A Certain Hogwarts Cult Leader

To put it bluntly, this book contains neither esoteric Buddhism nor a cult leader; these two concepts are merely shells in the book. Those who came for the esoteric Buddhist worldview can leave now, while Hogwarts fans can stay and enjoy the author's personal touches on the magical world.

Which path will the protagonist choose? The lamp and the cup both need to feed, the casting requires self-immolation, the ghouls need the dead, and there are also priests and dancers…

Extremely delicate and wonderful. The characters and scenes are vividly portrayed. The style of the cheat is quite natural, without much of an abruptness. Congratulations 👏👏👏 Since the success of the bathroom master, More and more authors are willing to experiment with delicate and complex writing styles.

I liked the beginning, but I almost gave up when the girl got kidnapped. The plot was too bloated and chaotic. Things started happening one after another before school even started, giving no time to breathe. It lacked any of the fun of reading fanfiction. And since it's before school starts, meaning before the main story even begins, a whole bunch of events come crashing down on us.

I haven't seen how Manshu develops; it's all just mundane, realistic stuff, and all sorts of riddles. It feels like I'm watching but not really understanding anything. Is the protagonist no longer leveling up? Is Manshu no longer developing? I've been confused ever since Yin Delaixi was captured.

This is a story about building Manor step by step in the world of Hogwarts, so it doesn't have the mysterious atmosphere of the cult worldview at the beginning. However, as the plot unfolds and the impact deepens, everything will eventually be revealed. I want to write a story that most readers can understand. So please stop asking me if there will be other deities or other named individuals!

The beginning was actually quite good. As a result, the pace of life got too fast later on, and a bunch of messy things happened before I even started school. A world consciousness emerged not long after starting school and beginning campus life. Then they directly started a dungeon... And it was an absurdly long dungeon. Tantric Buddhism is rarely mentioned directly anymore.

Don't dig such a huge hole. The world's will has already appeared, and dozens of chapters later, subordinates have been captured by the Dark Lord. What is all this? You've only planted a few trees yet, are you even going to improve your character's potential?

I don't like the way this world's will is set up. Really.

The characters in the book are all riddle tellers, as if they're playing a riddle-guessing game at a Lantern Festival. The protagonist is often in a state of not knowing what's happening, what he's doing, or how to deal with the situation next. I suggest you stop using the "mental breakdown" writing style. Stop writing whatever comes to mind; with so many side plots, how are you going to fill in the plot holes?