A Certain Hogwarts Cult Leader

To put it bluntly, there is neither a secret sect nor a leader in this book. These two concepts are only a shell in this book. Comrades who came here for the esoteric world view can leave, but those from Hogwarts can still stay and see the author's private life in the magical world.

Which path will the protagonist choose? Lamps and cups both need people, casters need to burn themselves, ghouls need dead people, priests and dancers...

Very delicate and wonderful, the characters and scenes are lifelike, the plug-in style is quite natural and not too abrupt, Congratulations 👏👏[fn=63 ] Since the success of Lord of the Bathroom, more and more authors are willing to try delicate and complicated writing styles, and are willing to try to fill in daily life to enhance the serious and immersive feeling. This is good news for old bookworms. Speaking of which, there have been many excellent HP fan works recently. In addition to this book, there are also Hogwarts: The Dark Arts Awakening, I was chosen by Grindelwald and went to Hogwarts The days of drawing cards at Hogwarts, Fortunately, the main plot is in Hogwarts (currently discontinued) These few books, I would like to call you the new generation of HP fans, the Four Heavenly Kings~ Manual funny. Why don't the five writers just become friends with each other and have sex? The works will be updated together. Whoever docks his tail first will be the dog. 🐶

I liked it at the beginning, but when I saw the young lady being kidnapped, I kind of gave up. The plot was too bloated and messy. Things happened one after another before school started, without giving any chance to breathe. There was no fun in reading fan fiction. Moreover, school hasn't started yet, which means you haven't entered the story yet. The main plot events of the book are just thrown at me. If these events were written during the summer vacation after school starts, I may be more accepting. But now the prologue part (for HP fans, I think it is considered a prologue before school starts, and the main story begins after school starts) is so bloated and messy that it is difficult to have the desire to continue reading.

I didn't see how Mansu developed. It was all trivial things in reality, and there were all kinds of Riddlers. It seemed like I had watched it but didn't understand it. Isn't the protagonist's level up? Is Mansu no longer developing? Ever since Yindelaixi was taken away, he has been unable to understand. I like to watch the protagonist upgrade and use his abilities to surprise others, and I also like to watch the plot where the protagonist makes others respect and surprise him in Mansu. But there is nothing behind it. Off topic. The protagonist seems dispensable now.

This is a story about building a Mansu step by step in the world of Hogwarts, so there is no mysterious atmosphere in the esoteric world view at the beginning. But as the plot progresses step by step and the impact deepens step by step, everything will be revealed. I wanted to write a story that would be accessible to most readers. So, don't ask me again if there will be other Si Chens, other signatories! Now there is only one woodland in Mansu, why do you need so many? I have a huge headache! The protagonist hasn't even finished first grade yet! Finally, thank you to all readers for supporting this book!

The beginning is obviously very good But in the end, the pace is too fast and there are a lot of nonsense without going to school. After going to school, campus life did not take long to create a sense of the world Then I opened the dungeon directly, and it was still a ridiculously long dungeon Basically, the Esoteric Cult was rarely mentioned directly I wanted to see the campus life at Hogwarts and it became the teaching of the history of magic It was really interesting. . Let's wait until the copy is over.

Don't dig such a big hole. The world's will has come out. In dozens of chapters, the subordinates were directly captured by the Dark Lord. What's this? You only planted a few trees, and your sex status has not been improved yet.

I don't like the setting of this world's will. Real.

The characters in the book are all in the Riddler. This is a guessing game during the Lantern Festival. The protagonist is often in a situation where he doesn't know what's going on, what he's doing, and how to deal with it next. I suggest you stop trying to write a mental breakdown. Don't write where you think. There are so many branch lines, how do you fill in the pit?