Dragons and does not regard the Celestial Dragons as human beings. It's just a last resort for order, and it will definitely turn against you.

It's really a bit stained. Why do you feel like there are so many psychological descriptions of the protagonist?

No, I don't plan to follow the new book. I really like this book. You updated it intermittently and I followed it up to here. But you said that the eunuch is going to write a new book. I won't pursue it until I finish it. Let's see if you can finish it. I already hate the money wasted like Qidian. Reading eunuchs makes me sick and makes me unable to get up or down. Spend money on uncomfortable things.

The Pirate King destroyed the country in anger. He is indeed a pirate and should be destroyed if he doesn't do anything. The world government destroys countries for the sake of wealth, platinum and lead disease. The Tenryu people burned the garbage mountain in order to be clean. The Navy acquiesced in the Shichibukai's illegal crimes, drought in the desert country, secretly performed human body modification, supported human trafficking, etc. However, the Navy was just and not wrong. It's those bitches who deserve to die.

I was afraid that the double-traveling would not be able to balance the proportions of the plots on both sides. As a result, One Punch World was inked for so long at the beginning. And since I have punched through, I have to learn some skills that pirates don't have. What I learned is ordinary kendo. Can't kendo be learned at Koushiro's? Even if you become a disciple of Atom, you can learn some kendo with a different style.

The biggest problem in One Piece is not the pirates, but the social system, the aristocracy, the emperor, the dragons, and racial discrimination. Waiting for a lot of problems, I am more curious about how the author will solve it, or if he will mention it in one sentence, otherwise there will be a bandit king, or a gangster king, etc., A vicious circle. If these problems are not solved, overthrowing the world government will just be the next Draco and the world government. Just like me, I want to be Hokage, and the result has not changed after I got to a certain blog. What is even more disgusting is the blood theory, such as Momonosuke, Ace, the outcome is destined to be born, go to TM hot-blooded anime, a group of second-generation games

The character design of the protagonist is actually quite good, but the problem I feel with this book is that the plot is vulgar and inconsistent. Let's put aside the naval (family) competition for the time being. After entering Banggu's dojo with one punch, there is also a plot where the disciples betray each other and get the secret book? ? ? What the hell am I looking at? Martial arts novel? If you just write about Banggu's teachings, practice with the hungry wolf, find a few weirdos to fight with, and just practice and increase your strength, it will be better than this kind of plot!

Why didn't you say something about a new book?

Is it a eunuch? After raising it for a few days, it didn't move at all.

How long has it been on the shelves before it starts to go bad?

He likes to spend a lot of pen and ink describing insignificant supporting characters, and the plot advances very slowly.

I'm going to put them on my bookshelf too, brothers, and keep them for a year.

I haven't read it yet. I wrote more than 150 chapters from November 2021 to August 2022... I just got too interested.

Writing conspiracy theories in a world like One Punch and One Punch, in a world with a huge upper limit of combat power, one chapter is divided into ten chapters to write about interpersonal relationships, teamwork and rights, and after 100 chapters, it is just an ordinary person. In a bold and bold world like One Punch and One Piece, from the first chapter to the 100th chapter, the pressure is crushing and never relaxed. Really, I can only say that I am sick.

As long as you have an attitude, it won't be like this. There are a lot of people watching.

I was so disappointed. Damn it, I opened it to read, and then I saw that the latest chapter was about the eunuch speaking?

It was originally a stable update, but due to some garbage, it eventually turned into an update out of interest.

Is this the end of the book? Very beautiful

Damn it, I actually finished the book! What's your next step?

Chapter 8 updated in two months. It's really yours. . . Very well written. Why is it always a pigeon? . Even if you take a day off

Woc, are you finished? You are really 6😅

It's really well written, but I don't dare to keep up with the updates.

Damn it, this is the end of the book. You look so bald.