Galaxy Beyonder

I haven't read it yet. I thought it was a fan of Emperor of the Galaxy when I saw the name. I looked at the catalog and found that it doesn't look like it. Wait, let me take a look first and then comment.

The early stage is indeed okay, but the later stage is nothing. It just feels messy. .

You are not suitable for writing light novels. Lina is so embarrassed.

It would be nice if we didn't have this heroine, but it's a pity that it's tasteless to eat and it's a pity to throw it away. Come on!

I don't understand what some people think. They always give negative reviews to the author. Every novel has more or less shortcomings. If you like it, keep reading, and if you don't like it, you can just leave. They always give negative reviews to the author, and the reasons are very childish. Either because the protagonist has a sister, or there is a problem with the protagonist's character, or it's a harem novel or a single heroine. There are always reasons to give a negative review. Every novel is not the same. It is impossible for every novel to be what you want to read! It's true that if a book has too many negative reviews, it will greatly affect the final direction of the book!

I prefer to watch this mode of the heavens, which is very similar to the Daoji. I like it even more if the background is the interstellar era. Come on, the update is too slow 😭😭😭

​​This book, the copy it writes can directly become a god! Surpassing more than 90% of wireless streams, the copy is very beautiful. The Immortal Xuan Zaowang is really beautiful, and it is very good with "Infinite Brilliance Picture Scroll". The world view is also very good, but there is a serious problem. Starting from writing about Lina, it has almost turned into a romance novel, just like a light novel. I wonder if the author has been changed. Come on, author (I am a student, I can only subscribe to the first few chapters)

The biggest failure, the death of my sister

Things have gotten better since the Xian Xuan Zai Wang chapter. The previous part was always a bit boring. I like to watch the original Zhu Tian Liu. The author strives to become the first chapter of the second Dao Ji.

Good guy, I saw this kind of writing in the Qidian 2D area 10 years ago. It's a partial stream-of-consciousness writing style purely for the sake of love.

I can't stand it anymore. One is that Lina has to write things she doesn't know how to write. The other is that the later plot is too boring.

You need to pin two good reviews to the top, otherwise the first thing you see when you click on the homepage of this book is the two negative review posts of a girl who started with one girl, which will probably dissuade most people.

I feel that the dungeon is much more interesting than the main world

It's not very good to write after it's put on the shelf. . Forget it, come on, author.

Except for a few useless sisters, the rest of the writing is quite good.

The author now feels that he is generating electricity for love

Do you know the author? There is a big shortcoming in your work, that is, it is not detailed enough. The type of your work is different from others, it requires certain details, and the description of some characters and scenes needs to be clearer, otherwise it will feel fake, just like in Shuiwen. You can read other novels of a similar type to yours, and you will find the difference between yours and theirs.

It's obviously a powerful horse, but there are always unexpected surprises on the human side. The higher the egg is, the more useful it is. The plug-in is just invisible.

What a pity. Can the author send out the outline? , Should we take the path of civilization master or transcendence source master?

It's a pity that I still haven't seen the ending of this book.

It's a pity, it seems that the author doesn't know how to write it.